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The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread — Page 103

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SilverKey said:

The compositing job done on McGregor is quite bad. They even used footage of McGregor that was shot (but cut) from the Mustafar duel with Anakin and it shows. The eyeline between him and Grievous are way off too. None of the elements in the scene really match.

Also, the whole background doesn't make any sense. When Obi-Wan looks down on the Separatist meeting, Grievous we see that the floor is flat. But when Grievous pushes Obi-Wan back, they are walking on beams. And where is did that thing Obi-Wan dropped on Grievous' guards, and their bodies, go?

Well i return to this because i checked the scenes.

It seems that editing  cut several footage that shows grievous push obi further back or is just bad edit.

You can see clearly that there are "beams"(?) in very back of the room. But you are right about the background sometimes cause a big mess. Yes the box that fell on magna guards disappears. For one moment i thought that they we fighting in different levels of this location because it looks different.

 

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Actually it sounds like a slightly camp version of RP English.

Anakin should have dropped his native accent by AOTC, to keep an accent you need to have a primer around, with Obi Wan acting as parent and teacher to the boy he would have ended up speaking more like him (which would have matched Seb Shaw's voice in ROTJ).

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Bingowings said:

I did suggest this some aeons ago...

Bingowings said:

It might be better to show the twins being born and then do a series of time jumps showing the transition between the Republic era ships and Imperial era ships, (perhaps a few battles with the Alliance) the Clonetroopers and the Stormtroopers, have Padme die on Alderaan and see little Leia at her funeral on Alderaan (possibly aged 3 or 4) and finish with the construction of the Death Star with Peter playing Tarkin not Wayne in a Halloween mask.

The transition idea could be very doable you could see a ROTS style Star Destroyer wipe into a ANH/ESB style Destroyer etc, etc and finish with Vader and Palpatine looking at the construction of the Death Star surrounded by Imperial ships showing that it was built closer to the timeframe of ANH than ROTS. (a bit like the end sequence of the Enterprise finale where we saw Enterprises D, NCC1701 and NXwhatever only in reverse http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pXotJu1CapU&feature=related).

It would also serve as a bookend for the celebration montage at the end of ROTJ, instead of seeing the defeat of the Empire playing out over space we'd see the growth of the Empire over time.

Forgive the roughness of this mockup as per:

Time Wipe

 

 maybe in the middle pic just have the ISD bridge replacing the RSD Venator bridge

John Williams score to Return of the Jedi Remastered/Remixed:

http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/JOHN-WILLIAMS-Star-Wars-Episode-VI-Return-of-the-Jedi-Remastered-Edition/topic/14606/page/1/

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You clearly haven't understood the illustration (even though it is fully explained in the text) this is a diagonal wipe describing a transition of time (perhaps a clockwipe would make it more obvious).

We see the Republic era ships replaced by ships from the same era as ANH (time has passed).

Now we can see the Death Star being built but it's not being built right after the end of the Clone Wars but about half a decade before ANH after the Empire is fully established and their starfleet has been upgraded to what we see in the OT.

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Perhaps the motion of a TIE-fighter could cover the wipe (nothing says OT to me more than a TIE) :

Tie Wipe

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vaderios said:
fishmanlee said:

remember : Radical

I didnt see you giving any ways or ideas to make this work.

Now you remember : Contribution

 

-Angel

 

hehe.

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About the grievous/vader idea..... I like the idea... Just not sure if it's possible. We would have to figure out a new way of him being defeated without him exploding as he has currently in ROTS.

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Bingowings said:

You clearly haven't understood the illustration (even though it is fully explained in the text) this is a diagonal wipe describing a transition of time (perhaps a clockwipe would make it more obvious).

We see the Republic era ships replaced by ships from the same era as ANH (time has passed).

Now we can see the Death Star being built but it's not being built right after the end of the Clone Wars but about half a decade before ANH after the Empire is fully established and their starfleet has been upgraded to what we see in the OT.

