-Transition from “plot to destroy the Jedi” to Anakin granted seat on the council scene is quite bad. It halts musically and then the audio suddenly kicks back in.
-The musical transitions during Yodas confrontation with Sidious stand out like a sore thumb.
-And more of a scene reordering critique is something I found with the edit. Anakin practically has 2 motivations to join the dark side… Those being his distrust in the Jedi Council and their code and saving padme. Now I don’t know if you agree here but I feel as if throughout the Clone Wars series (2008) and the intense focus on the Jedi Code (no attachments) in the prequel films themselves it promotes those things being Anakins core beef with the Jedi. Padme in risk of dying was just the very last straw when Anakin was emotionally vulnerable to Palpatines manipulation. Palpatines channels Anakins frustration as fuel to his ever present gripe with the Jedis teachings. The reason I explain all of that is because in Hal’s edits he masterfully, seamlessly orders Anakins political/Jedi issues first and then he geniusly pairs Anakins nightmare with the Opera scene directly following. This grand scheme displayed in Hal’s edit is beautifully done to bring out the hidden glory of Revenge of the Sith. Contrary to this as I’m watching L8wtrs DOTE it constantly is switching between Anakin having a nightmare, then political talk with obi wan, then back to the padme at risk storyline with the opera scene etc. on and on this goes with scenes that all feel very disconnected.
That is my pretty thorough consensus of what prevents me from liking L8wtrs edit more than I already do.