STAR WARS: EP V "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - 12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW — Page 408

Will add comments very shortly

EDIT:  No in-depth analysis on this one vaderios, lol!  I was just trying to show Adywan's actual shot UNDERNEATH your 'mock-up' on the SAME page, but shanerjedi and EyeShotFirst got there first, and the page changed, LOL! 

Anyway, some very observant stuff there vaderios, but the 'angles' on Adywan's excellent 'stairs' area seems fine already, compared to the version you showed.

EyeShotFirst said:

You made my day shaner. I made that weeks ago and had absolutely no response. It took me awhile to do it except the peter one. LOL.

Really? Hahaha. Some credit should go to Enigma for helping bring that vision into my head.

Attrayuu!

Okay, for ease of comparison, I REALLY want this on the same page as Adywan's version, lol.

Concerning the 'angles' on the 'stairs', your version (on top-right shot above) seems to have WIDER stairs than Adywan's version (shown further above).  As you can see from the other shot shown of Vader walking down the stairs, we would end up seeing your wider ones in that shot, so Adywan's ones are more correctly laid out.

Just for clarification, the shot vaderios showed of the 'Bridge' is from the 'fleet massing' near the beginning of the movie, whereas Adywan's shot that is shown is from the end of the movie.  And Adywan has deliberately 'flipped' it.

Strangely, I see that you removed the non-symmetrical white lights beside Vader at the very front of the 'Bridge' for some reason.  However, I notice that Adywan has kept them to their original positions (which I thought was a neat touch) EVEN though he has 'flipped' the shot.

Ganamae said:

Wowzers Vaderios, that mockup add so much life to the bridge, makes me really go all puppy eyes and beg Adywan to please consider it.

Nice with the blue engines on the destroyer in the back as well and the gray metallic colours is cool, its very good now you just miss the stairs.

Not sure if you meant that you prefer vaderio's layout of the 'stairs' or not Ganamae, but if you did, then they wouldn't tie-in so well with the footage of Vader exiting the 'Bridge' at the end, where he seems to step down more 'shorter' stairs like the ones Adywan has shown.

fishmanlee said:

hey i dont know if this fits here but in the phantom menace could a scene be incoporated of maul throwing his saber at obi or qui-gon?

No fishmanlee, that doesn't fit here, but there is a prequel ideas thread you could suggest it on, until Adywan's 'Phantom Menace:Revisited' thread comes round.

vaderios said:

I made 2 steps ady made 3. Is the same wide in length (not width) as mine.

MMMMM, wait till I get my ruler out....  ;)  

I was meaning the width of the stairs as we see them from the front view of the shots, where they come 'towards us', but I realise you know Adywan's got it covered.

As far as those 'Bridge' shots being 'flipped' in the first place vaderios, I'm a little curious as to how the positioning of the final shots of Captain (now Admiral) Piett turn out.  Going by Adywan's 'flipped' shot of the 'Bridge' from the ending, it looks like Piett is on OUR right-hand side of the shot now, whereas in the shot just before Vader turns around, we see a shot of him 'looking ahead at the escaped Falcon' from what seems to be the LEFT-hand side of the 'Bridge', where he has his hand on a section of it....before his gaze turns to follow Vader's exit past him....

ady's probably gonna take a long vacation after he finishes these. i'm assuming he'd be done by 2015-16.

adywan said:

Ripplin said:

vaderios said:

I d love to keep the lasers that the TIES firing at MF at the asteroid chase( adds more color to the scene)

I was surprised at that too. Hope it makes it into the final cut, as I was really impressed with it.

sorry, but the lasers are gone for good. After i added them there was just something wrong with the sequence that i just couldn't put my finger on at first. it was the lasers. i tried removing them just from the shot where the TIE blows up but that didn't work so they had to go.

Just caught up with your latest comments Adywan.  Lots of interesting things covered as usual, including your current thoughts on the additional 'TIE-firing' shots you'd previously worked on.

The whole 'asteroid chase' sequence was always one of my favourites in the OT, due to it's visuals, sound, and pacing, and the various enhancements and re-colouring you've done to it (even without your extra 'firing'), will make it even better now.

However, when I first saw your previous clip showing the additional 'TIE-firing' in the sequence, I thought you'd placed the extra laserbolts and sound effects in a way that truly enhanced the shots and accompanying soundtrack, especially in the first 2 shots that we saw and heard these new ones.  This had been an unexpected possible addition at the time, and I didn't know if you were planning on adding even more during the rest of the sequence or not, too, at that point....  :)

But if you ultimately don't want them, then you don't want them....and the overall sequence will STILL be terrific with the 'TIE-firing' just beginning where it currently does, at the point where the Falcon skims close to the surface of the largest asteroid.

Just a thought, but there are many scenes where the TIEs seem to open fire DIRECTLY at the Falcon....but I imagine that during the times they don't seem to be trying to 'herd it into position somewhere', that they are instead just intending to 'disable' it (as per Vader's wishes I'd imagine) rather than destroy it.  (That and the fact that the movie would be less dramatic if they ONLY FOLLOWED the Falcon, without firing!)  Therefore I have no problem with any scenes that show the Falcon being fired at, whatsoever.

Anyway, just my own last thought on that, and for anyone that hasn't seen this yet, here's how Adywan's excellent 'TIE-firing' was added into the flow of the current sequence -

How the overall (unfinished) sequence looks -  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uTp8mKFxmbg&feature=PlayList&p=4DB0EA9A587095198&index=34

How the extra 'TIE-firing' looked -  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S2CRs8PAhzg&feature=PlayList&p=4DB0EA9A58709519&index=43

Oh, and still enjoying the recent trailer immensely!

Vaderios, I hope Ady really pays attention to your SD bridge mock ups, they look great.

vaderios said:

Thx  Impfighter you reminded me an idea i had.

As i see in Ady's video he added a camera shake when the SDs are colliding..

But!

It supposed to be shaking in the bridge not the outside.

So with a bit work can keep the SD in the outside intact.

I  ve made this test:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ujxT0bnSe8

Dont judge the shaking, i just put it to show my idea ;)

 

-Angel

The idea makes sense (if it is done with more subtlety but you know that already).