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Jar Jar Bricks

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#1336047
Topic
Revenge of the Sith - Expanded Edition (Released)
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Bobson Dugnutt said:

Switched up the Shaak Ti scene once more by moving the Grevious intro back again and splitting the hanger scene in half, implying that R2 takes time to find Palps, as well as trimming the Grevious walk to the window to move things along a bit faster.

R2

Unfortunately I’m not sure that works either. The infrared screen clearly shows Anakin and Obi-Wan sprinting through a hallway, but then the camera goes back and they’re still in the hangar bay.

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#1335888
Topic
Revenge of the Sith - Expanded Edition (Released)
Time

Strange… I could have sworn there was like a 10 second clip of the space battle above Coruscant that wasn’t used in the movie. Maybe it was made for the theme park? Am I just going crazy?
Edit: NVM I found it. The only problem is that this video is really low res. Does anybody know where it comes from?
https://youtu.be/0C4EoJq3xLE?t=406

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#1335816
Topic
Revenge of the Sith - Expanded Edition (Released)
Time

Cameron Samurai said:

Bobson Dugnutt said:

Cameron Samurai said:

Bobson Dugnutt said:

I’ve been considering using some Grevious lines from the game to replace the redunant lightsaber collection line and tried out a few here.

https://vimeo.com/407869290

Thoughts?

I can audibly tell when the sound bites occur (presume that’ll eventually be smoothed over), but yeah, that was timed well

Do you prefer either line (the pathetic one or the lightsaber one)

I’ll go with the “pathetic” line, it sounds more confrontational

Yes, the “You Jedi are all the same” and “pathetic” are both parts of the same line.

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#1330008
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

nl0428 said:

Here is my second attempt at the opening, adding the Journey to Exegol track.

https://vimeo.com/398973768
PASSWORD: fanedit

Alternatively, we could keep the ship in there, coloring it black to match Kylo’s from TFA. Then we could also put in the deleted TLJ scene and have someone say in the background something like, “Supreme Leader, your shuttle is ready”.

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#1329838
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

nl0428 said:

Jar Jar Bricks said:

nl0428 said:

Here is my attempt at scoring the fight with Sam Kim’s cover, already done by Jar Jar Bricks. I’ve tried to time the music with the fight in a better way.

https://vimeo.com/398676662
PASSWORD: fanedit

I liked having the music swell up when Kylo appears out of the water but otherwise that looked good.

I won’t lie, it worked well during that moment too.

That’s actually how they did it in the original too. There’s no music until Kylo comes out of the water

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#1329733
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

Anakin Starkiller said:

Octorox said:

I don’t know about this specific clip but maybe something with lava in a forest setting could blend well with the existing footage? https://youtu.be/eLE3kaLUfUk

Unfortunately that shot has several watermakrs that make it unusable.

As for Evazan’s work, I think it looks great, but I’d replace that one shot of the lava flowing in a circle. It’s just strange and unnatural looking. Like it’s trying to form an arena for an unwitting protagonist.

I thought the arena shot looked good because this is supposed to be the shrine where Vader kept his wayfinder

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#1329586
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

idir_hh said:

I think it’s still too abrupt for a Star Wars film, maybe we can hear an officer in the background say something like “My lord your ship is ready” - hold on to Kylo’s face and zoom - use a reversed shot of Kylo’s shuttle approaching the Executer from TFA with Mustafar in the background instead of Jakku - dark shuttle entering Mustafar’s atmosphere(rogue one) - slaughter.

It all sounds well and good, but completely out of my league lol

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#1329584
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

idir_hh said:

Jar Jar Bricks said:

Alternatively, if we’re going with the original movie intro, I used a deleted scene from TLJ to add a few more seconds to it. The shots line up perfectly, even the TIEs. I realize it’s not much, but perhaps we could put some sort of voiceover on it now since it’s a bit longer?
https://vimeo.com/398255683
PW: fanedit

That looks great, yeah I think it needs an establishing shot of krennics ship (could be recoloured to black) descending to mustafar and flying by Vaders Castle to make transition to the battle less abrupt.

I would say that the transition to the battle was already abrupt. I was thinking that this would help alleviate that to a certain extent since the camera is already focusing on Kylo. Maybe some sound effects could help with the transition.

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#1329562
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

nl0428 said:

Jar Jar Bricks said:

Alternatively, if we’re going with the original movie intro, I used a deleted scene from TLJ to add a few more seconds to it. The shots line up perfectly, even the TIEs. I realize it’s not much, but perhaps we could put some sort of voiceover on it now since it’s a bit longer?
https://vimeo.com/398255683
PW: fanedit

Nice idea, maybe if we can somehow have landscape shots of Mustafar’s surface and a land battle before cutting to Kylo Ren in action, it would help things play out much more smoothly.

There are shots of that in Rogue One, although I can’t think of any suitable from Episode 3

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#1329560
Topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Time

Alternatively, if we’re going with the original movie intro, I used a deleted scene from TLJ to add a few more seconds to it. The shots line up perfectly, even the TIEs. I realize it’s not much, but perhaps we could put some sort of voiceover on it now since it’s a bit longer?
https://vimeo.com/398255683
PW: fanedit