JeromeTheEditor

Looking forward to this!

I also prefer the second one, the only thing is that the volume is to loud when the emperor says “a powerful sith you will become” so it’s a bit hard to hear, but other than that it is good!

Looks good!

I like the original one a little bit better, but I wouldn’t mind if you used the new dark blue.

It looks good, looking forward to your edit!

Can i also get a link?

Can I also get a private message?

I dont think it came off confusion, I actually like the idea of making it regular to show that we are now in a correct chronological order. It was just the transition felt abrupt and the editing made the scene feel a little rushed, but if you can’t fix it thats totally fine because as you said, mauls story arc was not complete.

Everything worked for me it was just the ending with twins suns. My problem with it was that it felt kind of choppy with the filters but after when Darth Maul hits the fire with his lightsaber and there were no more filters it was fine.

Anakin Starkiller said:

Only criticisms is probably just some of the editing was off a bit, but other than that this was really good.

I mean that’s literally everything. It is a fan edit, after all.

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I watched this edit and I really think it tells the story of Maul really well. It did a pretty good job of incorporating twin suns and it felt pretty consistent with the characters and the story. Only criticisms is probably just some of the editing was off a bit, but other than that this was really good.

I liked it but maybe a better transition into ”twins suns” when obi wan says “Darth Maul alive”. I think it would be better if it did not fade out.

I think it’s good that you added in “voyage of temptation” in there because it brings out satine and obi wans relationship a bit more and it will have a better impact when Satine dies. Great job!😃

Sounds like an interesting way to intercut twin suns. What other filters other than black and white are you planning to use?

paja said:

Great Trailer!

Agreed. Keep up the good work!

An x-wing doesn’t sound like a bad idea

Sounds really good! Good luck with this!

Sounds like a great idea! I agree with snooker with the final duel, but like you said you will probably have to incorporate rebel’s somewhere in there and I don’t know if that will work.

Th first 11 minutes looking great so far!

Any updates on this?

Nice! It’s much better than the one in the comparison clip and I like how you incorporated some of the missing footage in there.

Thanks for the feedback! I am glad you enjoyed it. As for putting the first part of the credits in the beginning, I actually think that is a good idea and I might try it out. Anyways thanks for watching!😃

I did a cut of Batman the killing Joke. This edit is not the book version but it takes the flashback scenes of joker and puts them in the beginning of the film. It also cuts the whole Batgirl subplots. If you want to watch this version, then just pm me and I will send you the link through google drive.
Original runtime:76
Fanedit runtime:47

Feedback is appreciated!

The original Karate Kid is already a solid movie on its own. Which is why this fanedit is a bit more conservative. This edit was made with the intention of satisfying some of my subjective preferences such as adding more music to scenes(mostly from the karate kid soundtrack) and making the tone slightly more serious. In other words most of these edits don’t technically improve the filmmaking or characters by any means, it’s just a fans personal preference of what they would have preferred played out on screen.

Cultist:

• trimmed the shot of Johnny’s bloody nose only to make him look more superior during the beach sequence.
• Kept the extended lunch sequence, but cut some extra dialogue and shots from my extended edition to get rid of some of the built up tension that goes nowhere since it automatically cuts to the next scene. Also added an AI voice over from Johnny saying “why’d you sh*t yourself” to get rid of some awkward silence. It surprisingly sounded decent so I kept it.
• Added a bit of menacing music when Daniel and Johnnys eyes lock at the Cobra Kai dojo.
• Trimmed the Halloween chase by cutting Johnny and his goons tripping as well as Daniel causing a car accident. Some other minor cuts and changes(with music) in this sequence.
• Cut Daniel and Miyagi driving to the cobra Kai dojo.
• Added the beginning of Iron Maiden’s the trooper when Miyagi and Daniel walk in to the Cobra Kai dojo.
• Used some of terry silvers music cues as well as other karate kid themes during the visit to the dojo as well as the confrontation with Miyagi and Kreese.
• Cut Daniel finding Miyagi meditating and falling asleep
• Cut the scene of Daniel and Johnny’s friends with the history teacher.
• Added music where Miyagi shows Daniel the purpose of all the house labor exercises. A small cut of Daniel bending over again when he wasn’t supposed to.
• Added the deleted confrontation between Daniel and Johnny in the hallway… Cut some of Johnny’s overacting and also added what appeared to be Johnny’s theme.
• Added music from KK2 to the scene where Miyagi gets drunk.
• Added more KK music to the scene where Miyagi gives Daniel the car as well as the music from Cobra Kai when Daniel is reminiscing about Miyagi giving him the car in season 1.
• Cut the confrontation scene with the referee about Ali being there while adding Iron Maiden’s The Prisoner when Daniel and Miyagi are walking towards the ring.
• Added music to the build up of Daniel and Bobby facing off.
• Added back the scene of Bobby throwing the belt at Kreese
• Took a couple different angles from the first episode of Cobra Kai and incorporated some of the shots I liked during the final fight.

Runtime:125 minutes
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Wow, This looks like one of the best Star wars fan edits out there! Great Job! Just one question, will this be up on vimeo or any other places or just fanedit.org?