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I did it, dear lord in heaven I did it! I just spent the past three days reading through this thread, over 600 pages long.

Well, I only really read most of Adywan's replies that is :P

@Adywan, check your PM inbox.

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At least he read through the thread, that's more than a lot of people have done.

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I've just watched Daily Show interview with GL.

PS: Sorry for Off topic... needed to vent.

 Heheh...ok, I'm gonna go 'off topic' for a sec here too, I miised this interview, but I gotta ask...did Jon bring up 'Howard The Duck' at any point? He just SOOO seems like he would....;)

 

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karcreat said:

 Heheh...ok, I'm gonna go 'off topic' for a sec here too, I miised this interview, but I gotta ask...did Jon bring up 'Howard The Duck' at any point? He just SOOO seems like he would....;)

If he really wanted to put GL on the spot, then he'd have been better off asking when he was gonna pony up for a decent GOUT release....

By the way, did GL mention anything of actual interest such as when a Blu-ray or 3D 'conversion' of his best-known property was forthcoming?  Or was this truly just a waste of air-time at this point?

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Hi GUYS thanks for your compliments regarding that Intro thing I did.

Iv had another attempt at it thanks to  vaderios-Angel for the links he provided.

I changed the Music to the Emperor's theme but I didn't wanna get rid of the 20th Century fox music so then I kinda remixed it, Used my old D-jaying skill but I think I got Carried away, but I also cut them Emperor's theme just using the intro and outro off that track...

THIS IS NOT FINAL VERSION as the the X Wing textures are not Complete so the rendering on that looks shit..

I still need to replace the SKY and also the city lights as they look crap

I spent most time animating the X-wing movement cos I wanted to add I slight Wobble to it.

anyway guys take a look

https://rcpt.yousendit.com/799355650/8d82ee7d22f5b238e15b8047ebc66ccb

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Hey All...

In reading through all these great suggestion posts, I came across an entire section devoted to the fact that some of Adywan's work has been sold illegally on DVD, and it annoyed the crap out of me...here's my response...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3JpwwloAT0

 

...Enjoy!....;)

 

 

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Sky_ said:

Hi GUYS thanks for your compliments regarding that Intro thing I did.

Iv had another attempt at it thanks to  vaderios-Angel for the links he provided.

I changed the Music to the Emperor's theme but I didn't wanna get rid of the 20th Century fox music so then I kinda remixed it, Used my old D-jaying skill but I think I got Carried away, but I also cut them Emperor's theme just using the intro and outro off that track...

THIS IS NOT FINAL VERSION as the the X Wing textures are not Complete so the rendering on that looks shit..

I still need to replace the SKY and also the city lights as they look crap

I spent most time animating the X-wing movement cos I wanted to add I slight Wobble to it.

anyway guys take a look

https://rcpt.yousendit.com/799355650/8d82ee7d22f5b238e15b8047ebc66ccb

Looks great!  Some nitpicks though...  You can see the reflection of the X-Wing on the platform it came off of (which is awesome) as you spin it around to make the flight across the screen.  Other than that and some tweaks for the audio (replacing the TIE sound with an X-wing one and music edit), I think its great!

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Looks great!  Some nitpicks though...  You can see the reflection of the X-Wing on the platform it came off of (which is awesome) as you spin it around to make the flight across the screen.  Other than that and some tweaks for the audio (replacing the TIE sound with an X-wing one and music edit), I think its great!

HAY 005

Yeah I need to improve on that spin turns to robotic, The sound I nicked off YOUTUBE LOL cos Im lazy like that I need to get good quality shit, music that is, and the sounds for the Xwing are crap too got them off some site really bad quality the mix does need fine tuning but I was quite happy in the way the 20th C Fox theme mixed with the theme, only thing was i had crap quality sound to work with.

 

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I made this mockup for an other reason showing how can be the shot with the other leg things

I know in motion cant be done... The shot doesnt help/support these enhancements

 

Adywan, as vaderios said a while back, the 'moving' shots involving the underneath of the AT-AT are unlikely to end up similar to his mock-up in your edit....which is a pity, as his version is a little closer to how the full-sized 'prop' should have looked to match the miniature's detail and proportions better in the first place....

But I realise that this could end up as one of those inconsistencies that pretty much has to remain as it stands, since this seems a tricky one to fix using the existing footage.

However, there is a little bit of 'camera movement' during this scene that I previously brought up, which I always thought could be used to improve things a little....but since it proved to be too confusing to describe properly at the time without a sequence of screenshots, I've now asked doubleofive for some mock-ups to help get across the 'motion' I was meaning, in a more effective way this time.  (many thanks once again doubleofive)

This will need to be covered over 2 posts, and I'll recap on some of the mis-matches for the sake of everyone -

Firstly, here's how the detailing ended up looking on the suspiciously-small, single 'leg-joint' prop....

....which is very different to the how the 'leg-joint' detailing on the miniatures looked....

