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darth_ender
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The Star Wars: The Lost Workprint (* unfinished project - lots of info *)
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8-Nov-2014, 5:02 PM

This and the next post are most useful for what I'm pressing.

     "Blue Five to Blue pack," Luke ordered, "let's  go!"  The  three  ships

peeled off and plunged toward the trench sector.

     Meanwhile Vader finally succeeded in hitting  his  quarry,  a  glancing

bolt that nonetheless started small, intense explosions in one  engine.  Its

R-2 unit scrambled back toward the damaged wing and struggled to repair  the

crippled power plant.

     "R-2, shut off the main feed  to  number-one  starboard  engine,"  Blue

Leader directed  quietly,  staring  resignedly  at  instruments  which  were

running impossibilities. "Hang on tight, this could get rough."

     Luke saw that Blue Leader was in trouble. "We're right above you,  Blue

Leader," he declared. "Turn to point oh five, and we'll cover for you."

     "I've lost my upper starboard engine," came the reply.

     "We'll come down for you."

     "Negative, negative. Stay there and get set up for your attack run."

     "You're sure you're all right?"

     "I think so... Stand by for a minute."

     Actually, it was somewhat less  than  a  minute  before  Blue  Leader's

gyrating X-wing plowed into the surface of the station.

     Luke watched the huge explosion dissipate below  him,  knowing  without

question its cause, sensing fully for the first time the helplessness of his

situation.  "We  just  lost  Blue  Leader,"  he   murmured   absently,   not

particularly caring if his mike picked up the somber announcement.

     On Yavin Four, Leia Organa rose from  her  chair  and  nervously  began

pacing the room. Normally perfect nails were  now  jagged  and  uneven  from

nervous chewing. It was the only indication of physical unease. The  anxiety

visible in her expression was far more revealing of her feelings, an anxiety

and worry that filled the war room on  the  announcement  of  Blue  Leader's

death.

     "Can they go on?" she finally asked Dodonna.

     The general replied with gentle resolve. "They must."

     "But we've lost so many. Without Blue or  Red  Leader,  how  will  they

regroup?"

     Dodonna was about to reply, but held his words as  more  critical  ones

sounded over the speakers.

     "Close it up, Wedge," Luke was saying, thousands  of  kilometers  away.

"Biggs, where are you?"

     "Coming in right behind you."

     Wedge replied soon after. "Okay. Boss, we're in position."

     Dodonna's gaze went to Leia. He looked concerned.

     The three X-wings moved close together high above the battle  station's

surface. Luke studied his instruments and fought irritably with one  control

that appeared to be malfunctioning.

     Someone's voice sounded in his  ears.  It  was  a  young-old  voice,  a

familiar voice: calm, content, confident,  and  reassuring-a  voice  he  had

listened to intently on the desert of  Tatooine  and  in  the  guts  of  the

station below, once upon a time.

     "Trust your feelings, Luke," was all the Kenobi-like voice said.

     Luke tapped his helmet, unsure whether he had heard  anything  or  not.

This was no time for introspection. The steely horizon of the station tilted

behind him.

     "Wedge, Biggs, we're going in," he told his wingmen. "We'll go in  full

speed. Never mind finding the trench and then accelerating. Maybe that  will

keep those fighters far enough behind us."

     "We'll stay far enough back to cover you,"  Biggs  declared.  "At  that

speed will you be able to pull out in time?"

     "Are you kidding?" Luke sneered playfully  as  they  began  their  dive

toward the surface. "It'll be just like BeggarsCanyon back home."

     "I'm right with you, Boss," noted Wedge, emphasizing the title for  the

first time. "Let's go..."

     At high speed the three slim  fighters  charged  the  glowing  surface,

pulling out after the last moment. Luke skimmed so close  over  the  station

hull that the tip of one wing grazed a  protruding  antenna,  sending  metal

splinters flying. Instantly they were enveloped  in  a  meshwork  of  energy

bolts and explosive projectiles. It intensified as they  dropped  down  into

the trench.

     "We seem to have upset  them,"  Biggs  chortled,  treating  the  deadly

display of energy as though it were all  a  show  being  put  on  for  their

amusement.

