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STAR WARS: EP V "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - 12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW — Page 1160

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FVDnz said:


Isn't Rogue 2 the guy who found Luke and Han with the Tauntaun?!


Problem is he has nothing to do with bringing down the first AT-AT like muddyknees said it's about trying to tell a better story rather than random shots

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Tobar said:

Han tells Luke that he's sticking him in the Tauntaun to keep him warm until he can build the shelter. I figure the mound of snow we see in front of the beacon is the tent that was snowed over during the night. There's a whole scene that takes place inside the shelter in the radio play.

That's interesting. I need to listen to the radio drama of ESB. I've only listened to ANH (three times through).

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I'm not sure if anyone has mentioned this before, but in the Battle of Hoth 2 people fall down for no apparent reason. Also one rebel is shot by an AT-AT, but you can barely see it. Has Adywan said anything about fixing these errors?

 

Also I see on the Star Wars Revisited page's cover photo on facebook that ESB:R will be released near the end of 2013. I really hope so because my dad is 42 and hasn't seen the OT (I know >_>) and I want him to have the definitive Star Wars experience, but I've been keeping him waiting ever since April when ESB:R was set to release in May and I think he's growing rather impatient.

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Lord Haseo said:

Also I see on the Star Wars Revisited page's cover photo on facebook that ESB:R will be released near the end of 2013. I really hope so because my dad is 42 and hasn't seen the OT (I know >_>) and I want him to have the definitive Star Wars experience, but I've been keeping him waiting ever since April when ESB:R was set to release in May and I think he's growing rather impatient.

 

Tell him you misread it, it was written May 2014. ;) 

The important thing is that it is everything Adywan and his friends want it to be. I don't care when it will be released, perfection takes time, we all know that.

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Finally got to watching this on my desktop computer... Like the clip even more now.

Something to note about the clip is that the audio is still temporary even though we are discussing possibilities with Rogue 3 line which I agree with I doubt it will be like that in the final version so we are jumping the gun.

I still think that the base light is too blue / not enough white for the hologram projector though... Although I agree with the base being lit. and new hologram is faultless.

If you take into account a projected image on to a screen of one color the center where the light is more intense and more focused will have a hotspot and the edges faded out slightly with a different color temperature.

so what I mean is can you add a hotspot?

But to be honest it's not a major deal I think the new clip is great and can't wait for more revisited goodness.

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I just noticed another error. After Luke tried to lift the X-Wing out of the swamp on Degobah there is a shot of him with disappointment in his eyes and he's breathing a little more than usual. In the very next shot he goes to sit next to Yoda and he's breathing rather heavily like he just ran a triathlon. Can this please be fixed?

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And how exactly do you suggest it be fixed? How can "heavy breathing" be removed without building a time machine and going back to reshoot the scene?

 

It's been years since I watched ESB simply because I'm waiting to watch this version with a clear mind so to speak, so you could be right that it looks weird or that the continuity isn't right. I honestly don't remember, but I don't see how something like that can be fixed if it indeed needs fixing.

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Scout walkers! Great stuff, keep it up Ady!

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Hi all

First post, lurked for many years :-)

Thank you Adywan for your amazing work on these films.

The technical skill you show & attention to detail are only equaled by your patience!

One minor thing I noticed in the latest clip released, is that the red graphics you've been adding to the snow speeders control console are missing from a few frames just after Dak is killed (~23").

Also is the snow speeder flap you're building to correct the shot where the speeders bank towards camera with the wrong flap up? (~57)

Finally, just to reiterate a point previously made, one thing that really stood out to me was the great golden colour of C-3PO!

Thanks again!

 

Cheers, Paul

P.S. "Steady Rouge three" works for me :-)

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Something I noticed while watching the recent vid...

It seems the side guns on the AT-ATs don't shoot evenly.  Specifically check 0:30 and 0:43 - you will notice the side guns moving, but not shooting.  Should anything be coming out of them (I'm not saying they should be constantly shooting, just when it appears they are being used and aiming at something)?

Also, should Wedge's snow speeder cast a shadow at 1:28 when he's circling around the legs in the high overhead shot?

