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Post
#895974
Topic
Star Wars: A Cloak of Deception
Time

DVD
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In-progress edit of The Phantom Menace

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Download: Soon

List of Changes:

  • Renamed Movie to Naboo Deception
  • Changed Opening Crawl
  • Beginning of the movie is quicker and action-er (is that the right word?)
  • Cut dialogue between droids
  • Queen Amidala’s voice is more squeaky
  • Jedi’s now use short-range teleport on the Droid Control Ship, not Force Speed
  • Removed Obi-Wan’s line “The negotiations were short”
  • Removed several scenes of Gunray on the ship
  • Removed scene of Gunray informing the droids about Jedi
  • Trimmed Jar Jar Binks’s dialogue
  • Removed Jar Jar’s salto into the water
  • Trimmed in-between droid conversation
  • Shortened entrance to Gunga City
  • Shortened dialogue between Qui-Gon and Gungan leader
  • Removed most of the in-unobongo scenes while travelling to Naboo
  • Trimmed Gunray’s dialogue to Amidala
  • Greatly trimmed Jar Jar’s stupid shit during the movie
  • Added one-liner to Obi-Wan when ambushing the droids to compensate for Jar Jar: “Let’s throw these girls a Jedi surprise party”
  • Removed scene of Qui-Gon throwing two droids at a wall
  • Shortened dialogue after droids are taken care off
  • Trimmed dialogue between Qui-Gon and Droid in Hangar
  • Removed Jar Jar scenes during the escape
  • Removed R2D2 being named and commended
  • Removed dialogue between Jar Jar and Padmé
  • Removed all scenes with Darth Sidious
  • Removed Jar Jar stepping in shit
  • Trimmed slapstick in Watto’s shop
  • Anakin’s surname isn’t said anymore throughout the movie
  • Removed mention of Watto being imunne to mind tricks because of his race
  • Removed “Yipee” and trimmed dialogue between Ani and Watto
  • C3PO isn’t reffered by name anymore, nor was he built by Ani
  • Trimmed dinner room dialogue
  • Removed “ITS WORKING, ITS WORKINGGGG”
  • Removed all dialogue spoken by kids on Tatooine
  • Anakin isn’t a virgin birth, but a non-marital birth.
  • Added backdrop music to the hangar scenes
  • Shortened the pod race greatly
  • Less in-pod views during the race
  • No announcer interruptions during the race
  • Removed slapstick during race
  • Added up-beat music to the pod-race
  • Removed Jabba the Hutt
  • Trimmed Anakin’s dialogues with Shmi after winning pod race
  • Removed Anakin talking to C3PO when packing his stuff
  • Re-added a deleted scene to explain why Qui-Gon and Ani are running
  • Trimmed all scenes on Coruscant
  • Removed mentions of midichlorians
  • Removed scene on Anakin being tested, to keep it mystery how Jedi order works.
  • Removed line about Anakin being too old
  • Gungan Leader now rejects Naboo when they ask him for help
  • Radically trimmed Gungan VS Droid battle
  • Anakins actions during finale are no longer accidents, but deliberate
  • Trimmed space battle
  • Darth Maul duel was pieced together, and in turn, made faster and more exciting
  • Obi-Wan kills Darth Maul quicker
  • Trimmed dialogue between Padmé and Gunray
  • Trimmed the ending celebration
  • Digitally replaced every character with Jar Jar Binks
Post
#890371
Topic
Star Wars DVD Covers
Time

I’m trying to put together all of the canon media now, but I will do Clone Wars in future 😃

Few tips for your covers:

I find it pointless to have the STAR WARS be shown on the front like this, because not many people will put them into their shelves with the front side facing out.

The back side should definitely have a STAR WARS logo somewhere.

Palpatine on Episode VI cover is drawn, but the people on the rest of covers are real-life photos. Make Palpy on E6 cover real life too.

Episode VII doesn’t match with the other covers.

Stretch Luke on E4 cover a little bit, so he looks less fat. Apply some Feather effect on the edge, so it looks less sharp, but not too much otherwise you’re going to end up with blurry crap.

The text on the back side is too hard to read. Darken the background.

Rey on E7 cover needs anti-aliasing on edges, maybe a bit of Feather effect. So does Anakin on E3 and Clone Trooper on E2. Both of these have a white sharp outline around them.

You have potential, so keep improving.
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