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I dont think it came off confusion, I actually like the idea of making it regular to show that we are now in a correct chronological order. It was just the transition felt abrupt and the editing made the scene feel a little rushed, but if you can’t fix it thats totally fine because as you said, mauls story arc was not complete.
Everything worked for me it was just the ending with twins suns. My problem with it was that it felt kind of choppy with the filters but after when Darth Maul hits the fire with his lightsaber and there were no more filters it was fine.
Anakin Starkiller said:
Only criticisms is probably just some of the editing was off a bit, but other than that this was really good.
I mean that’s literally everything. It is a fan edit, after all.
I watched this edit and I really think it tells the story of Maul really well. It did a pretty good job of incorporating twin suns and it felt pretty consistent with the characters and the story. Only criticisms is probably just some of the editing was off a bit, but other than that this was really good.
I liked it but maybe a better transition into ”twins suns” when obi wan says “Darth Maul alive”. I think it would be better if it did not fade out.
I think it’s good that you added in “voyage of temptation” in there because it brings out satine and obi wans relationship a bit more and it will have a better impact when Satine dies. Great job!😃
Sounds like an interesting way to intercut twin suns. What other filters other than black and white are you planning to use?
Agreed. Keep up the good work!
An x-wing doesn’t sound like a bad idea
Sounds really good! Good luck with this!
Sounds like a great idea! I agree with snooker with the final duel, but like you said you will probably have to incorporate rebel’s somewhere in there and I don’t know if that will work.
Th first 11 minutes looking great so far!
Any updates on this?
Nice! It’s much better than the one in the comparison clip and I like how you incorporated some of the missing footage in there.
Thanks for the feedback! I am glad you enjoyed it. As for putting the first part of the credits in the beginning, I actually think that is a good idea and I might try it out. Anyways thanks for watching!😃
I did a cut of Batman the killing Joke. This edit is not the book version but it takes the flashback scenes of joker and puts them in the beginning of the film. It also cuts the whole Batgirl subplots. If you want to watch this version, then just pm me and I will send you the link through google drive.
Feedback is appreciated! 😀
Here’s a the poster
I decided to do an edit of the Karate kid (1984). This was just for pure fun and I had no intentions of showing it to people. I’ve always loved the original Karate kid, but there were things that I thought could have been taken out and there should have been more music in particular scenes. I’ve cut in my opinion we’re the silly bits and I added music where I thought was necessary. If you want to watch it just PM me and I will send you a link.
Here’s what I did
-Very Minor cuts in the beach fight
-Added menacing music when Daniel and Johnny’s eyes meet when Daniel visits the cobra kai dojo.
-Cut:”she’s hot definitely hot”
I cut some stuff in the Halloween school dance scene.
-Added a little bit of music when Daniel is about to spray Johnny with water
-Cut “Hey Johnny wats up.”
-Cut Ali tripping the cobra kais and Daniel causing a car crash.
-Add music when myagi and Daniel visit the cobra Kai dojo.
-Cut a comedic scene with Daniel with his history teacher and the cobrai kais. It was a funny bit, but to me the rivalry between Johnny and Daniel felt gone from that scene.
-Added some music to the semi finals when Daniel gets his leg broken and when he is telling Myagi he wants balance when his leg is injured.
-added some footage from karate kid 3 and 2 for the training montage
-Also added some alternate shots in the last fight scene from cobra kai which includes the close up of the crane. I did cut some other minor things but I just didn’t feel like listing them. Feedback is always appreciated!
Modern trailer I made:https://vimeo.com/296732758/comments
Here’s the poster
Wow, This looks like one of the best Star wars fan edits out there! Great Job! Just one question, will this be up on vimeo or any other places or just fanedit.org?