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Episode I: The Ridiculous Menace (FULL MOVIE IS AVAILABLE TO STREAM, SEE FIRST POST) — Page 20

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I don't understand what Qui-gon is saying at the end.

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Carp, I was afraid of that.  He's saying "don't be a coward."  It's taken from three different lines of his so it's very rough.  I tried to make it as clear as possible, but....

Hmmmm.....

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Yeah i don't understand quigon either. I assume you got the "don't" from "don't centre on your anxiety".

The problem is, even in that original sentence, it sounds like he's saying "Downs" for some weird reason. There's just no excuse for such weird delivery when they ADR the whole film!

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"Don't" is indeed from "don't center on your anxiety."

"Be a" is from "greed can be a powerful ally."

"Coward" is from "these Federation types are cowards."

fishman, I'm not crossfading the words.  I can try it out, but I think the issue isn't the choppiness so much as the way the words are pronounced, as brash said.  I'm not sure it can be fixed up much more.

I considered adding a subtitle, but that just seemed odd.

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TV's Frink said:


I considered adding a subtitle, but that just seemed odd.
Especially since a lot of the subtitles are the OPPOSITE of what they're saying. ;-)

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Frink, I'd suggest that, instead of the hawk call you used on the establishing shot of Tatooine's desert, you'd use the cawing crow that's in every establishing shot of Springfield's Nuclear Power Plant.

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Thanks fish.

Leonardo said:

Frink, I'd suggest that, instead of the hawk call you used on the establishing shot of Tatooine's desert, you'd use the cawing crow that's in every establishing shot of Springfield's Nuclear Power Plant.

*headsmack*

Now why didn't I think of that?  Consider it done.

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TV's Frink said:

Continuation of the arrival on Tatooine:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jBRTHoItyD0

Nice. But needs more Spock. ;).

When on Tattooine why not use music from this. Like they've landed on a western themed planet.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m6BQKFs3-VM

Also have you thought about giving R2D2 a more 80s-y/Digital-y subtitle card. Might be good to have some variety in the subtitles or something. Whatever

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greenpenguino said:


Nice. But needs more Spock. ;).

When on Tattooine why not use music from this. Like they've landed on a western themed planet.

Also have you thought about giving R2D2 a more 80s-y/Digital-y subtitle card. Might be good to have some variety in the subtitles or something. Whatever
All three good ideas. You could add a shot of Spock looking up from his viewer at some point, like he's on another part of the ship
(may be too much).

Western music is a pretty good idea.

And having different subtitles for different characters may help since there are so many now.

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doubleofive said:

 

greenpenguino said:


Nice. But needs more Spock. ;).

When on Tattooine why not use music from this. Like they've landed on a western themed planet.

Also have you thought about giving R2D2 a more 80s-y/Digital-y subtitle card. Might be good to have some variety in the subtitles or something. Whatever
All three good ideas. You could add a shot of Spock looking up from his viewer at some point, like he's on another part of the ship

 

Or do something like this

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZdmOadhnnQw

gee. I wonder who made that. *cough* Probably someone really handsome and stuff. *whistles*

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If you are going to put Spock in you could also add another nerd favourite in.

The otherwise rather dull Doctor Who story Planet Of The Dead has plenty of Tatooine looking scenes which could be dropped in to give your edit even more oddness.

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greenpenguino said:

Or do something like this

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZdmOadhnnQw

 

gee. I wonder who made that. Probably someone really handsome and stuff. *whistles*

LOL!

Dude, can you upload that to a fileshare site and send me the link?  That MUST go in the edit!

Regarding subtitles, I'm keeping them all the same font.  When the entire movie is subtitled there aren't different fonts, are there?

And finally, I'm anxious for comments on this one, so please share....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQJM3VONHVs

 

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greenpenguino said:


Or do something like this

[AMAZING STUFF]

gee. I wonder who made that. *cough* Probably someone really handsome and stuff. *whistles*
Incredible. Absolutely suburb. I think he should be seen earlier so everyone is like "Cheap Frink, was Cheap", then have him show up again, like "hey, we didn't forget about Spock!"

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