Star Wars: A New Threat (TFA EDIT) (Released) — Page 10

Sorry have been having some internet issues. Will be getting on that. I may throw up previews for scenes that are cut so that any dialogue contradicting the plot change is removed. When Kylo/Hux talk to Snoke a second time, I had to cut Snoke talking about crushing the resistance. The rebel briefing is trimmed up too so yah once internet gets working, I’ll have em up.

Hux’s speech and everything up until Hans death would be easy to master for the plot change. But I think some more serious restructuring and rescoring in the third act could be effective.

But getting Hux’s speech right and cutting contradictory references being removed is the first step.

K here’s a couple previews. It’s Hux’s speech, altered meeting with Snoke and altered rebel briefing. I cut Snoke talking about crushing the resistance, and during the briefing cut Leia saying there the next target. Feedback on the ideas is welcome. None of the cuts would be ready to go into an edit fresh but I think the editing in the previews is pretty seamless despite maybe some transitions.

Rebel briefing: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6oj5qynL5zQejRIMFR2X1lKYXc

Meeting with Snoke:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6oj5qynL5zQWU5ycVhmWkpmLUE

Hux’s speech:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6oj5qynL5zQektjZWExdExONzg

Shit let me try to fix that haha

Ok, updated the links.

Sweet. It’s the third act to figure out now haha. I may throw up a clip tonight of playing around with it. The final project would need to have rescoring done most likely. R u skilled at either removing music or creating sfx? The rescored scenes would only need sfx so I guess I could use “Star Wars Sounds” (Myspleen) and recreate the sfx. In That_OT_Rulers edit he is removing the music so we could maybe get help from him. I’m thinking of using Order 66 music once it cuts to Leia grieving. Then right before Chewie blows explosives, we cut to Starkiller firing, then back to Chewie blowing explosives, then to Poe coming through the opening. This string of events with order 66 music would be pretty emotional I would guess.

We can then shift the rest of the trench run earlier and intercut it with the bombs being set. Then during lightsaber fight it would cut to people evacuating rather than the trench run.

So yah, when I get home I’ll show you my basic idea with previews.

K probably just ask OTRuler for help or I could try out the sfx myself.

I like the speech scene but the music is a tad too loud making it hard to hear Hux’s voice. Overall very nice 😃

Cool Idea! I’d probably stick with how it is now because I like how the music is timed quite a bit 😃

Yah. I just thought about the pieces in Star Wars that would best improve the brevity of the scene. Also “Anakins Dark Deeds” signified a massive shift in the galaxy when originally used. So it is recycled here because it not only sounds awesome but the tide has turned in the galaxy. It marks the tragic start of the First Orders Rise. Cause in TK’s edit they ultimately succeed at the end despite the weapon being destroyed, they accomplished the goal of destroying the ignorant republic. This plot change definetly improves the film a lot as a whole.

Sounds good!

That sucks. I’m looking forward to it though, don’t feel rushed. You’re allowed to take breaks.