TK251

I am going to keep BB-8 and who talks first in. I will have a list soon on what I cut and changed

I am just taking some of the comedy elements out I know star wars has always had comedy but this one just a little to much. I plan to have a first draft of the film this weekend and will need a few people to test watch it. It will not have a crawl that says “A New Threat” because I do not know how to make crawls yet. Any help is appreciated

MalàStrana said:

TK251 said:

Poe’s joke stays. I liked that bit

I’ll just have to fan edit your fan edit 😄

Fine by me lol

Poe’s joke stays. I liked that bit

The chewie doctor line is staying in.

Well I plan on keeping those, more like what Finn says “have a boyfriend? Cute boyfriend?” Or maz saying “where’s my boyfriend!” Also I may trim the “Who’s in charge now phasma” a little

Ah, I may cut the first snoke scene. I wanted to try and save the reveal of kylo being hans son for the very end. I may add some extra music in.

Any other ideas for cuts I should consider?

Lord Haseo said:

Other than the weird change in the audio it kind of works. The conversation after the whole Star Killer thing is vague though.

Yeah I am having trouble with it, this is just the draft until I can come up with something better.

Kylo and snoke https://vimeo.com/162012747 password is tfa

So far the edit is 2:14 minuets and 24 seconds including credits. The full film is 2 hours and 18 minuets

Lord Haseo said:

TK251 said:

https://vimeo.com/162007178/ Kylo and lor san teka password is tfa

That’s pretty much exactly what I’m doing minus the “You’re so right”

Now we need to see the scene with Kylo and Snoke talking about Han having BB-8 and the Awakening in The Force. If it’s in there.

I added in the “You’re so right” last minuet. I have a draft of kylo and Snoke. I thought about removing all snoke scenes but it could leave a plot hole.

That is some good music. I do not know where to start on replacing the music though without the other coming through dialog.

Smithers said:

TK251 said:

https://vimeo.com/162007178/ Kylo and lor san teka password is tfa

works very well! I’m excited to see this

Thanks!

I have thought about this. I may leave it how it is but I am thinking of adding new music or trimming it ever so slightly still have not decided yet.

I have thought about it. I may make 2 versions.

https://vimeo.com/162007178/ Kylo and lor san teka password is tfa

Thanks for the Idea. I have cut the deleted scene from my edit and changed the rathtar scene slightly. Next I will upload the scene with lor san teka and kylo that I trimmed.

Here is the trimmed rathtar scene. https://vimeo.com/161999519 password is tfa

https://vimeo.com/161995273 the more I watch this the more I think of taking it out. I am going take it out but feel free to check it out password is tfa

Uploading to vimeo now

Ah good idea. This is my first ever edit so it may not be the greatest ever

Try it now I had it on private

Wow! That was fast. I can still view it hold on.

Kylo deleted scene in my edit https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=erYAUdG-uWk