Bingowings said:

Perhaps the motion of a TIE-fighter could cover the wipe (nothing says OT to me more than a TIE) :

Tie Wipe

I like the idea, I like it a lot.  What will be the last shot of the movie in that case?  The construction of the DS maybe?  Oh my gosh, I can't remember what the ending is currently!  It's been completely removed from my brain?  I remember all the things that happen, but the order is completely gone!  Good for me, I guess, huh?

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mrbenja0618 said:

About the grievous/vader idea..... I like the idea... Just not sure if it's possible. We would have to figure out a new way of him being defeated without him exploding as he has currently in ROTS.

My idea was to have Grievous do the falling down thing so popular with Star Wars characters (he has already done the hand cut off thing).

Which would possibly mean making a model with the new head and filming it tumbling to an uncertain end.

If all direct references to Anakin being Vader until the end, were removed it would leave a question mark over which one is Vader.

You could even redub his lines so Grievous says something about learning from every fight he has had with Obi-Wan so he is a pupil of his 'from a certain point of view'.

Grievous has spent a lot of time hunting down and destroying Jedi.

Haven't figured out how Obi-Wan can get away with the betraying and murdering line yet though.

 

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Bingowings said:

Perhaps the motion of a TIE-fighter could cover the wipe (nothing says OT to me more than a TIE) :

Tie Wipe

I really like this idea. Coupled with the imperial march chiming in at the right moment, this would give me goosebumps!

 

Bingowings said:

My idea was to have Grievous do the falling down thing so popular with Star Wars characters (he has already done the hand cut off thing).

Which would possibly mean making a model with the new head and filming it tumbling to an uncertain end.

If all direct references to Anakin being Vader until the end, were removed it would leave a question mark over which one is Vader.

You could even redub his lines so Grievous says something about learning from every fight he has had with Obi-Wan so he is a pupil of his 'from a certain point of view'.

Grievous has spent a lot of time hunting down and destroying Jedi.

Haven't figured out how Obi-Wan can get away with the betraying and murdering line yet though.

I think the line "who was a pupil of mine before he turned to evil" is the most problematic thing to try to account for. If this line didn't exist, we could just assume that Obi Wan is protecting Luke from both the fact that his father turned to the darkside and covering up for having brutally killed him himself.

This is why I've previously proposed a more radical edit of not having Hayden Christensen (or Jake Lloyd) be Anakin at all. That way, we initially assume that Hayden became Vader, and survived his ordeal on Mustafar, and then went on to hunt down the remaining Jedi - one of which would have been Luke's dad. (which accounts for the betrayed and murdered your father line)

Until, that is, it's revealed in ESB that he is in fact Luke's father, and "Hayden", we can assume, died from his injuries (YAY!)

As for actually seeing Anakin in the prequels. Adywan has demonstrated what can be done with the emperor's hologram in ESB:R. We could have Anakin communicating with Obi Wan, or others via hologram, and some wizardry like on the ESB:R Emperor hologram could bring a young Sebastian Shaw to life. Get someone with a similar voice and accent as ROTJ Sebastian Shaw (not that critical seeing as he's got no lungs by that point), and hey presto! Some dialogue between them could also account for the "was once a pupil of mine" line too. Obi Wan, now equal with "Hayden", had begun training a new Apprentice before the events of Episode 3. We could even, at one point, after Hayden "dies", have Sebastian Shaw-Anakin get attacked by an anonymous figure, have the hologram cut out, leading us to think Hayden survived (which would be reinforced by the end montage where we see armoured vader overseeing the death star's construction), and that Shaw-Anakin is now dead, but leaving enough ambiguity so that we can make sense of it come the revelation in ESB. Phew! I'm confusing myself now.

Not sure what scenes or dialogue we have to work with for that, however. One could have the Sebastian Shaw impersonator doing most of the talking if our ObiWan lines are limited. Anyone interested in doing a mockup of a hologram of a young Sebastian Shaw, just to see what it would look like?