     "This is fine," Luke commented, surprised at the clear view  ahead.  "I

can see everything."

     Wedge wasn't quite as confident as he studied  his  own  readouts.  "My

scope shows the tower, but I can't make out the exhaust  port.  It  must  be

awfully small. Are you sure the computer can target it?"

     "It better," Biggs muttered.

     Luke didn't offer an  evaluation-he  was  too  busy  holding  a  course

through the turbulence produced by exploding bolts. Then, as if on  command,

the defensive fire ceased. He  glanced  around  and  up  for  signs  of  the

expected TIE fighters, but saw nothing.

     His hand went to drop the targeting visor into position, and for just a

moment he hesitated. Then he swung it down in  front  of  his  eyes.  "Watch

yourselves," he ordered his companions.

     "What about the tower?" Wedge asked worriedly.

     "You worry about those fighters," Luke snapped. "I'll worry  about  the

tower."

     They rushed on, closing  on  the  target  every  second.  Wedge  stared

upward, and his gaze suddenly froze. "Here they come-oh point three."

     Vader was setting his controls when one of  his  wingmen  broke  attack

silence. "They're making their approach too fast-they'll never  get  out  in

time."

     "Stay with them," Vader commanded.

     "They're going too fast to get a fix," his other pilot  announced  with

certainty.

     Vader studied several readouts and found that his sensors confirmed the

other estimates. "They'll still have to slow down  before  they  reach  that

tower."

     Luke contemplated the view  in  his  targeting  visor.  "Almost  home."

Seconds passed  and  the  twin  circlets  achieved  congruence.  His  finger

convulsed on the firing control. "Torpedoes away! Pull up, pull up."

     Two powerful explosions rocked the trench, striking harmlessly  far  to

one side of the minute opening. Three TIE fighters shot out of  the  rapidly

dissipating fireball, closing on the retreating rebels. "Take  them,"  Vader

ordered softly.

     Luke detected the pursuit at the same time as his  companions.  "Wedge,

Biggs, split up-it's the only way we'll shake them."

     The three ships dropped toward the station, then abruptly raced off  in

three different directions. All three TIE fighters turned and followed Luke.

     Vader fired on  the  crazily  dodging  ship,  missed,  and  frowned  to

himself. "The Force is strong with this one. Strange. I'll take him myself."

     Luke darted between defensive towers  and  wove  a  tight  path  around

projecting docking bays, all to no avail. A  single  remaining  TIE  fighter

stayed close behind. An energy bolt nicked one wing, close by an engine.  It

started to spark irregularly, threateningly. Luke fought to  compensate  and

retain full control.

     Still trying to shake his persistent assailant, he dropped back into  a

trench again. "I'm hit," he announced, "but not bad. Artoo, see what you can

do with it."

     The tiny droid unlocked himself and moved to work on the damaged engine

as energy bolts flashed by dangerously close. "Hang  on  back  there,"  Luke

counseled the Artoo unit as he worked a path around projecting  towers,  the

fighter spinning and twisting tightly through the topography of the station.

     Fire remained intense as Luke randomly changed direction and  speed.  A

series of indicators on the control panel slowly changed color; three  vital

gauges relaxed and returned to where they belonged.

     "I  think  you've  got  it,  Artoo,"  Luke  told  him  gratefully.   "I

think-there, that's it. Just try to lock it down  so  it  can't  work  loose

again."

     Artoo beeped in reply while Luke studied the whirling  panorama  behind

and above them. "I think we've lost those fighters, too. Blue group, this is

Blue Five. Are you clear?" He manipulated several controls  and  the  X-wing

shot out of the trench, still followed by emplacement fire.

     "I'm up here waiting, Boss," Wedge announced  from  his  position  high

above the station. "I can't see you."

     "I'm on my way. Blue Three, are you clear? Biggs?"

     "I've had some trouble," his friend explained,  "but  I  think  I  lost

him."

     Something showed again, damnably, on Biggs's screen.  A  glance  behind

showed the TIE fighter that had  been  chasing  him  for  the  past  several

minutes dropping in once more behind him. He swung down toward  the  station

again.