DrCrowTStarwars said:
Well here is my pitch for what could be done.
I would get back to basics while playing with what has been set up. The setting of the show would be the brand new Enterprise F,it's first mission would be to explore. The show would be set ten years after the Domian war and the war would be set up in flashback through out the season for viewers who didn't see DS9. The Federation and Romulans would be the only strong powers left and expanding all over the place. For political reasons the Federation has decided that the flag ship needs to go on a mission of exploration into the Gamma Quadrant,which is mostly still unknown to the Federation and may be important if a war breaks out with the Romulans. There is just one problem the war wiped out most of Starfleet's captains who are trained in deplomats and explores,pretty much all of the officers came up through the ranks in the war and have the mindset of combat troops seeing everything as a threat plus they will have to get along with races they were fighting in the war,the central question will be how do you ask these people to move from a war mindset to a mission of peace. The Captain would not really be trusted by the crew because he went down in disgrace in the war. He is chosen for this mission because he is one of the few high ranking officers who is a trained diplomant and explorer,since he came up through the ranks before the war. He was respected enough at the time that he was given command of a group of ships in the opening days of the war but he was not a good combat officer and he fell for a trap everyone else saw coming and lost all the ships under his command,so he has been grounded since but now Starfleet turns to him because he is the only respected explorer they have left after the war but the crew being veterans of that war and going into their former enemy's space does not trust him so he has to prove himself to the crew and he has his hands full.
When they get to the Gamma Quadrant they take on a Vorta advisor to help them in their mission and needless to say this doesn't sit well with the crew and to make matters worse he or she wants to be helpful and over the course of the first few episodes the Captain comes to like him or her and this doesn't sit well with the crew. What is more since the Dominion is gone and it was the only form of government most of the Gamma Quadrant knew for thousands of years the whole place is in chaso with some planets at war with each other and others starving and some that have just dropped out of contact with the rest of the galaxy. So while exploring the Captain's skills as a diplomat are put to the test solving the bigger problems that have been thrust into his lap,he gets little help from Starfleet since his mission is viewed by command as mostly PR to prove the Federation is not an Empire like the Romulans but the fact is command is too busy trying to out flank the Romulan empire to care much about one ship in this far off sector of space.
Or if you don't like that here is the pitch for a reboot given by B5's JMS.
From its debut on NBC in 1966 and through a variety of feature ?lms and four subsequent
series, Star Trek is a science-?ction franchise of historic proportions. Over the course of its
history , some of the best and brightest minds in the industry have made substantial
contributions to its legacy , culminating in the current caretakers of the Trek universe who
have been on the job for nearly sixteen years. Like millions of other fans worldwide, we
appreciate what these talented men and women have accomplished and care passionately for
their work.
And yet…
There is trouble in the Trek Universe.
Re-Boot the Universe
Tokos Design Associates
Ratings have declined, demographics have stagnated, and it seems as if every few weeks a
new article asks “What’s Wrong with Star Trek?” or “Can Star Trek Be Saved?”
Every writer who’s been asked to pitch for one of the Star Trek series or features knows that
so many stories have been developed in the Star Trek universe that it has become
increasingly di?cult to move something through the system. The three most common
responses are: it’s been done, it’s being done, or it would never be done.
Among both critics and fans, people who want the show to be a success, there is a collective
sense that the franchise is just not as exciting as it used to be.
Why? Are the wheels falling o? the franchise?
And what can be done about it?
Star Trek: Re-Boot the Universe, Straczynski & Zabel, 2004# 2The Question
Have you ever made a copy of a copy of a copy , to the point where, after enough iterations,
the blurry words look like they were written on a 1947 Olympia typewriter with a bad
ribbon?
Over the decades, Star Trek has become so insular, so strictly de?ned, and placed so many
layers upon itself that some of the essence of what made us love it in the ?rst place has been
lost. The all-too-reasonable desire to protect the franchise may now be the cause of its
stagnation.
Imagine buying a new Porsche and leaving it in the garage all the time, because if you take it
out on the road, it might get scratched. But that is exactly what’s happened to Star Trek.
The Porsche’s still clean and polished, but we’re driving around in a nice, reasonable family
car.
