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ok. here's my reasoning why i won't be adding any drop ships of any kind.

Take a look from the beginning of the battle sequence. First we see a shot of the empty landscape:

a little later we see the same shot but with something added:

Now look where your eye is drawn to. The small dots.

Now add the dropship:

Now see where your eye is drawn too, especially if this shot was moving. it isn't the small dots any more. You are now focusing on the larger vessel. Chances are because its a quick shot you wouldn't even look at the At-At's at all but instead you would be too focused on the leaving drop ship. IMHO this spoils the shot. You need to be focusing on the small dots on the Horizon or the binocular reveal just doesn't have the same impact. Plus, if you look at the whole scene the rebels are only just getting into the trenches to prepare for the battle when they appear on the horizon. If you add any dropships then surely they would have seen the ships and get ready a lot earlier. So, sorry, but there will not be any form of dropships added to ESB:R

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Makes sense.  I just kind of wanted my suggestion in digital form for my own sake.

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doubleofive said:

Makes sense.  I just kind of wanted my suggestion in digital form for my own sake.

thats ok. i love seeing all these ideas.

I'm just preparing a new 8 minute clip that shows just how well the  colour correction was coming along before this damn power supply problem. I'm getting real withdrawal symptoms from being unable to do anything on this edit until i can get my new one. I've had to take out one of my drives with some footage on and try to render an XVID with my wifes laptop (i can't even start the PC up anymore), which is why i've been a bit quite. * minutes is taking so long to convert from HD to an smaller res XVID. there's no way i could possibly do any of the correction on this heap. ( hope the wife don't read what i just said about her laptop. lol). i can't wait until the 18th when we finally get some money, and i'm preying that i can afford to get it then. So fingers crossed. The cip hopefully will be online a short time.

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Because the drop ship isn’t in the background….and to top it all in that pictures the ship is too big.

So we need a smaller ship in the background…it would be great. But the decision is yours Adywan.

And what about the explosions of the AT-AT’s head and the death of Veers?

I just say that because if you want, I can make some art for the scene or story board because I am a concept designer. I’m glad if I can help you to draw some concept art. Even if I can’t write English very well. J

 

 

 

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AxiaEuxine said:

BTW where can I see this  "extended Alderaan destuction" sequence?

 

It's on the dual layer version of the SW:R DVD. It's Pretty cool sceene, but not fitting to the movie. Jar Jar dies there ;)

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Adywan, and after the AT AT reaveled the empire droping additonal forces? I mean there can be a second wave of At At's coming ot from the dropships. Sorry for this after you decided about there won't any dropships, but wanted to ask this.

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Excellent clip.  Great colors everywhere.  Is it weird that I already miss the changes you previewed for the probe droid sequence?  Are you going to have to start from scratch with that sequence now that you've done color correction, or just re-color correct what you already had?

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Excellent clip.  Great colors everywhere.  Is it weird that I already miss the changes you previewed for the probe droid sequence?  Are you going to have to start from scratch with that sequence now that you've done color correction, or just re-color correct what you already had?

I'll be starting from scratch for most of it but having the saved project files for the work already done makes life a bit easier, plus i also need to build the new model of the Generator.

 

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adywan said:
doubleofive said:

Excellent clip.  Great colors everywhere.  Is it weird that I already miss the changes you previewed for the probe droid sequence?  Are you going to have to start from scratch with that sequence now that you've done color correction, or just re-color correct what you already had?

I'll be starting from scratch for most of it but having the saved project files for the work already done makes life a bit easier, plus i also need to build the new model of the Generator.

Physically build a new model?  Cause that would be awesome.

I'm just full of questions!

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Well, after viewing the preview clip, I've got to agree 100% with Adywan about adding extra ships to the AT-AT reveal. It would detract from the shot. I can see maybe adding some more AT-AT's to the battle sequence, but no ships. The matte backdrop is pretty clearly supposed to be fog/clouds, not debris from a landing or takeoff. As far as building models... awesome... just... awesome...

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Adywan:

Do you want or need any kind of help about the generator model? Because, I am a scratch builder, concept “artist” and model maker. I would be soooo glad if I can help you any form.

Just visit my web page, and see what usually I doing if I have a free time.

 

www.weylandyutani.extra.hu

All model is self made! The newest is the Trade Federation Droid Tank.A full scratch build model. 

About the Video...what can i say...Excellent color correction as always. Adywan quality. :)

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Zééé said:

Adywan:

Do you want or need any kind of help about the generator model? Because, I am a scratch builder, concept “artist” and model maker. I would be soooo glad if I can help you any form.

Just visit my web page, and see what usually I doing if I have a free time.

 

www.weylandyutani.extra.hu

(Be patience, free webspace, slow download speed)

Thanks for the offer but building the models is what i really enjoy doing myself

 

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OMG. I am the anti-George. lol

That can only be a good thing now unfortunatly.

But...model builder, painter, editor....is there nothing you cant turn your hand to?

Thats some great work there by the way Zeee.

