- cut to Ben at the Death Star ruins. Leia calls to him. Han appears. Kylo throws away the saber. We hear Luke. “I’m sorry.” He leaves in the TIE.
Are you planning on having this only be Leia’s voice? Personally I think it could be distracting if we see her suddenly in a different location wearing different clothes.
It sounds really good and simple enough to understand. My ‘The End Edition’ of TLJ is something of a similar edit and it was hard to find a super satisfying way to wrap up Kylo’s story
Sweet! Glad to have your stamp of approval lol. I also love your edit, btw. You did a great job! Did you do the shot with the Luke-only force ghost? That was awesome.
I did. I really appreciate that! I could never get Rey burying the two halves of Luke’s saber to work properly but if you manage that it would be really cool to combine our two effects shots!
It sounds really good and simple enough to understand. My ‘The End Edition’ of TLJ is something of a similar edit and it was hard to find a super satisfying way to wrap up Kylo’s story
I’d cut from Ben’s face to Rey’s and add the force time sound effect if possible. I think it would get the idea across
How are you planning on ordering the ending with this scene?
How’s this for a rough version of Kylo’s haunting?
https://vimeo.com/418754884
PW: fanedit
This looks really awesome! I can’t wait to see the finished edit wow
This sounds awesome! I’d love to see a link when it’s done
Hit me up with a link please! 😄
- Added Leia training with Luke as a flashback, as per rocknroll41’s suggestion. This uses Leia’s purple saber by skenera
- Removed all references to Kylo being named Supreme Leader
(…)- Removed the First Order storming the base. The last we see of Kylo is him screaming in defeat
- Removed Rey meeting Poe Dameron. Just feels like setup
- Removed Rey and Leia’s lines about “rebuilding the Rebellion”
- Added both the Star Destroyer montage and Rey at the Skywalker home from TROS
- Removed Leia’s ghost from the end of TROS
I think you should have left Kylo being name Supreme leader and storming the base scenę, or part of it at least, when he grabs the lucky dice of His dad. Making him the Supreme leader for like one day Just to lose it all, would even make His failure more complete and tragical. And the moment the dice dissapear his from His hand could be the moment he truly realizes he Just lost and that Luke was right.
About Rey meeting Poe, i wouldnt consider it a set up necesarily. For me its Just the moment they finally meet After first 2 films. Its like “finally”.
I m also wondering if its possible to change rebuilding the Rebellion into rebuilding the Republic 😉About the ending, did you consider maybe using the idea from the other thread, with the gang being on the Falcon playing chess (from the beggining of the TROS)?
I still havent watched the fanedit So Just out of curiosity, where did you introduce the flashback? 😃
Anyway, i Just rewatched TLJ yesterday and yeah, i think this movie could actually work better as the Last Episode than TROS. So much.
Your first two suggestions I had kept in when first showing friends and they just didn’t quite work for me, though I may still try to reincorporate some of the last Kylo scene in V2.
The chess idea sounds good and I’ll see how well I can get it to fit!
I put the flashback just when Luke and Leia connect through the force
Well does the job and I can’t fault it on a technical level…if there’s one thing I’d change is that the “rebellion is reborn today” line could be cut, unless you were trying to indicate the rebellion rose up and quickly brought the rest of the First Order to heel…there’s nothing to really rebel against with Snoke gone and Kylo proving to be a feeble obstacle. Might as well just say “I will not be the last jedi”.
Other than that, it’s very good, shows how needless ROS really is, and we’re better without it.
Thanks for the kind words! I did try to take out the rebellion line but it just didn’t flow right and I didn’t think keeping it was too distracting when I watched it again. I may give it another go around in V2
Nice work! I think you did a really good job accomplishing your goal of making TLJ feel like the conclusion of the saga. I really like the moment where you added the TRoS flashback of Luke and Leia training, and seeing Leia with a purple saber felt really “refreshing.” Thanks again for taking my idea into consideration! 😃
Thank you! And thanks for the idea. I’m glad I could help provide a bit of entertainment.
V1 is done and in the internets! PM if interested
UPDATE: I’m encoding V1 of the film as we speak. I’ll upload it shortly thereafter. Expect it to be up in the next 24 hours. Just a reminder that this edit currently using HAL9000’s Legendary edition as a base any credit for the overall improvement of the film goes to him.
Nice! Just out of curiosity, did you add the Luke and Leia training scene from TRoS to explain Leia’s Saber? Or are you just going to leave that as a loose end, for now?
I did and I think it works really well! I ended up borrowing skenera’s purple lightsaber for it and I credited both of you in the changes list.
UPDATE: I’m encoding V1 of the film as we speak. I’ll upload it shortly thereafter. Expect it to be up in the next 24 hours. Just a reminder that this edit currently using HAL9000’s Legendary edition as a base any credit for the overall improvement of the film goes to him.
I completely understand, that’s good to hear about the conservative cut. Is there going to be multiple versions?
There very likely will! 😄
Hey I have an idea @adobewan !
Instead of going through the trouble of trying to edit Leia’s Saber out the epilogue, just add the flashback of her and Luke training together during the bit when Luke is opening himself back up to the force (on the cliff at night)… Or maybe just after he sees the hologram of her that R2 plays. Make it look as if it’s Luke himself experiencing that flashback.