....and although a little blurry, this arrowed shot below (when the Speeders first pass the leading AT-AT) shows that the vertical/horizontal detailing on an AT-AT's 'overhanging side flap' should be centred on it....unlike how the full-sized 'prop turned out, where it is wrongly off-centred....  Also, when this particular shot is 'paused' at just the right moment (just as the last Speeder goes off-screen), the detail on the rounded ends of the 'leg-joints' can be more clearly seen, and are confirmed to be nothing like how the 'prop' details ended up....

....and reveals that the 'prop' should instead have more closely matched the onscreen miniature's 'leg-joint' details and proportions seen in these 'Master Replica' examples below -

(Here are links to many other good 'Master Replicas' AT-AT views too, by the way - http://www.rebelscum.com/mratat.asp and http://www.rebelscum.com/mratatv1.asp and http://www.rebelscum.com/mratatv2.asp) 

 

continues in the next post....

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continued....

 

....so although the 'scaling' issues may have to slide, I reckon things would have tied better together if we could at least have seen the brief hint of an 'opposing leg-joint' coming in-and-out-and-in-again added during the approximate 5 seconds of 'prop' footage where Luke swipes upwards with his lightsaber....since the shot seems to show the AT-AT 'lurching forward' in motion slightly, and has matching sound effects already in place....

You'd really need to study the onscreen motion of this to see what I mean, but hopefully this gives a better explanation of how I think the existing footage could be tweaked -

....so in this first 'close-up' shot of the full-sized 'prop' when Luke's cable attaches, we would still continue to see a single 'leg-joint'....

....although when we immediately cut to the shot below showing Luke rising underneath ('Revisited' version - http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/1153/image1q.jpg), we can see that the AT-AT's 'leg-joints' are actually quite close to each other on the miniature....

....and when we then immediately cut back to the full-sized 'prop' shot below (which lasts approximately 5 seconds), it seems to have a slight 'lurching' movement that would allow for the subtle addition of a hint of an 'opposing leg-joint' coming into the LEFT of the frame a couple of times....without it having to overlap Luke's body in any way, or get in the way of his lightsaber swipe either -

....at the very start of the shot below, the frame doesn't move at this point....

....and still doesn't move at this point as Luke begins to twist around....

....but at this point in the shot below (when Luke has nearly twisted fully around), the frame begins to move slightly to the RIGHT (while the LEFT-hand side of the frame seems to go upwards too), and so an 'opposing leg-joint' could now start to enter the LEFT of the frame by the same amount (as shown by the direction of the arrow)....indicating the AT-AT 'lurching forward' again....

....the frame continues to move slightly more to the RIGHT at this point in the shot below, and the 'opposing leg-joint' would also continue to enter the frame slightly more too (as shown by the direction of the arrow)....

....the frame still continues to move slightly more to the RIGHT at this point in the shot below (as Luke starts to activate his lightsaber), and the 'opposing leg-joint' would also still continue to enter the frame slightly more too (as shown by the direction of the arrow)....

....the frame has now stopped moving to the RIGHT at this point in the shot below (during the lightsaber activating), and so the 'opposing leg-joint' would come no further into the shot either (as shown by the direction of the arrow)....  The full hint of the added 'opposing leg-joint' would now be at the same position as in the shot above....as if to indicate a very momentary 'pause' in it's 'movement' ....

....but now the frame starts to slightly move back towards the LEFT at this point in the shot below (as Luke begins to swipe upwards), so the 'opposing leg-joint' would also start to slightly move back towards the LEFT by the same amount (as shown by the direction of the arrow)....

....the frame continues to slightly move back towards the LEFT at this point in the shot below, so the 'opposing leg-joint' would also continue to slightly move back towards the LEFT by the same amount (as shown by the direction of the arrow)....

....the frame continues to slightly move back towards the LEFT at this point in the shot below, so the 'opposing leg-joint' would also continue to slightly move back towards the LEFT edge of the frame by the same amount....and would now disappear offscreen again....before Luke then goes on to fully swipe upwards and eventually deactivate his lightsaber....

....after Luke's lightsaber has deactivated, and he has twisted around from us, the frame begins to move slightly to the RIGHT again at this point in the shot below....and so we would also see the 'opposing leg-joint' again begin to enter the LEFT of the frame by the same amount as before....as if to indicate the start of another 'lurch forward'....

....before we immediately cut to the 'close-up' shot below, which shows Luke throwing a grenade inside just before he drops down....

 

I have no idea if any of this is possible or not....or if you've already done something or other with it.  But see what you think if not.

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Sky_ said:

Hi GUYS thanks for your compliments regarding that Intro thing I did.

Iv had another attempt at it thanks to  vaderios-Angel for the links he provided.

I changed the Music to the Emperor's theme but I didn't wanna get rid of the 20th Century fox music so then I kinda remixed it, Used my old D-jaying skill are not Complete

I still need to replace the SKY and also the city lights

I spent most time animating the X-wing movement cos I wanted to add I slight Wobble to it.

anyway guys take a look

https://rcpt.yousendit.com/799355650/8d82ee7d22f5b238e15b8047ebc66ccb

 only problem i saw with it was that it said "presentation" while the one for ANH:R said "production" and you call it the Emperor's Theme...which it isnt its Darth Vader's theme

oh and a new rescored clip: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m38qNHOaQ6o

John Williams score to Return of the Jedi Remastered/Remixed:

http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/JOHN-WILLIAMS-Star-Wars-Episode-VI-Return-of-the-Jedi-Remastered-Edition/topic/14606/page/1/

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Sky_ said:

Hi GUYS thanks for your compliments regarding that Intro thing I did.

