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LILIAN02230

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#1273506
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THE FORCE AWAKENS (direct connection with THE LAST JEDI)
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My plan for this montage is slightly inspired by HAL9000’s plan for the Battle of Takodana and the Battle of Starkiller Base, the film will be partially rescored and modified to stick with TLJ, at the end of the film you will see the Raddus and his cruiser escort in the air as the Falcon takes off from the rebel base of D’Qar !
The only drawback: I only work with a TRUEFRENCH master, because I am French and I would have a lot of difficulty in making you a version in English since I am not bilingual (even if I watch programs in VO with subtitles), I am sure that among you there will be someone who will be interested in watching the changes of this film. Tell yourself that I look at your montages without any discomfort whatsoever, since I know the lines by heart!

  • Many VFX shots have been added in different parts of the movie you will be pleasantly surprised by these new scenes!
  • The opening scene is an alternative version of JJ Abrams on which we see a damaged imperial cruiser escorted into Jakku orbit by cruisers similar to the Tantive IV of ANH, once it is placed on the right trajectory, the cruisers go into hyperspace and the destroyer crashes on Jakku, then the film continues with Rey in the wreck. (This reveals why Jakku is a dump and also the interest in having wreck looters who continue to prowl around in order to survive. NB: scene where a TIE crashes and looters rush on it)
  • The scene of the attack on the village takes place after meeting Rey on Jakku who looted wrecks and sold his recovered parts to Unkar.
  • The arrival of the First Order troops is more intense with music reflecting the imperial theme
  • Lor San Teka’s dialogue about the Jedi is cut off.
  • LST’s death is faster
  • After Finn was reprimanded by Phasma, the scene continues directly with Poe’s scene, which is interrogated by Kylo Ren
  • After Kylo got the information of the location of the card in BB8, the movie follows on Rey in his AT-AT who is preparing his dinner.
  • In my version, Rey does not refuse BB8’s presence, I find that strange since she is alone while the company of a droid would not hurt her since she lives in a great loneliness.

I will share with you other changes soon

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#1262737
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STAR WARS EPISODE I: SHADOW OF THE SITH (TPM/AOTC MIX) NEW PREQUEL FAN EDIT TRILOGY
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Smithers said:

LILIAN02230 said:

Yes I agree, I always had the impression that the two films could have been linked to this narrative thread, I intend to introduce the beginning of the clone war using images from Battlefront II, I must try to use them successfully because I don’t have many images for the Battle of Naboo except those from TPM

Cool idea, maybe some cutscenes could be used in a montage or something.

Tell me, would you be willing to send me one of the excerpts from your TPM edit with the Naboo starfighters melting on the separatist warship? If you would agree, I would credit you on my change list because this plan could greatly help me to ensure the cohesion of the space battle, thank you

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#1262731
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STAR WARS EPISODE I: SHADOW OF THE SITH (TPM/AOTC MIX) NEW PREQUEL FAN EDIT TRILOGY
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I plan to keep the main plot of AOTC, except that I plan to remove some passages from the romance between Anakin and Padme, then when they go to Tatooine I plan to remove the scene with Wattoo and go straight to the Lars and when Anakin meets her mother in agony I will not show her fury on the sand people, just her sadness to go to the farewell scene.

Meanwhile Naboo is invaded by the separatist alliance, Padme will not be informed because of her cover so that she will not be found.

I also plan to partially remove the battle of Geonosis because the scene of the arena I find it really badly executed and not very credible, Anakin and Padme will not be on Geonosis, the final battle will be the beginning of the clone wars, the release of Naboo will be the “happy” end, ending with the marriage of Anakin and Padme

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#1261907
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STAR WARS EPISODE I: SHADOW OF THE SITH (TPM/AOTC MIX) NEW PREQUEL FAN EDIT TRILOGY
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Yes I agree, I always had the impression that the two films could have been linked to this narrative thread, I intend to introduce the beginning of the clone war using images from Battlefront II, I must try to use them successfully because I don’t have many images for the Battle of Naboo except those from TPM

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#1261834
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STAR WARS EPISODE I: SHADOW OF THE SITH (TPM/AOTC MIX) NEW PREQUEL FAN EDIT TRILOGY
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My idea for the opening crawl:

STAR WARS
EPISODE I:
SHADOW OF THE SITH

« After several centuries of peace, the Sith are returning and fear reigns in thousands of planetary systems that threaten to leave the Galactic Republic.

Faced with this separatist movement, the Supreme Chancellor Palpatine convened an assembly to vote to create an Army of the Republic to help the Jedi Knights, guardian of peace and justice.

Refusing a trade agreement with the treacherous Nute Gunray of the Trade Federation, Senator Amidala, former Queen of Naboo, is facing reprisals by going to the top of the Galactic Senate on the planet Coruscant… »

What do you think?