EDIT: forgot to mention earlier that, in order for this to work, the narration Luke does during that training sequence would obviously have to be removed. It would have to be just a silent sequence, with music.
I suppose it could be left to the audience to conclude in their heads that Leia did some training, and then left to focus on rebuilding the Republic.
I really appreciate the suggestion. That’s the best idea I’ve heard for this aspect of the film so far. I’ll give it a shot and see how it comes out!
Glad I could help! Hope it goes well!
I also have an idea for what you could do with broom kid:
During the sequence when all the star destroyers are falling, keep all the music the same, but get rid of cloud city, so that the only planets from that sequence we see are Endor and Jakku, and then in the space where Jakku used to be, add the close-up shot of broom kid’s hand with the rebel ring on it, followed by the close-up of his face smiling, and then followed by the final wide shot of him looking at the stars (and fade to black there, just as the music ends). The Tattooine epilogue can then immediately follow that!
Broom Boy likely won’t be in V1 but I’ll give this a shot when I’m working on V2 and see how well I can get it to work
How’s progress going? 😃
Hey sorry for the lack of updates as of late. Progress has been slow the last week due to issues surrounding the virus. I hope to resume tomorrow. The first, more conservative cut is essentially finished
Hey I have an idea @adobewan !
Instead of going through the trouble of trying to edit Leia’s Saber out the epilogue, just add the flashback of her and Luke training together during the bit when Luke is opening himself back up to the force (on the cliff at night)… Or maybe just after he sees the hologram of her that R2 plays. Make it look as if it’s Luke himself experiencing that flashback.
EDIT: forgot to mention earlier that, in order for this to work, the narration Luke does during that training sequence would obviously have to be removed. It would have to be just a silent sequence, with music.
I suppose it could be left to the audience to conclude in their heads that Leia did some training, and then left to focus on rebuilding the Republic.
I really appreciate the suggestion. That’s the best idea I’ve heard for this aspect of the film so far. I’ll give it a shot and see how it comes out!
This is looking fantastic. Sadly no matter how much editing people put into TROS, the only way to end with a genuinely great movie is by doing what you’re doing.
Now you had mentioned having the two halves of Luke’s lightsaber which would be amazing. The link below contains images of a fan made version of the split saber. I’m not technically minded when it comes to this but I feel like the plain backgrounds would make it fairly easy to place into the shots in question with a little work.
I just wish I had the know how to help.
Thanks, I appreciate the support! 😄
UPDATE: I am nearing completion on the audio side of things. I re-scored and re-applied some sound effects to the interior Falcon scene. While I was at it, I touched up effects in the ghost scene at the end. I am about to commence work on the lightsabers shot and attempt to replace Leia’s saber with Luke’s from ROTJ.
Also, as per @Lifeincontext 's recommendation, I re-arranged the Falcon scene to it’s theatrical order of shots.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1gz4M1XZl8IBuOGLyiGuCMYEwXgdil4z0
I definitely miss having the broom kid at the end so I’d like to put that scene back in
I’ve updated the ending of the film and posted a clip in HD. This should give a much better idea at what it will end up looking like. I still need to apply effects to remove Leia’s saber from the final scene and clean up the effects and music in pother places.
Here’s a link for anyone interested. May the force be with you 😄https://drive.google.com/open?id=1-p01gwc6rzOPNUtmRTcJIYIcu75V2Q9c
This is good! A couple of ideas:
I totally get why you rearranged the end scene with everyone on the falcon. You wanted to mark the closure. But I think it might flow better if the order was like the theatrical. I only think this because right now it cuts from Rey to the Falcon to Rey again. Just a thought.
After Leia’s “I felt it too,” why not just fade directly into the ending montage? The slow zoom out on Rey and Leia would work nicely as a transition, I would think.
Have you considered mixing the broom boy with the Rey Skywalker ending? Basically, it would cut from the ending montage to the kids telling the story of Luke, then once the kid starts sweeping and we get that shot of his feet, you would cut to Rey on Tatooine. Then after Rey says “Rey Skywalker,” you’d cut back to broom boy for the final shots. You’d have to adjust the timing of the shots a bit, but I think it might work well. I guess it depends on what you prefer for the ending, I guess. 😃
But I love your ideas!
Man, those are all awesome ideas! I appreciate the support and I’ll see how well I can get that all to flow.
I’ve updated the ending of the film and posted a clip in HD. This should give a much better idea at what it will end up looking like. I still need to apply effects to remove Leia’s saber from the final scene and clean up the effects and music in pother places.
Here’s a link for anyone interested. May the force be with you 😄
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1-p01gwc6rzOPNUtmRTcJIYIcu75V2Q9c
Maybe you could use some where the flashback from TROS with Leia and Luke training?
It could serve as both an explanation of Leias force abbilities like Flying in space and allusion that she will continue reys training.
Not sure where that could fit into the story of TLJ. It’s not in my current cut but I’m open to suggestions!
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1sRpQONcb6qwy3CvHbFSq00lkaPN0yRkK
Here is a very rough look at my removal of Leia’s ghost. It doesn’t look great yet but this shows that it is possible!