Not pretending this isn't a very radical and difficult (probably impossible) edit to pull off, but it's the absolute only way I can think of to account for the prequels ruining the impact of Empire. This would then cease to be Anakin's story, but Obi Wan's in the PT, who then passes the torch to Luke in the OT to carry on the hero's journey.

 

EDIT: Here's an example of a young Sebastian Shaw as a Jedi. Sorry I couldn't find a bigger size.

 

http://www.sebastianshaw.com/assets/images/anmod3b.jpg

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Also, if it wasn't for Obi Wan describing Luke's father as "the best star pilot in the galaxy, a cunning warrior, a good friend" in A New Hope, I'd go so far as to say that all that would need doing to preserve the impact in ESB would be to remove all reference to the name Skywalker in the PT as well as the twins being born/rehomed as this would remove any connection between Anakin and Luke.

As it stands, it's obvious who Obi Wan is talking about, even though he was anything but "a good friend".

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I'm surprised that nobody has brought this up yet (maybe someone has but this is post 2565) but as far as I can make out (other than battledroids which don't count) TPM is the only Star Wars film where no named character loses a hand.

This clearly needs to be sorted out.

So who in Episode One should get the hand chop (please not Ric Olié he'd never shut up about it)?

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Qui gon can has his hand melted.

When obi Slices maul you can cut his hand too ( spooky)

maybe Maul cuts Qui's hands instead of the saber slap.

 

-Angel

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Maybe Ron Richging could lose his hand while Padme shoots his robot guards thus cementing his hatred of her in the following films.

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Bingowings said:

I'm surprised that nobody has brought this up yet (maybe someone has but this is post 2565) but as far as I can make out (other than battledroids which don't count) TPM is the only Star Wars film where no named character loses a hand.

This clearly needs to be sorted out.

So who in Episode One should get the hand chop (please not Ric Olié he'd never shut up about it)?

RIC OLIE: The shield generator's been hit!

QUI-GON slices off his hand.

RIC OLIE: My hand is missing!

 

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TV's Frink said:

RIC OLIE: The shield generator's been hit!

QUI-GON slices off his hand.

RIC OLIE: My hand is missing!

HAHAHHAHAHAHA.

I will put is sig after that i have now! Thank you for that hahahaha


-Angel

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vaderios said:
TV's Frink said:

RIC OLIE: The shield generator's been hit!

QUI-GON slices off his hand.

RIC OLIE: My hand is missing!

HAHAHHAHAHAHA.

I will put is sig after that i have now! Thank you for that hahahaha


-Angel

You're welcome, Angel.  I should only have to wait about, oh, 20 seconds or so, right?

Joking aside, should mention you've been doing amazing mock-up work!

Edit: 20 seconds was exactly right!  I hope that sig stays up a little longer - it's good advertising :-)

 

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TV's Frink said:

You're welcome, Angel.  I should only have to wait about, oh, 20 seconds or so, right?

Joking aside, should mention you've been doing amazing mock-up work!

Done!

Thanks! :)

Edit: Hell yeah!

 

-Angel

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Bingowings said:

I'm surprised that nobody has brought this up yet (maybe someone has but this is post 2565) but as far as I can make out (other than battledroids which don't count) TPM is the only Star Wars film where no named character loses a hand.

This clearly needs to be sorted out.

So who in Episode One should get the hand chop (please not Ric Olié he'd never shut up about it)?

 

 i dont remember anyone losing a hand in ANH

John Williams score to Return of the Jedi Remastered/Remixed:

http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/JOHN-WILLIAMS-Star-Wars-Episode-VI-Return-of-the-Jedi-Remastered-Edition/topic/14606/page/1/

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fishmanlee said:

 i dont remember anyone losing a hand in ANH

Cantina scene... even he is not a named character

 

-Angel

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