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darth_ender
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The Star Wars: The Lost Workprint (* unfinished project - lots of info *)
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8-Nov-2014, 5:00 PM

I'm about to stuff your thread with most of chapter 12 from Star Wars.  Hopefully you find this enlightening.  Let me know if I'm not being useful.  I hope this isn't annoying.  If you want to skip to the most relevant posts, go here.

     "Check, Blue Two. Watch yourself. All ships, stand by to  lock  S-foils

in attack mode."

     One after another, from Luke and Biggs, Wedge and the other members  of

Blue assault squadron, the replies came back. "Standing by..."

     "Execute," Blue Leader commanded, when John D. and Piggy had  indicated

they were in readiness.

     The double wings on the X-wing fighters split apart, like narrow seeds.

Each fighter  now  displayed  four  wings,  its  wing-mounted  armament  and

quadruple engines now deployed for maximum firepower and maneuverability.

     Ahead, the Imperial station continued to grow. Surface features  became

visible as each pilot recognized docking bays, broadcast antennae, and other

man-made mountains and canyons.

     As he neared that threatening black sphere for the second time,  Luke's

breathing  grew  faster.  Automatic  life-support  machinery  detected   the

respiratory shift and compensated properly.

     Something began to buffet his ship, almost as if he were  back  in  his

skyhopper again, wrestling with the  unpredictable  winds  of  Tatooine.  He

experienced a bad moment of uncertainty until  the  calming  voice  of  Blue

Leader sounded in his ears.

     "We're passing through their  outer  shields.  Hold  tight.  Lock  down

freeze-floating controls and switch your own deflectors on, double front."

     The shaking and buffeting  continued,  worsened.  Not  knowing  how  to

compensate, Luke did exactly what he should have: remained  in  control  and

followed  orders.  Then  the  turbulence  was  gone  and  the  deathly  cold

peacefulness of space had returned.

     "That's it, we're through," Blue Leader told them  quietly.  "Keep  all

channels silent until we're on top of them. It  doesn't  look  like  they're

expecting much resistance."

     Though half the great station remained in shadow, they  were  now  near

enough for Luke to be able to discern individual lights on  its  surface.  A

ship that could show phases matching a moon... once again he marveled at the

misplaced ingenuity  and  effort  which  had  gone  into  its  construction.

Thousands of lights  scattered  across  its  curving  expanse  gave  it  the

appearance of a floating city.

     Some of Luke's comrades, since  this  was  their  first  sight  of  the

station, were even more impressed. "Look at the size of that  thing!"  Wedge

Antilles gasped over his open pickup.

     "Cut the chatter, Blue Two," Blue Leader ordered. "Accelerate to attack

velocity."

     Grim determination showed in Luke's expression as  he  flipped  several

switches above his head and began adjusting  his  computer  target  readout.

Artoo Detoo re-examined  the  nearing  station  and  thought  untranslatable

electronic thoughts.

     Blue Leader compared the station with the location  of  their  proposed

target area. "Red Leader," he  called  toward  the  pickup,  "this  is  Blue

Leader. We're in position; you can go right in. The exhaust shaft is farther

to the north. We'll keep 'em busy down here."

     Red Leader was the physical opposite of Luke's squadron  commander.  He

resembled the popular notion of a  credit  accountant-short,  slim,  shy  of

face. His skills and  dedication,  however,  easily  matched  those  of  his

counterpart and old friend.

     "We're starting for the target shaft now, Dutch. Stand by to take  over

if anything happens."

     "Check, Red Leader," came the other's  reply.  "We're  going  to  cross

their equatorial axis and try to draw their main fire. May the Force be with

you."

     From the approaching swarm, two squads of  fighters  broke  clear.  The

X-wing ships dove directly for the bulge of the station,  far  below,  while

the Y-ships curved down and northward over its surface.

     Within the station, alarm sirens began a mournful, clangorous  wail  as

slow-to-react personnel realized that the impregnable fortress was  actually

under organized attack. Admiral Motti and his tacticians  had  expected  the

Rebels' resistance to be centered around  a  massive  defense  of  the  moon

itself. They were completely unprepared for an offensive response consisting

of dozens of tiny snub ships.

     Imperial efficiency  was  in  the  process  of  compensating  for  this

strategic oversight. Soldiers scrambled to man enormous  defensive-  weapons

emplacements. Servodrivers thrummed as  powerful  motors  aligned  the  huge

devices for firing. Soon a web of annihilation began to envelop the  station

as energy weapons, electrical bolts, and explosive solids ripped out at  the

oncoming rebel craft.

     "This is Blue Five," Luke announced to his mike as he  nose  dived  his

ship in a radical attempt to confuse any electronic  predictors  below.  The

gray surface of the battle station streaked past his ports. "I'm going in."

     "I'm right behind you, Blue Five,"  a  voice  recognizable  as  Biggs's

sounded in his ears.

     The target in Luke's sights was as  stable  as  that  of  the  Imperial

defenders was evasive. Bolts  flew  from  the  tiny  vessel's  weapons.  One

started a huge fire on the dim surface below, which  would  burn  until  the

crew of the station could shut off the flow of air to the damaged section.

     Luke's glee turned to terror as he  realized  he  couldn't  swerve  his

craft in time to avoid passing through the fireball of unknown  composition.

"Pull out, Luke, pull out!" Biggs was screaming at him.

     But despite commands to shift course, the automatic  pressors  wouldn't

allow  the  necessary  centrifugal  force.  His  fighter  plunged  into  the

expanding ball of superheated gases.

     Then he was through and clear, on the other side. A rapid check of  his

controls enabled him to relax. Passage through the  intense  heat  had  been

insufficient to damage anything vital-though all four wings bore streaks  of

black, carbonized testimony to the nearness of his escape.

     Hell-flowers bloomed outside his ship as he swung it up and around in a

sharp curve. "You all right, Luke?" came Biggs's concerned query.