It’s time to throw caution to the wind and go out for a drive…a real drive…
The Answer
Although fan accusations of burn-out and story-repetition from the creative teams may be
part of the explanation, and certainly any team may need a time away after nearly sixteen
years at the helm, there’s a simpler answer at hand, one that need not paint these
accomplished people in any kind of negative light.
The best solution is to go back to the original and start again.
It’s time to re-boot the Star Trek Universe.
Concept
What we propose is not Star Trek: Another Generation, or Star Trek: A New Ship, or even
Star Trek: The Search for Plots. In other words, not a copy of a copy , or a distillation of a
variation.
We want to re-boot STAR TREK. The original. Pure and simple. The characters, universe
and situations that have attracted, and continue to attract, a worldwide audience. Re-set…
re-imagined… re-invigorated…
Imagine taking those characters, and using what we know now about the universe, and
combining it with the kind of storytelling that audiences of 2004 are used to seeing in
Star Trek: Re-Boot the Universe, Straczynski & Zabel, 2004# 3modern prime-time television. Hard-hitting. Exciting. Character-driven. Innovative. And
armed with the very latest EFX in support of our stories.
Start with the three best things in the Star Trek universe.
Kirk, Spock, McCoy .
Put them in the most durable concept ever created in sci-? TV.
The ?ve-year-mission.
Star Trek.
It is time to go boldly back to the original, the “classic,” re-born and re-tooled for a new
millennium, applying hard lessons and building in new thoughts that shake things up
creatively .
It’s time to take a real risk, to push the chips out into the center of table, to once again put
these incredible characters into play . Through their eyes, let’s see stories about the human
heart in con?ict with itself…and let them express genuine con?ict that can jeopardize lives
and friendships...and take them on a journey that will shake their view of the world and
universe in ways they could never have imagined...
... because if we don’t do these things, then what’s Star Trek for?
Everything Old Is New Again
Before we go any further, let’s answer the obvious question: Will the fans of the original
series (call it Star Trek: Classic) accept a new cast and series under the original Star Trek
banner?
The answer, we believe, is a ?rm and unequivocal “yes.”
Remember, for a moment, that the ?nal episode of Star Trek: Classic aired less than six
weeks before humans ?rst set foot on the moon. More than enough time has passed to
allow fans the luxury of considering new faces in familiar roles.
It’s been nearly two decades since the decision to launch Star Trek: The Next Generation
looked past the original Star Trek: Classic cast members. There was some criticism by fans,
but even those performers, loved and admired by many , would tell you that the audience
wouldn’t accept them in their earlier roles, nor would they likely want to tackle the rigors of
series production.
By 2004, the original cast had moved even further into semi-retirement, and one of the
pivotal three, DeForest Kelley , is no longer with us.
Star Trek: Re-Boot the Universe, Straczynski & Zabel, 2004# 4The infamous fan rebellion over the proposed “Star Fleet Academy” ?lm, demanding the
original characters in the roles, is no longer a viable possibility . For the ?rst time, the fans
are in a position to truly accept a new look at that series and those characters.
We ask Paramount to consider this chance, and seize that moment.
Because there’s a reason Star Trek: Classic worked. Not only did it convey a spirit of
adventure, of optimism, of genuine heroism, the characters it utilized could not possibly be
more iconic. They are classic, archetypal characters.
The warrior, the priest, the doctor...
Kirk
Spock
McCoy .
Kirk, led by his emotions, knowing that in the end, they are what makes us human, what has
pulled us across six thousand years of recorded history . A born leader who believes in
passion, who will do what he must to avoid a ?ght, but will never back away from one.
Spock, a split-personality , in denial of his human emotions, striving to hold on to the logic of
Vulcan stoicism. Competent, powerful, centered, but with a hint of loneliness at his core.
McCoy , the voice of wisdom, the healer, alternately humorous and cynical – the balance
point between Spock and Kirk. The friend and confessor who everyone wants in their life.
The three of them form the best and brightest in Star?eet. Intelligent, but not above
playful jokes and teasing at each other’s expense. Forged by common experience, three men
whose bonds of friendship grow stronger the further into the void they venture. That
friendship, that triumvirate, is the core of what made Star Trek: Classic work, and can make
the series come alive again as well.