Iv had another attempt at it thanks to  vaderios-Angel for the links he provided.

I changed the Music to the Emperor's theme but I didn't wanna get rid of the 20th Century fox music so then I kinda remixed it, Used my old D-jaying skill but I think I got Carried away, but I also cut them Emperor's theme just using the intro and outro off that track...

THIS IS NOT FINAL VERSION as the the X Wing textures are not Complete so the rendering on that looks shit..

I still need to replace the SKY and also the city lights as they look crap

I spent most time animating the X-wing movement cos I wanted to add I slight Wobble to it.

anyway guys take a look

https://rcpt.yousendit.com/799355650/8d82ee7d22f5b238e15b8047ebc66ccb

Just downloaded and watched.

I think that your monument is lit "too perfectly".  Notice the use of shadow on the 20th Century Monument below.

Also, there's something about the *texture that doesn't seem right.  It comes off to me as shiny plastic rather than shiny marble.  Again, see below.

Question: What is that anomaly that appears as the X-Wing flies by?  It looks like a jump cut being disguised with cross-fade.

Looking forward to your progress.  Good work!

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I think it looks more "daytime" where the real Fox logo is more "dusk/early evening", but I imagine replacing the sky texture will take care of that.

Subtle thing here, maybe it's modeled that way and just hard to tell, but it seems like all the edges of the structure are "sharp", perfect right angles.  If it were a real structure, the edges would be blunted off just a touch.  Don't know how much work it would take to re-model it with the edges rounded just a tiny fraction, but might be worth pursuing.

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Sky_ said:

 

HAY 005

 the sounds for the Xwing are crap too got them off some site really bad quality

 i have very good quality Xwing sounds (they are from the offical star wars soundboards) i can send you a zip file with them and some other effects if you want

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That was once again a deep analysis and sort of solutions there ImpFighter.

In fact  in your snapshots we can see that the sun direction changes all the time. Assuming and olny that the AT-ATs isnt moving always streight.

I love the x wing addition Sky_ ( you have a PM :) )

The fox logo can have a transition from normal to icy one like we see in many movies now. Or instead of all shinny the bottom part that supports the letters can be like yavin textured.(rocks etc)

There are many altered 20th century fox logos out there. Check them for inspiration

 

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vaderios said:

There are many altered 20th century fox logos out there. Check them for inspiration

Excellent Idea.

EDIT:  Apparently variations of the logo are more difficult to track down than I expected.  These are all I could find.  Dunno if you'll find them helpful in any way.

 

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Rhikter said:

 

Hah

reminds me when ady said that the cyan blue colors of the new movies indicate cold are sort of wrong and miss the part of the physical colors.

well color correct these logos now!!!

 

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Sky_ said:

Iv had another attempt links he provided.

https://rcpt.yousendit.com/799355650/8d82ee7d22f5b238e15b8047ebc66ccb

Just downloaded and watched.

I think that your monument is lit "too perfectly".  Notice the use of shadow on the 20th Century Monument below.

Also, there's something about the *texture that doesn't seem right.  It comes off to me as shiny plastic rather than shiny marble.  Again, see below.

Well That is Right I wanted it to look Same but Different in the sense that the 20th Century Fox log is Marble or Stone, I wanted this to look more like Metal, as I like reflections of Objects, maybe when I complete it all, I may not look right and I may go back to Marble or something that looks like Stone

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Question: What is that anomaly that appears as the X-Wing flies by?  It looks like a jump cut being disguised with cross-fade.

Yes you are correct there is a jump that's because it takes 8 hours to render and for the last 2 or 3  secs of the animation I cut to a rendering I did earlier, just because this was a draft kinda version and was no point rendering the full.

Once Im happy with everything it will be one full render with no cuts

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I love the x wing addition Sky_ ( you have a PM :) )

The fox logo can have a transition from normal to icy one like we see in many movies now. Or instead of all shinny the bottom part that supports the letters can be like yavin textured.(rocks etc)

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I was thinking of that you know adding snow or something,

there is something out there for 3DMAX for Ice etc that adds Ice/Snow called dream Scape, I think when I get all the textures and everything fine for this first stage I can mess with snow idea later, as ADY has a good few months on his Project so I have time

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Sky_ said:

Well That is Right I wanted it to look Same but Different in the sense that the 20th Century Fox log is Marble or Stone, I wanted this to look more like Metal, as I like reflections of Objects, maybe when I complete it all, I may not look right and I may go back to Marble or something that looks like Stone

Okay, I'm with you now.  If your intent was to go in a different direction with it then please, by all means, proceed.  It's never a bad idea to just see where things take you.

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Ok here is my try.

keeping the non animated style of 20th logo we see in all SW movies i made this. And what is the best sunset planet?? Bespin!

Available in 1080p :D

EDITED: See post below

 

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