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- Alien 3 - Third Cut (Released)
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I would like to have a link as well. š
I would like to have a link as well. š
Hey Thanos, I would love to have a link aswell. š Cheers!
I would like to have a link as well. š
I would love to get a link as well. š
I would be interested as well, as soon as the current cut is available! š
Yet another thing Iād love to see in the film (I put it in my novelization) but isnāt exactly feasible based on our available materials.
Keep these ideas coming everyone. Iām (kinda) purposely holding off on purchasing Elevenlabs again until Iām sure itās just the Poe lines we are changing.
One thing that still bothers me is the ending dialogue of Lando and Jannah. I get what they were trying to do, but the needed build up to pull this off is pretty much non existent and the delivery from Lando comes off as creepy.
I donāt really have an idea how to fix that, with the few material there is, but maybe someone else has an idea how a Lando AI line could improve their dialogue, maybe hinting more towards this āthey could be relativesā idea? š
Hi smudger9,
Wow, this edit really saved The Book of Boba Fett for me! This is now my go to for Mando āseason 2.5ā for sure.
It feels like it was always meant to be this way (although it probably wasnāt) and makes the story so so much better set up. Besides the obvious cuts, that favor the edit - less of the mods, less of Bobaās incompetence as a gangster boss - I really like the back and forth between the Din and Boba storylines. Especially the choice to open and close the movie with Din makes it more like a Mandalorian movie, where Boba plays an important part than the half-assed Boba Fett show that midway decides to follow Din again, because heās more interesting.
Although I liked the integration of Grogu in the final battle in the original, I agree that it flows better to not have him there. And maybe his powers were a little bit too strong in that fight in the first place. Anyways, I wouldāve never imagined that Grogu could be cut out soo seamlessly - I even opened the original a few times to check, what you have done to make it look this smooth! š The ending was expertly crafted as well. The decision to put Groguās jedi training to the end and then end the movie felt super satisfying.
Awesome work!
Hi smudger9,
great edit again! Although my heart wouldāve wanted to keep the battle between Ahsoka and the Magistrate and the entirety of the mission on Morak, after having watched your edit I definitely understand the reasoning. Itās a little bit odd how the season itself again and again finds reasons for Din to be sidetracked, something I didnāt notice that much when watching the season week after week when it aired. But especially the beloved chapter 15 has only the purpose to find Moff Gideonās coordinates, so I guess thatās not really a lot in terms of the broader storyline.
Iām especially impressed how your cutting choices from Mando episode 1 to 2 align. This is true for the Mayfeld storyline (introduction in Episode 1 was cut and then the mission on Morak) and the reappearing Mythrol (chapter 1 and chapter 12 cut in their respective edits). For someone without knowledge of the original series this would work really smoothly, I suspect. Speaking of chapter 12 (āthe siegeā) cut, the cloning lore might be important for later seasons, but this was such a short bit in the whole episode, that it probably will be possible to recap that when it comes up again.
One thing that bugs me a little bit is the story behind the beskar spear. When the Razorcrest is destroyed and only the spear survives it seems like something important, that is not really explained. Maybe it just bugs me because I know the story behind the spear and the hypothetical first time viewer wouldnāt notice anything off. But I was wondering if the scene where the Magistrate hands Din the spear could be reinstated with cutting off after the line ākill the Jedi and itās yoursā. The assumption then could be, that itās some kind of payment up front - although probably unusal for her character - or the tool to do the killing, since Din mentioned how hard it is to kill a Jedi.
On the technical side I, too, noticed the sound problems in loud scenes. For example at 1:46:10, but the whole battle before and after this suffers in varying degrees from the problem. The ending at 2:36:20 is another example, where the sound gets muddy.
But again: I really enjoyed this, awesome work! š
Hi smudger9,
as others said before me: Very well made edit! Alhtough Iām a huge fan of Mandalorian Season 1, I really liked what you did with it.