Besides the above named “Big Three,” all of the established characters will be in the new
series, too.
Scotty
Sulu
Uhura
Chekov
Star Trek: Re-Boot the Universe, Straczynski & Zabel, 2004# 5Other new characters will be added as needed, of course. All part of the original series
philosophy of IDIC, or “In?nite Diversity in In?nite Combinations,” a celebration of our
di?erences, more applicable today than ever.
The key concept, though, is to re-cast the series using the original characters whenever
possible. This is hardly outrageous, but seems instead to be the logical next step in the
evolution of the franchise.
Let’s face facts: when they wanted to make feature ?lm versions of “The Fugitive” and “The
Brady Bunch,” they didn’t tell stories about Richard Kimble’s brother, or the couple that
lived across the street from the Bradys. They stayed with what worked, with the core
characters who had won allegiance from generations of viewers but updated them with
modern sensibilities.
In the publishing world, the biggest success story in the comics industry today is Marvel’s
“Ultimate” line, which re-imagines and re-creates popular, established characters, and has
brought in new dollars and new fans.
Remember also that the famous super-heroes from comic books have been re-interpreted
with great success in features and television with many di?erent actors in the roles.
Superman and Batman have been played by more than most and they’re still vibrant and in
demand.
Consider Superman’s continual morphing and re-invention on television alone: from the
straight-ahead George Reeves’ “Superman” to the romantic spin of “Lois & Clark” to the
coming-of-age story in “Smallville.” On this latest re-boot, fans were wary of the “no tights,
no ?ights” approach, but have ended up loving it.
Certain other characters like Wyatt Earp, Robin Hood, Billy the Kid, King Arthur and even
James Bond seem resilient enough for one incarnation after another, across the span of time.
There is no reason for Captain James T. Kirk, Mr. Spock, and Leonard “Bones” McCoy (and
Scotty , Sulu, Chekov , Uhura) to be held apart, like that Porsche in the garage. It’s time for
these wonderful characters to take their own place among these other icons.
And here’s how it can be done.
Creative Plan
We will start with a two-hour pilot that tells the story no one has ever seen: the
circumstances that lead Kirk and McCoy (friends before this) to meet Spock for the ?rst
time. It will involve their discovery of a lost city on an uncharted world, nearly a million
Star Trek: Re-Boot the Universe, Straczynski & Zabel, 2004# 6years old, and their encounter with the race that built it, a race long sought after by every
civilized world for the tremendous advantages they could provide.
Along the way , we’ll learn how Kirk – the youngest Starship captain in the Federation – won
command of the Enterprise in the course of a battle with another race in pursuit of that
ancient mystery .
By the end of this pilot, Kirk, Spock and McCoy will be aboard the Federation’s Enterprise,
poised at the edge of known space, poised to explore the billions of stars inside our galaxy .
We will embrace, truly , the famous Captain’s Log from nearly four-decades ago.
“Space, the ?nal &ontier . These are the voyages of the Starship
Enterprise, her ?ve year mission: to seek out new worlds, and new
civilizations...to boldly go where no person has gone before...”
We will keep the classic silhouette of the Enterprise, but ?t her out with a level of amazing
technology based on what the best and the brightest minds tell us the future will look like in
200 years. Tricorders and communicators were predicted by the original Trek and are
already upon us in GPS technology and cell phones. What new wonders can we predict for
the future knowing what we know now?
We will keep the history of the characters, but give them the full range of dramatic
possibilities that exist now, as opposed to the more rigid standards that existed in 1968.
More complex, adult relationships.
The action-oriented pilot will bring these characters together, form the friendship that is
the core of our series, and launch us into a voyage of discovery on a state-of-the-art starship.
As the Enterprise departs on our new ?ve-year voyage, the tapestry of adventure and
discovery from those ?rst three “classic” seasons will be interwoven into our own ?ve-year
plan. This arc will allow us to blend what we know of the Trek universe and stories with new
tales, and a new dramatic imperative.
We will place a mystery at the very core of the Star Trek universe.
