That looks really great jonh! Excellent job so far. I’m curious, how did you create the shots where they all raise their hands to help Rey?
On the topic of the score, although I don’t think Sideways does a great job at making his point (it feels more like a rant than any semblance of an analysis), I think the heart of the point he is trying to make, that the themes and motifs that are used throughout the film are often unmotivated or used poorly, is a really fair point that I think I do agree with. Sideways actually suggests an episode of the What the Force podcast that goes into this topic better than he does, probably. I do agree that looking into rescoring different scenes in the film would definitely be worth considering.
Here’s another random idea to throw onto the thread: When Kylo hears Leia’s voice and turns to look behind him, what if, for the briefest moment, he actually saw his mother? It already appears as if he is looking back at someone, so I wonder if we could create a single shot of Leia standing there on the wreckage with them.
We never really get a solid explanation for why Leia dies. It almost seems like just speaking to Ben killed her. With this idea in mind, maybe Leia learned how to project herself from the Sacred Texts, like Luke did. And the effort to do this, in order to stop Kylo from killing Rey, was enough to kill her. Plus, it was a shame that we never got a scene with mother and son together, so even though it would be for just a brief moment, I think it would be rather touching if the last thing Leia get to see before she dies is the face of her son.