I always liked the opening sequence with the Mythrol, but I totally agree, that itās not necessary to include in the story. Same goes for other parts that were cut - overall the story flows really well that way!
The inclusion of the Jawas and therefore the longer Mudhorn sequence adds the needed bonding time for Mando and Grogu, something I felt was missing in previous versions of this edit. Also special thumbs up for the Boba Fett scenes. The inclusion here feels really natural and gives a better feeling of where Boba is at that time. I think the payoff in Mandalorian episode 3 therefore is a lot better, since we follow Boba much earlier in your edits.
Awesome work, highly recommended!
Sounds great so far! Would you send me the link as well? š
Hey Spence, I finished viewing your edit today and am very very pleased with the result. š Overall the pacing was just enormously better, the movie felt more dynamic and action packed. For me it was just the right amount and mixture of faster scences and a little breathing room in between. Definitely my go to viewing experience for now, if I want to see the story of Obi-Wan again! Great work!
The highlights:
The things I stumbled upon:
If thereās ever a version 2 I would be happy to watch it again, but even now itās just a fun ride overall watching your edit. Thanks for the hard work, much appreciated! š
I need translations of the following lines into German, Italian, Dutch, Portugeuse, French, and Spanish for the āRey Nobodyā cut, if anyone can render these.
- He saw what you would become.
- You wonāt just have power. Youāll have his power.
- You will kill Palpatineā¦
- And take the throne.
- I feel the pull to the lightā¦
- And you, the darkness.
- Together, nothing will stand in our way.
Hi Hal, I would be glad to translate the lines into German! For context, it would be great, though, to know where all those lines appear in the movie.
Do you - or does anyone else - have at least a broad timestamp (or scene) direction to guide me to? š
This Polygon article provides an interesting interpretation angle to the series: Boba is not an incompetent hero, he is a villain, that just doesnāt care. š https://www.polygon.com/star-wars/22929592/book-of-boba-fett-hero-vs-villain
I wonder if that would work as a way to emphasize his characterization in a fanedit as well.
Also, it would be easy to trim out Rey and Poeās little meetcute at the end of the movie. They do appear like four feet away from each other at the end of TFA. I canāt remember if this was ever considered.
For my part I always liked this mostly for Poeās knowing āI know.ā I doubt Rey would have introduced herself to him at the end of TFA with what she had going on, but sheās a big deal in the Resistance.
I somehow felt like the argument between Rey and Poe at the beginning of TROS, where Finn needs to mediate, plays into this as well. Finn has an established relationship to both of them at this point, but Rey and Poe hadnāt had the chance to build a real friendship so far. So this quarrel is less a crack in their friendship, but more a result of them trying to figure out their working relationship.
Although I agree, when watching TLJ it feels a little bit weird to be reminded, that they havenāt met so far. But atleast in my headcanon the TROS conflict was kind of a payoff to this TLJ scene, so it somehow made sense.
I would like to have a link, please! š
I noticed another subtitle error: in the hangar revelation scene the subtitles donāt reflect the change of Kyloās sentence about the dyad. When he says, theyāve ābecomeā a dyad in the force, the subtitles still state that they āareā a dyad.
That being said, I finished the rerun of all the sequel movies yesterday with my wife and we highly enjoyed every one of them! Especially the cleaned up motivations of Palpatine, Kylo and Rey were so much better in v2, even so that my wife - who only watched v1 with me one time last year - noticed it as one of the best things about this edit! When v1 let me made my peace with the movie itself, the extra work for v2 let me made my peace with the idea of Rey Palpatine. So thank you everyone, who participated here - it is truly an awesome achievement in fan editing, turning one - if not the most - disappointing cinema experience in my life into a thoroughly enjoyable one!