         

 “You people must realize that the public owns you for life, and when you’re dead, you’ll all be in commercials dancing with vacuum cleaners.”

– Homer Simpson

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Monroville said:

Something I noticed while watching the recent vid...

It seems the side guns on the AT-ATs don't shoot evenly.  Specifically check 0:30 and 0:43 - you will notice the side guns moving, but not shooting.  Should anything be coming out of them (I'm not saying they should be constantly shooting, just when it appears they are being used and aiming at something)?

Also, should Wedge's snow speeder cast a shadow at 1:28 when he's circling around the legs in the high overhead shot?

Good point on the shadow... Thinking about the side gun action in the overhead shot. I would say part of the problem with this is that the trail is too long. Side guns should be short rapid bursts of short trail lasers 1/4 size of main guns (or less) this would really differentiate them and make them make more sense rather than having the same effect as the "under the chin" big guns.

Because the trail is as long as the under the chin guns it shows up the angles a lot more. But the angle is correct the AT-AT just moved it's head.

What I find amazing is that so much has been altered yet we all all talking about really minor stuff it's a testament to the quality of that last clip.

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timdiggerm said:

Also, why did you post this in the ESB:R thread? Not relevant!

Because no one reads threads.  Also, free Pussy Riot!

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For those of you who cannot view or download the new clip, you can watch it on my Vimeo Channel at:

http://www.vimeo.com/79789509

Watch in fullscreen with the HD on for full effect.

 

I am a kite dancing in a hurricane …

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I'm sure Ady is still working some more on the visuals of this clip, but I just wanted to put on my "critique goggles" and be helpful in finding anything that's worth mentioning and possibly corrected/edited (in case any of these flew under the radar).

Paden said:

One minor thing I noticed in the latest clip released, is that the red graphics you've been adding to the snow speeders control console are missing from a few frames just after Dak is killed (~23").

Yep, you're right.

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should Wedge's snow speeder cast a shadow at 1:28 when he's circling around the legs in the high overhead shot?

You're right too, its shadow should be seen in there. It's shadow is also missing between 1:32 - 1:33 (you'd at least notice it on the AT-AT's legs).

Also the shadow being cast by the snowspeeder is noticeably off between 1:24 - 1:25 when comparing it to the AT-AT's shadow (it's as if the light source is different between these two objects).

I believe the white cores are missing in the lasers at 0:42 (is it because what's seen outside the AT-AT's window will be changed?) and also between 0:58 - 1:00. All of the other lasers look perfect that I can tell.

At 1:45, the AT-AT's back leg (the far right one) has an attachment on the foot that appears to be off and then it suddenly "jumps" to its correct location between frames.

The bend in the AT-AT's legs as its tripping (more noticeably it's rear legs) are different at 1:47 than they are in the subsequent side-view shot. Not sure if it's fixable, but still worth mentioning.

The mountains in the background to the left of the fallen AT-AT (at 1:55) I believe are different than they were previously (at 1:50 for example). I noticed that other areas in several of the backgrounds were fixed though.

I think that is all that's worth mentioning - I hope this was helpful :)

I still can't get over how much I loved all of the little details that were added, no matter how minor, such as the snow being kicked up from the blasts as the speeders are beginning to shoot at the fallen AT-AT ;)

Wishlist Of Ideas/Suggestions For Improving ROTJ

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I had an idea today about re-authoring the DVD chapter titles and where possible use official canon titles that read better and are more inspiring here is an example of something I threw together quickly.

