Angel, I think my favorite is the 4th (with Endor). I don't think the 3rd will work because of the angle they are at...unless they are on a star destoryer...? :P you might want to add a few ships! :D
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I may can tilt the angle to be more proper...
Still if i do that the perspective of the shot will be so extreme... that assuming and only the oficers should be 90 degrees rotated..
yeah:
Now the taget room is err in the same position where are the distant lights...
-Angel
Much better!
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you might want to add a few ships! :D
The ships now must be vertically placed if you know what i mean :D
I love weird space perspectives :D
-Angel
It might work better if the viewscreen showed what they are aiming at rather than what they are aiming with.
In ANH the command centre showed a view of Alderaan so perhaps this time it should show the Rebel fleet (or at least their first catch of the day).
Making the floor glossy like we see in the establishing mattes/shots.
-Angel
That looks nicely weird, it reminds me of the very glossy floor in Rogue Leader which felt like Vader was floating in the air.
Bingowings said:
which felt like Vader was floating in the air.
When?
Also the set lights are wrong for so many reasons... :(
-Angel
There was a bonus mission where you played Vader defending the Death Star in Rogue Leader (and you chose a ship from the Imperial hanger) bad video (sorry):
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aWuBwTYmTgA
and also there was the selection screen for playing the Atari games as an easter egg in Rebel Strike (as you approached the arcade machines the Meco Disco Star Wars played and the Imperial hanger became a disco with glitter ball and flashing lights, hilarious stuff).
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Itmi2R0ytfI&feature=related
Also from the same game more disco fun :
The color messed once again for one shot.
Cyan instead of blue color in bob the builder's arm..
also
-Angel
Now that's an improvement!
vaderios said:
Making the floor glossy like we see in the establishing mattes/shots.
-Angel
that floor is a little dirty. needs some polishing.
aside from that, awsome mock ups vaderios. i like the idea of seeing the death star cannon, but like you said, it's at a weird angle. unless the area they're in is extremely small compared to the cannon.
rcb said:
vaderios said:
Making the floor glossy like we see in the establishing mattes/shots.
-Angel
that floor is a little dirty. needs some polishing.
aside from that, awsome mock ups vaderios. i like the idea of seeing the death star cannon, but like you said, it's at a weird angle. unless the area they're in is extremely small compared to the cannon.
Well, I would prefer clean floors, but George was smart in making the universe a used one. I think they would've at least had a buffer for old Mr. Palps.
"The other versions will disappear. Even the 35 million tapes of Star Wars out there won’t last more than 30 or 40 years. A hundred years from now, the only version of the movie that anyone will remember will be the DVD version [of the Special Edition], and you’ll be able to project it on a 20’ by 40’ screen with perfect quality. I think it’s the director’s prerogative, not the studio’s to go back and reinvent a movie." - George Lucas
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vaderios said:
3 versions to choose from:
Still searching for suitable BG..
-Angel
I'd like the 4th one with sight of the Rebel fleet like 005 said…
(though I'd flip Endor to the left of the window and place the Rebel fleet to the right of the window)
Bingowings said:
It might work better if the viewscreen showed what they are aiming at rather than what they are aiming with.
In ANH the command centre showed a view of Alderaan so perhaps this time it should show the Rebel fleet (or at least their first catch of the day).
Dang you're probably right about this, Bingo. :P
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This movie has a chance to be more potential :D
Missing factor? More Color
-Angel
Ackbar's on a collision course with AWESOME!
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Added Ming's suggestion the ship(s) that crash into the DS shield should be Y-wings. You don't see many of them in the battle, might as well get them out of the way early!
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doubleofive said:
Added Ming's suggestion the ship(s) that crash into the DS shield should be Y-wings. You don't see many of them in the battle, might as well get them out of the way early!
And take out the awesome scene when capital and bombers are tear appart the DS surface? hah
-Angel
sweet sweet stuff
I said Tear it Appart!
Sorry lazy to put more traffic or new surface :) You take the picture
Make Michael to feel shame for his explosions ^_^
-Angel
if only we could see these mock ups in motion
BAYSPLOSION!
rcb said:
if only we could see these mock ups in motion
Drag the picture or the monitor left and right as fast as you can!THERE! In Motion!!! ;)
Bay is the man ;)
-Angel
I've never noticed how lacking in detail (especially lights) the view from behind The Executor tower is before.
The glow from the side view of the model suggests a giant city in motion but from that view it looks like the warehouse in Raiders with all the lights switched off.
Rough mockup scribble over Angel's lovely work :
Love the mockup of the blimp attack (I think I mentioned that in my second ever post here and my first on this thread).
How many pickle shaped ships are there in fleet?
It might be a nice homage to try and replicate the storyboard as closely as possible (it's almost there as it is).
I think most of the fire is coming from the ships to the surface in the storyboard but in your mockup it seems to be coming mostly the other way.