Creative: The Mystery Behind the Mission
As noted above and as established in television history , Kirk was the youngest starship
captain in the Federation...but what led to this? We know that the Enterprise was sent out
to explore where no human had gone before...but if you stop and think about it for a
moment, isn’t that an odd assignment...to take one of the ?nest ships in the ?eet, give it to
the youngest captain in the Federation, and tell them to just go drive around and see what
they can ?nd?
Star Trek: Re-Boot the Universe, Straczynski & Zabel, 2004# 7It’s peculiar...until you allow for the possibility that they were looking for something
speci?c...something they had to keep a secret even from the rest of the crew.
Had Kirk, Spock and McCoy stumbled upon something that could have a profound e?ect
on human history? Had they caught a glimpse of a new and previously unknown race a
million years ahead of mankind...a race whose secrets could elevate humanity to unparalleled
levels...a race that left its footprints on a hundred worlds where its touch had changed
evolution and led to civilization as we know it?
A race, long thought dead, but which our characters know is still out there
somewhere...waiting for us...waiting to see if its children can come and ?nd it, there in the
darkness between the stars....
And there are others out there, also searching for this race...forces of darkness who may
view our activities with more than a little hostility .
One thing we will discover is that buried deep within the DNA of humans, Vulcans (even
Klingons) and other intelligent bi-pedal races is a mathematical code, something buried so
deep and of such complexity that it could not possibly have occurred by chance.
Someone or something put it there… an “artist’s signature” perhaps…
In the re-booted Star Trek universe, there is a “Prime Directive” but it is not about non-
interference in the matters of other races. This Prime Directive states simply that it is the
mission of the Starship Enterprise is to do whatever is necessary to ?nd this long-lost race,
and discover the truth about the common origin of all life forms everywhere, the truth that
will unite a galaxy .
Who are we? Why are we here? Are we special? Are we tools? Cannon fodder? Or are we
being prepped for something...amazing?
Over the next ?ve years, we’ll o?er up the answers.
Creative: Series Issues
As stated earlier, Star Trek will “re-imagine” that ?rst ?ve year journey , building on the
existing character relationships, incorporating what we’ve learned about the future since the
original series as well as advances in ?lmmaking and storytelling.
By incorporating these elements into an overall story arc, our episodes will create the sense
that these explorations do not exist in a vacuum, that there’s a reason and a mystery behind
it all. Although our episodes will ?rmly stand alone, viewers will be rewarded for taking this
journey because what is learned in one episode will inform what comes later. We want them
Star Trek: Re-Boot the Universe, Straczynski & Zabel, 2004# 8to feel that they are on-board the Enterprise with the original crew, discovering the greater
story as they go.
By way of example, note that the original Enterprise never needed a holo-deck so that the
characters could have exciting adventures because there were more than enough adventures,
more than enough excitement, to be found in the real world they occupied every day . If you
need a holo-deck to make an interstellar starship on the bleeding edge of the unknown
interesting, something is seriously amiss.
So, in this new incarnation, if all you see is one episode, you get one really good story out of
it based on honest-to-God exploration in an unknown universe bristling with mystery and
adventure. If you watch several, you begin to see the larger storyline emerging out of the
shadows.
There will be a beginning, middle and end to this series. It will be exactly ?ve seasons, with
each season equaling one year of their ?ve year mission. The crew of the Enterprise will
leave in our pilot episode, and they will return ?ve years later from their scienti?c and
security mission. If the studio or network wishes the series to continue after that, the
chronology of our story will note that they have completed their mission, then move the
franchise into new territory , or a new series.
An original narration from writer Samuel Peeples back in a 1965 draft of the ?rst episode
said it very well:
“This is our galaxy – a gigantic cloud of suns and planets, in which our Earth is but a
pinpoint, one speck of dust. The galaxy is so vast that even traveling at mi)ions of miles
per hour it would sti) take mi)ions of years to cross through it. And yet, as incredible as
it seems, our galaxy is itself only one of untold bi)ions of other galaxies, separated by
voids of emptiness so vast that time, matter and energy may not even mean the same out
there.”
The stories we can tell in this series are as unlimited as the universe itself. We can mold and
shape what has gone before into a new story that will feel fresh and original and allow us to
make new discoveries.