1 Opening Logos >>> Opening Logos / Prologue
2 The Empire Strikes Back >>> The Empire Strikes Back
3 Ice Planet Hoth >>> Ice Planet Hoth
4 The Rebel Base >>> The Rebel Base
5 Escape From The Wampa >>> The Wampa's Lair
6 Closing The Doors >>> Closing The Doors
7 Obi-Wan's Instructions >>> Obi-Wan's Instructions
8 Search Party >>> Snowspeeders Take Flight
9 Luke's Recovery >>> Luke's Recovery
10 Imperial Probe Droid >>> Imperial Probe Droid
11 The Imperial Fleet >>> The Imperial Fleet
12 Preparing For Battle >>> The Coming Storm
13 First Transport Away >>> The Ion Cannon
14 Battle In The Snow >>> Fire and Ice
15 The Tide Turns >>> The Tide Turns
16 Rebels In Retreat >>> Rebels In Retreat
17 Escape Aboard The Falcon >>> Escape From Echo Base
18 Leaving For Dagobah >>> Leaving For Dagobah
19 The Empire In Pursuit >>> The Empire In Pursuit
20 Asteroid Field >>> Asteroid Field
21 Crash Landing On Dagobah >>> Crash Landing On Dagobah
22 Hunting The Falcon >>> Hunting The Falcon
23 "Found Someone, You Have" >>> Luke's Nocturnal Visitor
24 Interrupted Kiss >>> Han Solo and the Princess
25 The Emperor's Message >>> The Emperor's Message
26 Yoda's Hut >>> Yoda's Hut
27 "This Is No Cave" >>> The Mynock Cave
28 Jedi Training >>> The Training of a Jedi Knight
29 Failure At The Cave >>> An Evil Place
30 Bounty Hunters >>> Bounty Hunters
31 There Is No Try >>> Yoda and the force
32 Out With The Garbage >>> Out With The Garbage
33 Seeing The Future >>> Seeing The Future
34 City In The Clouds >>> City In The Clouds
35 Meeting Lando >>> Lando's Palace
36 Leaving Dagobah >>> Leaving Dagobah
37 Leia's Concerns >>> Leia's Concerns
38 Imperial Surprise >>> Betrayal at Bespin
39 The Deal Gets Worse >>> Deal with the Dark Lord
40 Carbon-Freeze >>> Carbon-Freeze
41 Luke Enters The Trap >>> The Trap
42 Confronting The Dark Lord >>> Confronting The Dark Lord / Vader
43 Lando's Second Surprise >>> Lando's Dilemma
44 Lightsaber Duel >>> The Clash of the Lightsabres
45 Escape From Cloud City >>> Escape From Cloud City
46 Vader's Revelation >>> Vader's Revelation
47 Falcon To The Rescue >>> Falcon To The Rescue
48 The Empire Closes In >>> The Empire Closes In
49 The Rebel Fleet >>> The Rebel Fleet
50 End Credits >>> End Credits

The original is on the left an edited version on the right. I used the soundtrack the radio drama and a bit of inspiration but I think the actual official chapter list is a bit thrown together and the titles could have been better. Just an idea for further improvement in a DVD authoring sense although it has nothing to do with the actual video. The chapters were conceived later on well after release so I thought this could perhaps do with a makeover and a better use of Chapter titles could be thought up where appropriate.

Just some food for thought and not saying this is what I think it should be but don't know really just thinking of the actual original titles that seem to have been misplaced for sentences characters say more than anything else.

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Excellent work, Ady. But why did you change the Vader hologram? The new image looks too clean and hokey for some reason. I like the staticky interference look better. I'll tell you this, though, the Hoth battle looks so much cooler with all the AT-STs in it now. Bravo!

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fgqb#19nyj said:

But why did you change the Vader hologram?

The original was shot at the wrong angle and very badly rotoscoped. Vader has an egghead and his feet are missing. The new hologram shows Vader as he should be.

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There were many great visual FX achievements in ESB.

The original Vader hologram however was not one of them. I'm VERY happy with that upgrade.

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The only complaint I could make towards Ady's new Vader hologram is that he looks a little short and stout for some reason.  It might be the angle, but if his image were stretched just a tiny bit to make him appear taller, I think it would be spot on.  Either way, a billion times better than the old one.

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It IS indeed the angle. The actor playing the part was the right height. No artificial distortion is needed.

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It's my understanding that Ady did stretch the hologram a little already. It doesn't need it anymore. The problem is the old one was at the wrong angle and that's what's burned into everyone's memories.

Nothing hokey about it. The original Vader puts his hands on his hips in a very un-Vaderlike Diva Pose. The new hologram matches Vader's stance perfectly.