I would love to get a link as well! š
I would love to see Season 1 aswell! Any chance I can get a PM? š
Hey Bobson, great idea and great execution as well! I remember the DVD specials back in the day to be very fragmented and scattered all over different and rather exhausting animated menus (the early days of the DVD were like that, I guess). So seeing them all together in one streamlined documentary is a really cool thing. š I started watching the first episode this morning and followed with parts 2, 3 and 4 immediately. There were a few eye opening things, that I didnāt grasp back then - maybe because I was too young, but certainly also because of your rearrangement -, so Iām very happy to have a place now to revisit all these cool documentaries.
Please keep up the good work, since I am eager to watch through all of this! š
Just one thing: in your last post you mentioned part 7, but there is no link provided so far. If itās already done, I would be glad if you could provide a link for that as well!
Lesson 3 - Got cut from The Last Jedi, thought this could be cool. Was suggested to me by my friend JXeditor,
Concept: https://youtu.be/evQEnYxqAzQ
Wow, its a brilliant idea šÆ
Thanks, and Iāve already had a PM come in offering to chip in.
To replace the machine without any upgrade in specs or a more recent model could possibly be snagged for about $200 with patience. If people want to donate that could certainly be done. Of course, as a personal thing Iād still eventually need to upgrade in due time, but itād restore things to working order for now.
If I can find any 2011 Mac Mini, I can dig any crappy old keyboard and mouse out of the trash and I have a monitor. If itās a 2011 Mini, I can even use my current RAM chips.
Actually, the donating idea makes sense. I mean, a lot of us waits to See your version of TROS to have a respectful ending of the saga.
Iām just a lurker here, but definitely +1 for the crowdfunding/donation idea. š
Option A please. š
+1
Another small idea to improve the pacing of the movie : I think slightly extending (4-5 seconds) the shot of Kylo Ren lost in thoughts on the Death Star would help with that. In the cinema, the scene with Han Solo didnāt completely land emotionally for me because the movie didnāt let time to breathe from the previous scene to this one. So hereās a quick mock-up (I didnāt increase the frame rate with interpolation) :
https://vimeo.com/433415597
(pw: fanedit)First version is the extended one (I let the previous scene for you to see if it flows well), second one is the movie version. Any thoughts ?
Wow, this feels really good! Hanās āhey kidā really got me in your version. š
Hey, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Itās probably good you havenāt been following the thread closely, since you can provide a fresher reaction
#2 is all thanks to DominicCobb, btw.
#4 is from poppasketti.
#5 has had some discussion, and the idea is that the dagger is the one whispering to her to nudge her in the right direction. It may not be clear enough to really be viable. I guess we are still indeterminate if it is truly viable to replace the Goonies moment.
I had watched your workprint 1, and it was nice already, even though there were less changes.
Again, I had some things to do in these days so I just read that you released your V2. To me there were no issues like rough cuts or else. The first act has a much better pacing.
I also noticed, but thatās personal, that jonhās ghosts scene gave me a quite different feel while watching the whole movie. I mean, at first it was only a single scene, but now it really feels like something that should have been there from the stars. It also connects the three trilogies better than anything else (Ben from OT, Anakin from PT, Luke from ST).
I also liked the subtle DOF motive during the Death star duel.Oh, and about the Dagger. Iāll have to rewatch the scene. At first I didnāt get your intention, but thatās probably because I was trying to notice every change (Iāve watched TROS countless times for that awful edit of mine, like Iām sure many of you have). To enhance your point you could maybe add some whispers as Rey is holding the Dagger in front of the Death Star? It could work with 3POās like āOnly this blade tellsā. Tells. Like, literally.
EDIT I think some parts of the Mustafar sequence could be used. The wide shot with TIEs looks ok to me. The volcanic eruptions look too real-world IMHO, while the shot of stormtroopers getting out of the transport too animated. But I like the landing (not the last frames when the camera inclinates).
Thatās such a great work though. There are just very minor issues for me and Iād totally watch and enjoy any edit with those shots.I just rewatched the Dagger/Death Star scene. You actually added some whispers, right? I didnāt notice them at first, lol š
I second the point with the whispers - the idea is great, but I fear that most people would miss it, since the whispers are almost too subtle. š
And to add to that: I really liked the āfor Skywalkerā shouting, but again I could barely here it and had to skip back again to understand what everyone was shouting.
