Anyone else think Krennic saying “I will not fail” seems kinda lame and too on the nose? Wouldn’t it be cooler if he just glanced at Tarkin and stormed off?
Thank you for the information. I would like to help with story beats.
Mon says they need Jyn to testify in front of the Senate. After watching Andor it doesn’t make much sense.
All good!
I suggested something like that earlier in the thread:
Mon suggests Galen will testify to the Senate, but given the events of Andor, what’s the point of this?
“…maybe some AI can be used to extend Mon’s line. It could be added over when the room gets silent to look at Bail Organa and notcing he looks different from how he did in Andor 😄
“and return him to the Senate for testimony. People will wake up when truth is restored to that chamber.”
that’s also a good idea.
Just skimmed through the ending again, there’s n attempt at the end when Jyn and Andor are in the elevator going down to showcase that they might be romantically engaged. That whole scene can be removed to them exiting the elevator going towards the beach. Since taking away the impact of Bix on Andor and even Vel mentioning that he should see Bix would be dumb.
Vader scenes are a must imo.
not really, I despise the ending with Vader. It’s shoehorning in pure fan service and takes away the flow from the sacrifice of Andor and Jyn at the beach. Having Vader only appear in Episode 4 would be way more impactful. As Vader’s slaughtering style in the hallway is way too jarring compared to his style in EP4. Focus should be on Andor with Jyn kind of a side character.
Could I get a link to the current edit please?
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Thank you for the information. I would like to help with story beats.
For example, when Jyn first meets Mon on Yavin 4. Mon says they need Jyn to testify in front of the Senate. After watching Andor it doesn’t make much sense due to Mon fleeing from the senate and if Jyn was escorted by Bail with would make zero sense.
Could I get a link to the current edit please?