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darth_ender said:
Trying to address a few things: Ronster, I'm not really a big fan of most of Jabba's altered lines. The only one that maybe sounds equal or better is, "Now we will deal with you."
Also regarding wrapping up the brother/sister plot point, I think if you'd prefer that Luke not tell Leia, then that addition to the end does nothing but slow down the ending. I just perhaps she doesn't even ever need to know--she just loves Han in the end.
The whole thing with the ships jumping to hyperspace in the end is not my ideal ending, but I have to admit that it's pretty cool. I'll include it in the vote.
I also admit that I am laughing at what you did with Jerjerrod. The shield goes down, the Executor crashes into the Death Star, and then the Imperial officer replaces Ric Olie as the new Captain Obvious by telling Jerjerrod that "the shield is down." I must admit that I skimmed that point and missed it. That's pretty darn funny! However, I like how you rearranged some of the shots with the amount of damage to the Death Star seemingly far more as a result of the Executor's crash, and I like that Jerjerrod orders the fleet to take a defensive position around the Death Star. However, it's clear that you didn't want the Death Star to fire on Endor, something that I think improves the tension in the film drastically. And I personally like my own portrayal of his demise better.
As always, it's constructive criticism, but that's what I feel. And while I don't always agree with your ideas, that doesn't mean I think they are bad. They're just not what I would do.
I liked a lot of the additional battle shots you added, though I know they are just to convey ideas.
Thanks for the feedback D and no offense taken, I understand that you see things different to myself, like I said it was meant to be a what about this?
Jabbas lines where just a bit of experimentation really was not sure myself how they work but my favourite has to be "you'll regret this we have powerfull friends" and jabba saya "No I won't princess" and licks her face lol
No I did not want the deathstar to fire on Endor... I just think mutiny would occur before out and out suicide especially when the rebels are still outnumbered just because the shield has already gone down from the Endor surface it's too drastic to resort to somthing like that under the conditions I assume the plan would have been to call off this once luke had been turned... But It makes little sense as the tension is lost because everyone dies in this eventuality and I preferred to portray Jejerrod as a paniced weed without the emperor there to fire his orders at him... To see him fall apart and it made me lol I think you meant to say that the superlaser looses it's power generators after the executor crashes into DSII
Luke not telling leia is the main theme really of the edit in a sense this is still unfinished and needs some extra lines for the emotional payoff specifically revealing that Luke was right about his father whilst telling leia she is his sister. So I understand because I would need to manipulate lines or use the radio drama or dub somthing to reach the conclusion which leaves leia gobsmacked and becomes more her story rather than lukes after this point. It's also meant to make Vader more a real human being and a cool down after the celebrations. You might be right somtimes less is more but I'd like to get some other opinions on this too
Why should we feel that there is no need for the rebels after ROTJ so I wanted to do a "to be continued...." feel to the end even though there is no sequel
Edit: Getting another trial of CS5 I've got unfinished business with the space battle it's bugging me I never managed to finish all the shots I was hoping to mock-up and I'm sure it will be fun and I just have to see the ties racing after the rebels over DSII surface with rebels biting the dust so I'm doing it and some other space battle shots too...
If anyone can tell me where i can get footage of mon cal cruisers I'll be happy :)