But donāt get me wrong, I absolutely loved the workprint so far - actually it was the first time I could enjoy TROS, so thank you for that, Hal and everyone else working on it. š
Having rewatched the scene a number of times, I cannot miss it now. And I think it works, because he addes other whispers while Rey is inside the DSā¦ as if those voices guide her into the Throne Room. You can miss it once, but not all the times š
Sure, now that I know of it, I canāt miss it aswell and Iām actually wondering how I could even miss it the first time. š I was just thinking of our hypothetical first time viewer, who maybe wonāt watch the fanedit multiple times.
Hey, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Itās probably good you havenāt been following the thread closely, since you can provide a fresher reaction
#2 is all thanks to DominicCobb, btw.
#4 is from poppasketti.
#5 has had some discussion, and the idea is that the dagger is the one whispering to her to nudge her in the right direction. It may not be clear enough to really be viable. I guess we are still indeterminate if it is truly viable to replace the Goonies moment.
I had watched your workprint 1, and it was nice already, even though there were less changes.
Again, I had some things to do in these days so I just read that you released your V2. To me there were no issues like rough cuts or else. The first act has a much better pacing.
I also noticed, but thatās personal, that jonhās ghosts scene gave me a quite different feel while watching the whole movie. I mean, at first it was only a single scene, but now it really feels like something that should have been there from the stars. It also connects the three trilogies better than anything else (Ben from OT, Anakin from PT, Luke from ST).
I also liked the subtle DOF motive during the Death star duel.Oh, and about the Dagger. Iāll have to rewatch the scene. At first I didnāt get your intention, but thatās probably because I was trying to notice every change (Iāve watched TROS countless times for that awful edit of mine, like Iām sure many of you have). To enhance your point you could maybe add some whispers as Rey is holding the Dagger in front of the Death Star? It could work with 3POās like āOnly this blade tellsā. Tells. Like, literally.
EDIT I think some parts of the Mustafar sequence could be used. The wide shot with TIEs looks ok to me. The volcanic eruptions look too real-world IMHO, while the shot of stormtroopers getting out of the transport too animated. But I like the landing (not the last frames when the camera inclinates).
Thatās such a great work though. There are just very minor issues for me and Iād totally watch and enjoy any edit with those shots.I just rewatched the Dagger/Death Star scene. You actually added some whispers, right? I didnāt notice them at first, lol š
I second the point with the whispers - the idea is great, but I fear that most people would miss it, since the whispers are almost too subtle. š
And to add to that: I really liked the āfor Skywalkerā shouting, but again I could barely here it and had to skip back again to understand what everyone was shouting.
But donāt get me wrong, I absolutely loved the workprint so far - actually it was the first time I could enjoy TROS, so thank you for that, Hal and everyone else working on it. š
HAL, are you planning maybe to do something with the Fleet in this edit? Like, make it not being planet destroying. Or change it into an old sith Fleet of something?
And If I understand correctly, you are gonna keep the kiss moment, arent you?
Regarding the planet destroying power of the fleet: I think cutting it should be possible since the only demonstration of the power happens on Kijimi, right? Maybe the fleet has the power to destroy whole cities, but not whole planets, so only the last shot of the exploding planet would need to be cut.
And of course the following dialoge mentions the new power of the fleet. One solution might be to replace the word āplanetā in Poeās sentence, that every ship on the fleet āā¦ has planet-killing powersā with maybe ācityā? Or cut the sentence completely, but that might be hard to pull off, since the dialoge jumps so fast between the characters.
The following radio broadcast from the First Order should work nonetheless, because if the First Order has a whole fleet even with city destroying powers it might not be too far off to claim the end of the Resistance. But the payoff would be, that they donāt have a fleet full of little death stars, which in my opinion was pretty ridiculous to begin with.