We can also do something that the original Star Trek did to great success: purchase and
adapt short stories by leading SF writers. The original Trek made use of the creative work of
Richard Matheson, Robert Bloch, Harlan Ellison, Jerome Bixby , Fredric Brown, Norman
Spinrad and Theodore Sturgeon. They provided the stories behind some of Trek’s most
original, innovative episodes.
Star Trek: Re-Boot the Universe, Straczynski & Zabel, 2004# 9Now imagine a new Star Trek calling upon the talents of writers like Neil Gaiman, Stephen
King, Ray Bradbury , Dean Koontz, Michael Crichton, Anne Rice, Kurt Vonnegut, Anne
McCa?rey , and others.
Finding stories by these writers that would ?t in the Star Trek universe and adapting them
would not only result in some terri?c episodes, but would be excellent publicity for the
series.
But the longest journey begins with the ?rst step… one taken by a triumvirate of friends, on
a classic tale of discovery and friendship. That relationship explains what made Star Trek:
Classic successful, and it is that primary relationship that we will service in the new series.
Creative: Continuity
While we will avail ourselves of anything and everything from the currently existing Star
Trek Universe that may assist us in this re-boot, we do not believe that this new Star Trek
should be heavily burdened with the “reverse-continuity” of the past. It will only perpetuate
the problem of painting creative teams into corners.
As noted earlier, the most elegant solution to continuity is to borrow from the experience of
the comic book community . Fans have accepted for years that other artists and writers are
continually creating alternative universes for classic characters. It’s become an established
part of the fun. So this proposal exists independently of the current Star Trek: Enterprise
series, and all that has preceded it.
Think of the following projects as “Universe A” in Star Trek:
? Star Trek: Classic
? Star Trek: The Next Generation
? Star Trek: Deep Space Nine
? Star Trek: Voyager
? Star Trek: Enterprise
? Star Trek: The Motion Picture
? Star Trek II: The Wrath of Kahn
? Star Trek III: The Search for Spock
? Star Trek IV: The Voyage Home
? Star Trek V: The Final Frontier
Star Trek: Re-Boot the Universe, Straczynski & Zabel, 2004# 10? Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country
? Star Trek: Generations
? Star Trek: First Contact
? Star Trek: Nemesis
What we propose today is “Universe B”, the unshackling of all the pent-up talent and ideas
that are precluded from expression by virtue of what has gone on before. This universe
begins again, in 2004, as simply:
Star Trek
If other series come after this, they will, in all likelihood, exist in this new “Universe B.”
That we reserve the right to make bold new interpretations does not mean that we will shun
all the good work and characters that exist before and after in the Star Trek timeline. We
may accept the vast majority of these decisions but simply change the way they happened.
A re-boot means a fresh start. That means not just new stories, but looking at our
continuity in new ways.
We know that a planet-eater was rampaging through space in Star Trek: Classic...but what if
we discover that the device was a left-over piece of warfare tech from the race our
characters are pursuing? Do they allow the planet-sized weapon to destroy a sparsely-
populated colony world if in doing so, they gain the time to get information that could save
billions of lives elsewhere?
We know that the Enterprise was once infested with tiny cute Tribbles piled three ?ght high
in some places...but what if they came equipped with an agenda, an attitude...and teeth?
We know that Scotty was constantly called upon to perform technical miracles and ably did
so...but what if Scotty was a female character (just an example!), proof positive that in the
future women equally excel in science and math?
Our point is simply this: the fun, the excitement and the passion of the re-boot is in the
imagining of the alternative.
No one can ever compete with Gene Roddenberry’s original series. We can, however, stand
on his shoulders and see things from a di?erent point-of-view.
Creative: Laying Out Season One
Just for the sake of argument, imagine the following year-one breakdown of stories:
Star Trek: Re-Boot the Universe, Straczynski & Zabel, 2004# 11In our pilot, we deliver the story the fans never saw, the coming-together of Kirk, Spock and
McCoy ...the handing-over of the Enterprise...the mystery behind the mission...the launch
into history .
Four or ?ve episodes that build on this mystery , each with a stand-alone main plot but with
a B-plot that lays out the clues like bread-crumbs. These would be the equivalent to the so-
called “mythology” episodes which drove the “X-Files” series.
Four or ?ve episodes where the source material comes from stories by major writers in the
science ?ction and fantasy genre, adapted to teleplay by our writing sta?.