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Darth Solo: Thanks...:)

There are lot of things what I usually do…art, sculpting, modeling. I really like the art, and because my grandfather is a sculptor and “artist”…you know, this is a family legacy. I have many things what I didn’t upload my page, because that is only a portfolio page. Once in a time if I have a will and free time, I upload. But because I am lazy, it is not happened every time, just once in a year. :D

 

If I can help, drawing concept or storyboards, or making models for Adywan….here am I.

 

I have some great idea about the death of Veers, so if it help, I can draw some storyboards…or concept illustration. Just call me. :)

 

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Darth Solo: Thanks...:)

There are lot of things what I usually do…art, sculpting, modeling. I really like the art, and because my grandfather is a sculptor and “artist”…you know, this is a family legacy. I have many things what I didn’t upload my page, because that is only a portfolio page. Once in a time if I have a will and free time, I upload. But because I am lazy, it is not happened every time, just once in a year. :D

 

If I can help, drawing concept or storyboards, or making models for Adywan….here am I.

 

I have some great idea about the death of Veers, so if it help, I can draw some storyboards…or concept illustration. Just call me. :)

I think Solo was talking about Adywan.

 

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Yes? :D:D:D:D:D

Nothing wrong....even if it isn't call to me....thanks everyone. :D

Adywan is a great editor, and if he could do models like he do the editorial job....than the Empire movie is in good hands.

But all men needs help...and the Star Wars is a collective experience. Or am i wrong?

 

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Zééé said:

Yes? :D:D:D:D:D

Nothing wrong....even if it isn't call to me....thanks everyone. :D

Adywan is a great editor, and if he could do models like he do the editorial job....than the Empire movie is in good hands.

But all men needs help...and the Star Wars is a collective experience. Or am i wrong?

Adywan seems to be a "do it yourself" kind of guy.  He's not afraid to ask for help with things he cannot do very well (computer generated ships, for example), but he has so many talents that he tends to want to do it all.  And I can't blame him, as the only way to really guarantee the level of quality that you want is to do it all yourself.

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doubleofive said:
Zééé said:

Darth Solo: Thanks...:)

There are lot of things what I usually do…art, sculpting, modeling. I really like the art, and because my grandfather is a sculptor and “artist”…you know, this is a family legacy. I have many things what I didn’t upload my page, because that is only a portfolio page. Once in a time if I have a will and free time, I upload. But because I am lazy, it is not happened every time, just once in a year. :D

 

If I can help, drawing concept or storyboards, or making models for Adywan….here am I.

 

I have some great idea about the death of Veers, so if it help, I can draw some storyboards…or concept illustration. Just call me. :)

I think Solo was talking about Adywan.

 

 

He complimented Zeee's work in the last line of his post, actually.

Back on topic:

I agree with Ady about the dropships.  I would, however, like to see either Veers' death sequence OR the idea of a speeder crashing into a different AT-AT's head to make it explode (rather than the odd coincidence of a bomb in its belly causing its head to explode).

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Dont knock down Zeee. Thats the first time hes written a response in the communal font here, EDIT -'almost the first time' since i posted that response! Welcome to the forums. Your ideas and tallents are much appreciated here :-)

Aint the languge barrier a freash way of looking at things?

Chainsaw, i had a pain in my belly once, and i felt like my head was going to explode, then it came out the other end unfortunatly, as i was in work at the time.

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Darth Solo: Thanks again :D

 

This is a great forum, with full of great and talented men. Adywan is one of them. And most of all, we are all In the family. We are all ONE, it’ doesn’t matter the country of origin. Being a Star Wars fan meant, you have a big family and you are part of it. I am glad to be a member of this great community. Of Corse in my country, we have an own fan community (also great)…but because my country is very small, only 10 million people….we are (fans) only few in number.   And unfortunately, the Star Wars meant nothing to the Hungaryan people, because we have many serious problems. But I can shore everyone, all Hungarian Star Wars Fans really like to read this page. And what is more, when the Revisited EPIV came to light, all the Hungarian fans enjoyed together, what Adywan did. Yes, it was a big chat, across weeks and weeks. J

"Aint the language barrier a freash way of looking at things?"  Mostly Yes :)

I like the English language so much, unfortunately I can’t even write or speak correctly. It’s because, the Hungarian language is so different. One of the most difficult languages on the world. So beautiful and so hard, and that is why, all the people in my country have a strange accent if anyone try to speak English. So sorry if I have some grammatical impropriety.

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See what i mean?

Keep it up with those ideas and images your posting my friend. Really good artwork, as i aint got some of them. Just dont get to over enthusiastic. You can write the languge possibly better than me ;-)

EDIT - Hang on. You are really trying to embrace the spirit of Star Wars? You've told us a lot of things about your country, yet how old are you out of interest? Yeah, this should be a PM question, but just as an example, as im curious?

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Awesome color correction, Ady! Looks great!

One thing I noticed is that when the Star Destroyer is shot and disabled by the Ion Cannon, the Rebel Transport that flies by has a noticeable matte frame around it.