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Info: "Deleted scene reconstruction thread" - post your reconstructions here

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post your reconstructions of deleted scenes from the star wars trilogy

my own (Rough) reconstructions

hobbie’s/Veer’s death
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iE4I8eGS7qM

**ROTJ Saber construction
**http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B9t3gLxJYsY

note: I dont know if a thread has already been posted about this

John Williams score to Return of the Jedi Remastered/Remixed:

http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/JOHN-WILLIAMS-Star-Wars-Episode-VI-Return-of-the-Jedi-Remastered-Edition/topic/14606/page/1/

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First, the Veers death sequence:

You used the exact same shot of the AT-AT's head exploding, and it's incredibly obvious.  Doesn't work so well - I frankly think the sequence works fine without Veers' death, anyway.

Now, the "lightsaber building" scene ...

Random shots of Luke talking to Yoda played under audio from the radio drama, which doesn't even sound that much like Mark Hamill?  Um ... no, doesn't work so well.  And I'm pretty sure I've seen that first/last image in someone else's mock-up YouTube video recently, zooming in/out in that exact same way - if that's true, you've given that person no credit, and that's not cool.

Just my two cents.

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i didnt steal it i zoomed it in so it focused on the cave enterance i zoomed it out because... well because it worked that way (if you dont believe me check my alternate opening video) and i used the yoda footage because it was in a hut and i couldnt use bens hut footage because he wears white/grey clothing

also why i used the AT-AT head exploding
http://www.starwarz.com/tbone/index.php?categoryid=10&p2_articleid=394
watch the reenactment in the multimeda section

John Williams score to Return of the Jedi Remastered/Remixed:

http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/JOHN-WILLIAMS-Star-Wars-Episode-VI-Return-of-the-Jedi-Remastered-Edition/topic/14606/page/1/

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fishmanlee said:

(but thank you for being honest and for pointing it/that out)

So, you're thanking me for pointing out that you stole someone else's work and passed it off as your own?  Give credit where credit is due, man.

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I love everybody. Lets all smoke some reefer and chill. Hug and kisses for everybody.

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I'm sorry, but that "lightsaber build" video is just so god-awful in concept and execution, I can't stand it.

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Fishmanlee is a festering ass pimple on the back end of the Star Wars Fan Editing community.

 

I love everybody. Lets all smoke some reefer and chill. Hug and kisses for everybody.

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Such an obvious troll, why are we giving him any acknowledgment?

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Sumguy21 said:

Such an obvious troll, why are we giving him any acknowledgment?

 

Umm....so we don't fall to the darkside and have our legs and arms cut off?

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I don't like the way the radio drama handled that scene. Luke sounded whiny and impatient just like in ESB, not like the wiser and more humble Luke we see in ROTJ.

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Bizarre as it may seem I think the idea of this thread is a good one regardless of the track record it's originator.

It gives people small projects to work on, people can expand on rough versions by developing new effects etc so I'm Ok with the thread.

And as a rough video mockup Veers death gives a very basic idea of what it might look like.

As for the Lightsaber construction reconstruction (on top of adding my voice to the call for credit the source) I refer the honorable genteman to the answer I gave him sometime ago :

Bingowings said:

Audio drama requires expositional dialogue to explain physical actions (because we can't see it).

Visual drama doesn't, it shows you the physical actions.

Merging these two together gives you the worst of both worlds, visual drama which isn't visual  and is bogged down with expositional dialogue.

Besides the saber building itself spoils the surprise of the Trojan horse in Artoo.

All you would need to see would be Luke doing something near Artoo and perhaps his hatch shutting (like Leia putting the plans in him in ANH).

Which is why I moved the idea into Ben's hut because Ben would have the tools and books and merged it with Ben's ghost finishing the story about Anakin (bookending him starting the story in ANH).

It also looks (and I know this is rough) like Mark has hiccups and I can't see a way around that without not showing his face.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LHy0o3S6zU0

V.2 of my Reconstruction of the deleted scene of luke building his new lightsaber (features some footage from Adywan's Revisited and Jambe Davdar's Returning to Jedi) also mark still looks like he has hiccups

John Williams score to Return of the Jedi Remastered/Remixed:

http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/JOHN-WILLIAMS-Star-Wars-Episode-VI-Return-of-the-Jedi-Remastered-Edition/topic/14606/page/1/