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Had some time to fiddle with “Leia sensed the end” some more. Still needs some clean up, but…is this at least in the right direction?
This is the way.
Well, that was a long catch up! you guys are doing great! 😃
booyah baybeee
Had some time to fiddle with “Leia sensed the end” some more. Still needs some clean up, but…is this at least in the right direction?
The Rise of Skywalker: Untold - A “Rey Nobody” edit of Ep. IX | Looking for voices and VFX - Please reach out if interested!
Had some time to fiddle with “Leia sensed the end” some more. Still needs some clean up, but…is this at least in the right direction?
I’m starting to think that this might be the right way to go, since the focus of the scene is Luke passing Leia’s Jedi legacy onto Rey, and less on Ben.
The name’s Lawson. Noah Lawson.
I like the direction and “simplifies” the line/rational.
“Because you are a PalpaWalker?”
That sounds excellent, and I’ve come around to agreeing that “sensed the end” is better conceptually than “sensed the birth” as well.
Co-author of STAR WARS: THE RISE OF SKYWALKER - THE TEAM DALE REWRITE
Had some time to fiddle with “Leia sensed the end” some more. Still needs some clean up, but…is this at least in the right direction?
This is the way.
I agree with your own appraisal, sherlock: definitely on the right track but not fully there.
I still think it needs a little work but would love to replace the existing dialogue either way.
The Skywalker Saga:
I · II · III · IV · V · VI · VII · VIII · IX
This is the way.
I just made a quick edit of the line without any word modification and it sounds fine to my ears:
“Leia had told me that she had sensed the death of her son at the end of her Jedi path.”
The Skywalker Saga:
I · II · III · IV · V · VI · VII · VIII · IX
This is the way.
All in all, this project is taking a major turn for the best. When can we expect the next version to drop, HAL? 😃
“The Dark Side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural.”
-Sheev Palpatine, Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith (2005)
As soon as it’s ready. See the OP for things I’m waiting on from others.
See the OP for things I’m waiting on from others.
Was the puppet show not completed? Or has it just not been exported yet?
Had some time to fiddle with “Leia sensed the end” some more. Still needs some clean up, but…is this at least in the right direction?
Nice work on the inflection, I see now what Hal’s issue was with the previous version. Definitely the right direction.
The puppet show just needs some audio folding, and so it’s still a to-do item for me but it is substantially finished.
Had some time to fiddle with “Leia sensed the end” some more. Still needs some clean up, but…is this at least in the right direction?
Nice work on the inflection, I see now what Hal’s issue was with the previous version. Definitely the right direction.
It’s so close, I want it bad.
“Because you are a PalpaWalker?”
Wait, hold on a second…
“Nien Nunb”? “Nien Nunb”!?! What kind of stupid name is that?!? XD
“The Dark Side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural.”
-Sheev Palpatine, Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith (2005)
I wonder if it would be possible to slice off the “forty” in “forty-two” when 3PO says that the celebration only occurs every 42 years. That way it would only be every 2 years, which is slightly more believable.
Yeah, I know it’s meant to be the difference between 2019 and 1977 (release year of Star Wars), but honestly that’s a really strange easter egg considering the fact that it no longer has any meaning in 2020+.
I wonder if it would be possible to slice off the “forty” in “forty-two” when 3PO says that the celebration only occurs every 42 years. That way it would only be every 2 years, which is slightly more believable.
Yeah, I know it’s meant to be the difference between 2019 and 1977 (release year of Star Wars), but honestly that’s a really strange easter egg considering the fact that it no longer has any meaning in 2020+.
Yeah, I’d be down for that. Remove plot contrivance #11,646. I wonder if we could even just trim that line entirely (“Oh boy! It’s the Acky Acky Festival!” “Well, that’s lucky.”), or replace it with something else (“What is this?” ”I know what this is!” “Well, that’s lucky.” “It’s the Acky Acky Festival.”).
The Rise of Skywalker: Untold - A “Rey Nobody” edit of Ep. IX | Looking for voices and VFX - Please reach out if interested!
New attempt. Lots of clean up done, but it may still need some work, of course.
The Rise of Skywalker: Untold - A “Rey Nobody” edit of Ep. IX | Looking for voices and VFX - Please reach out if interested!
It’s getting very close imo. We’ll have to see how Hal feels though.
I just noticed my name in the “Thank You” list. What could I have possibly done to merit such appraisal? 😱
“The Dark Side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural.”
-Sheev Palpatine, Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith (2005)
Just be myself and I get a thank you? Easy work! ^^
“The Dark Side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural.”
-Sheev Palpatine, Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith (2005)
I included everyone who had posted in this thread in that list, is the real answer. So what I told you was true.
From a certain point of view.
New attempt. Lots of clean up done, but it may still need some work, of course.
Random fan editor here, had to look up what the original scene was but if you don’t know it’s edited it’s impossible to tell it was, after all, movies do this kind of ADR/audio manipulation in post all the time and we probably don’t even know because we don’t know where to look for spliced audio. I’d say this is good enough to work