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Darth Chaltab

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#91082
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Starkiller's Fan Fic. Story
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Like I said, the problem is, you'd have to switch perspectvies... but you're telling it in first person, which could get really confusing unless you write the second character in third person.

Maybe you could do both in first person, but change the tenses between charactrers. It's more confusing for you, maybe, but it would distinguish them if you make a new protagonist.
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#91079
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I want one!
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Originally posted by: starkiller
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Originally posted by: ricarleiteWell, you know, robbing banks is getting easier and easier nowadays...


Well, I'm not surprised. The criminals are getting dumber and dumber. The banks don't need to be as cautious.
I got a dumb criminals desk calendar last year, and there were things in it that surprised me.


Share some of them with us!

I heart reading about idiotic criminals.