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#1261751
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STAR WARS EPISODE I: SHADOW OF THE SITH (TPM/AOTC MIX) NEW PREQUEL FAN EDIT TRILOGY
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I have an idea to use Nute Gunray who wants to assassinate Padme by recruiting a bounty hunter, the beginning of the film will start as AOTC, at some point in act 2 when Padme and Anakin leave Naboo to go to Tatooine I plan to insert the invasion of Naboo by the separatist alliance there.

I would cut the murder of the sand men so that Anakin doesn’t look like a monster by being barely Padawan, everyone knows he will become Vader at the end ☺️

The film will be rebuilt and may even surprise you given the important change it will undergo, I will try to put some excerpts on Vimeo very soon ☺️

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#1260351
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STAR WARS EPISODE I: SHADOW OF THE SITH (TPM/AOTC MIX) NEW PREQUEL FAN EDIT TRILOGY
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In the hope that this project will interest many fans, I plan to combine the narration of the prelogy to form a new trilogy, more intense, faster and above all LESS ENNUYOUS one.

Before I share my ideas for change with you, I would also like to try to bring together several of your potential ideas to meet everyone’s expectations.

I look forward to your proposals

/PREVIEW COMING SOON\

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#1258677
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STARGATE RESTRUCTURED (1994 MOVIE FANCUT)
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Good morning, everyone,

I’ve been a fan of the film Stargate since I was 6/7 years old, now I’m 19 and being passionate about editing, I had the idea to restructure this film so that it would adapt properly to the atmosphere of the SG1 TV series, for which I’m also a fan.

My project is not to make an extra extended cut but a partially revisited film.

Here is my list of important changes to my edit:

⁃ The edit will be in French version 

⁃ Sound effects from the SG1 series (death glider, stargate sounds, jaffa weapon) have been added to better match the atmosphere of the series. 

⁃ Promotional material plans and cut scenes have been added to the montage 

⁃ A new colorization of the film has been made 

⁃ Several scenes and dialogues have been cut off for a better narration and a good rhythm sequence 

⁃ Pieces of scenes from the web series ORIGINS have been added to the editing 

⁃ The Introduction  is more faster with some shots of the Stargate from promotional material and new soundtrack 

⁃ The Giza scenes were moved further in the film to create the mystery around the stargate 

⁃ After the introduction, follow up with the scene where O'Neil is reassigned to active duty.

⁃ Transition / Scene where Jackson is in conference on the mystery of the Great Pyramids.

⁃ Insertion of a plan of the Cheyenne Mountain base (SG1 series)

⁃ Addition of the scene where O'Neil observes the fossilized bodies of the Horus guards.

⁃ For me in the story, Catherine knows O'Neil and their discussions in the base corridor seem more authentic.

⁃ A flashback of the discovery of the stargate is introduced just before the opening.

⁃ The departure of the exploration team has been modified from the original version, in my assembly, the technicians and the general leave from the base just before the crossing of the stargate.

⁃ There is less tension with Daniel when he announces that he needs more time for the exploration team 

⁃ Daniel's narrative on Ra's story has been modified to match with the Goa'uld symbiotes, some shots of the cut scene where the host is being removed have been added.

⁃ The scene where Jack is thrown in a well with the other team members was cut off 

⁃ The death glider attack on Nagada has been severely wounded to punctuate the scene and illustrate Ra's wrath

⁃ The rhythm of the scene where Daniel must perform his team in public in front of the temple of Ra, has been slightly modified.

⁃ The scene of the leak to the cavern has been added and slightly cut to the right and left so as not to show Jackson fainting. 

⁃ The scenes where Ra blames his men have been grouped into a single scene 

⁃ The rhythm of the final battle is more refined and in line with the course of the battle. 

⁃ Ra receives the bomb that explodes directly into his ship, leaving him no time to do anything. 

⁃ The plans where Ra turns into Alien have been removed.

⁃ Several cuts or modifications have been made without me specifying them all in this list, hoping that you will like some surprises. 

Ask me in a private message if you’re interested.

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#1256902
Topic
STARGATE 1994 MOVIE FAN EDIT
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Here is my list of changes (for the moment)

  • the introductory scene of the host of Ra being mysteriously kidnapped

  • The credits with alternative music composed by David Arnold for the film

  • The scene where researchers discover the fossilized remains of Goa’uld soldiers in 1928 when the Stargate was discovered

  • Catherine ORIGINS plot, I want to make her character mysterious and leave her for “dead” without giving an answer before she recruits Dr Jackson, after the scene where Oneil is reassigned to active duty

  • Replacement of the military base view plan by the Cheyenne Mountain view plan visible later in the SG-1 series

    • Colonel Jack Oneil observing the remains of soldiers discovered in 1928
  • A lot of sound effects will be changed to match those of the series (death glider, jaffa weapon staff, opening of the helmets of Ra soldiers, etc…)

(Sorry for my bad english, i’m french 😅)