Master Lawdog

Here are some more alternate covers.

Currently making alternate covers for anyone to use if they prefer different cover art. More will be added later.

Any work done on the revised Mos Eisley yet?

Audiodramalist said:

Hello
Huge fan of Harry Potter and stumbled about on this and was wondering if I could hear these productions??

PM sent!

As of right now, I have completed the first twenty chapters. I’m at least past the halfway point.

I love the idea of fixing the background extra for Mace Windu near the end of The Phantom Menace.

Also, nobody has brought this up, but how would anyone here feel about fixing the look of digitally adding older actors’ faces upon the stuntmen for the Prequels? This was done with both Christopher Lee and Ian McDiarmid. Although there doesn’t seem to be added digital closeups of Dooku, there is a couple for Palpatine that could be fixed.

Also, I think Jarkan managed to improve Shamook’s work on the Luke Skywalker deepfake with the lighting, facial animation and mouth movement.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wk_5QP2NSKM

I think Jarkan managed to improve Shamook’s work on the Luke Skywalker deepfake by improving the lighting, facial animation and mouth movement.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wk_5QP2NSKM

Movies Remastered said:

It seems a little weird that there is a long quiet pause and then Rey says “Stop talking!”
Also, The “Tell me where you are” feels a little weirdly placed.
There’s some audio clipping around 3:00 mark onward through that whole scene.

Yeah, I know about the clipping. I took audio from a sample a user in the Rey Nobody thread used as a pitch and tried mixing it in 5.1. This is just a pitch as well.

Also, Hal said he removed “They sold you to protect you.”

Here is a compilation of scenes for how Rey Nobody can work. Let me know what you all think.

https://vimeo.com/580074316
PASSWORD: fanedit

Here is a compilation I made for the Rey Nobody version. I’ll also post this to that thread. Let me know if it works.

https://vimeo.com/580074316
PASSWORD: fanedit

Does anyone here still have the link to that guy who tried doing an impression of Luke saying that line?

I think the idea of the revelation being that Rey is destined to take the Sith throne and kill Palpatine is much better. Also, I believe that some lines still can be used. I’ll try posting a compilation of how the scenes can play out.

Okay, here is just a test sample to get an impression from everyone. I think someone here who is much better at audio manipulation than I am can probably get it to sound much more natural.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1r-sCbw_TQmKS-d6xQ_vzCL-2CNKc4CCO/view

I’ll try getting my attempt out as soon as possible.

If anyone is still interested in my attempt, I’m not the best editor in terms of manipulation to audio, but I took Luke’s line, “I’m going to burn it all down,” took “burn” and cut off the last part to mix it in with the “th” part in “death of her son.”

I just updated my editing software, and it will take some getting used to. Sorry about that late reply.

Okay, I think there might be a way to do it. I’m not the best at this, but I looked at Luke’s lines in The Last Jedi. I took the word “burn” from “I’m going to burn it all down” and “myth” from “But if your strip away the myth and look at their deeds, the legacy of the Jedi is failure.”

If someone can try smoothening this out, we could get “birth” in there somewhere.

DZ-330 said:

Master Lawdog said:

Because during the flashback where Luke was training her, the twins were still young, and it is very likely that Ben had not been born at that point. By having Leia end her Jedi training to focus on being a mother, it would make sense to lay down her lessons from Luke. It also makes it seem Ben chose to die rather than it being destined to be.

What if…

Luke: “It was the last night of her training. Leia told me that she had sensed the death of her son at the end of her Jedi path. She surrendered her saber to me and said that one day… it would be picked up again… by someone who would finish her journey. We’ll always be with you, but this is your fight.”

Leia quits being a Jedi, because as it has been explained numerous times, she never wanted to be one. Leia wanted to focus on politics and then dumped her son on Luke later on to train. What if we just make that line about Leia realizing that, being a Jedi is not for her, and someone else would eventually take her spot. In my opinion, it makes her taking on Rey as a trainee even stronger as she believes Rey would be her successor as a Jedi. Just food for thought!

You know what, that could actually work.

DZ-330 said:

Can someone help explain to me why “Leia told me she had sensed the birth of her son” is an improvement? To me, having someone close to you die is more of a reason to cease and desist than having a child being born. Can a mom not be a Jedi too?

Not trying to be rude, I’m just curious how this line change is viewed as an improvement?

Because during the flashback where Luke was training her, the twins were still young, and it is very likely that Ben had not been born at that point. By having Leia end her Jedi training to focus on being a mother, it would make sense to lay down her lessons from Luke. It also makes it seem Ben chose to die rather than it being destined to be.

Has anyone here heard back from jonh? I feel like it’s been quite a while. I would love for him to export V3 of his Force ghost sequence to us.

Also, I was thinking of giving Luke’s line, “Leia told me she had sensed the birth of her son” a try using the same process they used to get Alec Guinness to say “Rey.” I’ll look through Mark Hamill’s career in voice acting to see if there’s a plausible way to do so.

parris1000 said:

Hi Master Lawdog,
I’d love a link please. This sounds awesome. Similar to Phil Dagrash’s Lord of the Rings

PM sent.

antani said:

A very good and enticing way to listen to the audiobooks and enter into the World of Hogwarts!

Definetly recommend these edits!

Bravo for the work!

Thank you very much, antani.

rquinlan1001 said:

How many chapters you got done so far?

Currently working on Chapter 18.

Is it decided that the Sith scream used in the trailer for Revenge of the Sith will be used when Palpatine explodes at the end? Sherlock Potter did the mock-up a while back.

I think the line, “You’re just a clone,” would be welcome, but I understand that it’s not a necessary requirement.

Neerb said:

Master Lawdog said:

I feel like we’re getting close to V2 being done.

Between jonh’s ghosts & haircut, the unstable lightsaber blade, and the puppet show, I think it’s still going to be a while before V2. Unless Hal is itching to get a v1.5 out.

I suppose you’re right.