Four or ?ve episodes that re-imagine speci?c stories or events from the original series,
adapting teleplays from the original writers.
Filled-out by stand-alone episodes that place Kirk, Spock and McCoy in new adventures
?lled with action, humor, strong characterization and dynamic storytelling.
A season ?nale which drops a huge clue into play , and forces the Enterprise to take a stand
putting its very existence on the line.
In this scenario, every episode becomes something that fans and critics will want to talk
about. Even if elements prove controversial, it will only fuel interest in where the series is
going. Web-sites will come alive again. TiVOs will be programmed. Conventions will
sizzle.
The audience that has gone away , or has become indi?erent, will take notice of this new life.
And ratings will rise.
All of which brings us to…
The Coming Buzz
Mostly because there have now been four di?erent series based on the Star Trek universe,
the media has grown jaded, greeting the news of each new series with consistently less
fervor and rising levels of skepticism.
But returning to the roots of Star Trek will change all that. It will rekindle a level of
excitement not seen since the debut of Star Trek: The Next Generation. It may even
surpass that launch.
Imagine for a moment the nationwide excitement as we look for the new Kirk, Spock and
McCoy , as well as the other characters. (“Search for Spock,” anyone?) As well as using
regular casting methods, we can open up a nationwide search, primarily for PR purposes.
Star Trek: Re-Boot the Universe, Straczynski & Zabel, 2004# 12We can even spread out the casting announcements to ramp up word of mouth over time, so
that by the date of the premiere, interest is at an all-time high.
Paramount couldn’t buy that kind of publicity . Fans not only will tolerate this, they will
revel in the sheer boldness of its spirit.
This new series will re-capture the chemistry which existed between these historic
characters, as it appeared on-screen, and as it translated to members of the viewing
audience. It will give the fans what they’ve always dreamed of. A chance to see those
wonderful, original characters done with the state-of-the-art talents available today .
Remember how thrilling it was to ?rst hear the Captain’s Log and to let your mind wander
to what wonderful things would happen in that “?ve-year mission”? It can happen again.
Star Trek
Simple. Powerful. Accept No Imitations
The Team
The credits for J. Michael Straczynski (“Babylon 5”, “Jeremiah”, “The Twilight Zone”) and
Bryce Zabel (“Dark Skies”, “Lois & Clark”, “The Crow”) establish them as key players in the
world of television science-?ction. Between them, they have received eight WGA “created
by” or “developed by” credits for series they have originated.
“Babylon 5,” created by Straczynski, without the bene?t of known source material, was the
?rst American science ?ction space series outside of “Star Trek” to go more than three
seasons in over thirty years, and has become a franchise for Warner Bros., inclusive of a new
“B5” feature ?lm slated to go into production soon. His work earned him two of the
prestigious Hugo Awards. In addition to his screen work, Straczynski currently writes “The
Amazing Spider-Man” for Marvel Comics.
Besides creating the NBC alien invasion series, “Dark Skies,” Zabel has also been involved
in several successful adaptations of original sci-? material to TV series, notably “Lois &
Clark” and “The Crow.” His work has been nominated by the WGA, and has won four
Gemini Awards for “Outstanding Drama Series.” His UFO ?lm, “O?cial Denial”, was the
Sci-Fi Channel’s ?rst original ?lm. Coming o? a recent two-year stint as Chairman of the
Academy of Television Arts & Sciences, Zabel is currently adapting the original book of
“The Poseidon Adventure” as a four-hour mini-series for network TV.
They are no strangers to the world of ?ve-year plans. Straczynski created one such
comprehensive arc for “Babylon 5” as did Zabel for “Dark Skies” – before either series
began.
Star Trek: Re-Boot the Universe, Straczynski & Zabel, 2004# 13Both Straczynski and Zabel have worked hard to include fans in their previous science-
?ction series, and will take the time and e?ort to bring them aboard this new incarnation.
I think there is scope for new Star trek on Tv it's just we need network executives who can see it.
Episodes would be split between exploring,dealing with character's personal issues left over from the war,finding peaceful solutions to the problems of the Gamma quadrant,and dealing with the rising tensions with the Romulans.
