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Hey Hal,
It’s been a while since I’ve contributed here, but I just noticed that you updated your cutlist to add Leia’s voice saying “always” at the end of Luke’s line. I had forgotten to mention this earlier but I had tried to do the same thing and realised that adding Leia’s line on top of Luke’s “always”, (so that they say “always” together) works surprisingly well. Maybe you could experiment with that?


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Hmm, I’ll give that a try next time I find myself in front of my computer, whenever that is.

And poppasketti, you’re a genius. Borrowing consonants from other Kylo dialogue… great work.

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Hal 9000 said:

That’d probably make more sense. My idea was to imply that tracking Snoke’s miscellaneous stuff would lead him to Palpatine, like following a marionette’s strings to its animator.
But that’s hard to get across, and doesn’t make immediate sense as Kylo rummages through Darth Vader’s sock drawer.

I think it works well enough. The “determined to unlock the secrets of his former master’s power” is directly addressed and paid off in the opening exchange bewteen Kylo and Palpy. “At last. Snoke trained you well.” “I killed Snoke, I’ll kill you.” “My boy, I made Snoke…”

Right away, secret unlocked.

As for why he needed his grandfather’s sith wayfinder to figure out this particular puzzle, I think it’s implied that this is the latest in a string of clues that he has been hunting to unlock this particular secret. Maybe there could be a subtle way to reinforce this notion in the crawl.

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jonh said:

Hal 9000 said:

That’s some very nice work. However, I think the only way I would actually want to use it as if it is so subtle that it’s almost hard to notice on the first viewing.

??? jedi ghosts v4…with anakin
https://vimeo.com/409718237
password:jedi

Jonh,
This is some great stuff, I think if you made them seem more in the distance (maybe add some blur for distance) and only appear with the lightning strikes and then disappear in the shadows, it would sell the effect better

“You can’t polish a turd. But you can shape it to look like candy.”

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I decided to do my own take on Hal’s crawl:

Luke Skywalker has ignited a resurgence of hope across the
galaxy. To slow the flames of rebellion, the First Order has
scattered and isolated the brave.

As REY, sole heir to the Jedi, continues her training under
the ailing General Leia Organa, their fledgling Resistance
prepares for an inevitable uprising.

Meanwhile, Supreme Leader KYLO REN is haunted by the whispers
of a dark presence promising him enough power to crush his
opposition once and for all. . . .

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It would be interesting if we could solidify the connection by creating a new vision shot of Snoke standing over the stone wayfinder chest that could be inserted into one of Kylo’s visions.

You could take the shot of Snoke in TLJ when he says, “A new… Vader.” Recolor his robe gray and change the background to a pink/gray sky to match Mustafar. And by intercutting between this shot and the stone chest insert, you could imply Snoke once stood before this relic, either on his own quest to find the secrets of the Sith, or to lay the breadcrumbs that Vader’s grandson will eventually follow.

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Hal, what’s the status with Poe’s “relics” line?
I feel like it’s inclusion is an absolute MUST! It immensely helps explain the completely convoluted plot point of thousands of Destroyers coming out of absolutely nowhere.


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I feel like the mix could probably be finessed, although I’m not much an audio guy.

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I think Poe’s tone is the issue for me. In the actual briefing scene, he’s talking authoritatively to a big group, but the relics line is spoken more pensively to one other person. The mix differences wouldn’t be that noticeable if he was speaking the same way.

Andor: The Rogue One Arc

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How does it sound with “relics of a bygone era” just made a bit louder in the mix? Some of the problem might be tone but it also just sounds a bit softer than everything around it. I also feel like it could be sped up slightly with the pitch corrected to match.

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Hal, I remember you or someone else here thought of changing the music that plays over the ending Rey Skywalker/Binary Sunset scene, as to avoid repeating the Force theme across three movies. Have you though of putting some version of Rey’s theme instead? I believe it might be the most fitting, because it reaffirms Rey’s identity above all else, and is very much the central musical theme of the sequel trilogy. I personally like this track (originally from TFA end credits): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1bJpmMwrabo.
Not the full theme, but some snippets of it, like that transition between the Force and Rey’s motifs. If you plan to end the scene with a fade to black, maybe the peaceful version of the SW main theme that plays at the end of the track could could fit better instead of a more bombastic piece, as it has much of a “final farewell” feel to it.

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Knight of Kalee said:

Hal, I remember you or someone else here thought of changing the music that plays over the ending Rey Skywalker/Binary Sunset scene, as to avoid repeating the Force theme across three movies. Have you though of putting some version of Rey’s theme instead? I believe it might be the most fitting, because it reaffirms Rey’s identity above all else, and is very much the central musical theme of the sequel trilogy. I personally like this track (originally from TFA end credits): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1bJpmMwrabo.
Not the full theme, but some snippets of it, like that transition between the Force and Rey’s motifs. If you plan to end the scene with a fade to black, maybe the peaceful version of the SW main theme that plays at the end of the track could could fit better instead of a more bombastic piece, as it has much of a “final farewell” feel to it.

I mentioned I was going change the music there, but I never said what piece I was going to use… but you nailed it, that’s the exact one.

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It’s a beautiful way to rap it up. I’ sure JW scored something original for the end which is why it baffles me that they would just reuse the one from the force awakens.

Peace is a lie
There is only passion…

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Jackpumpkinhead said:

jonh said:

Hal 9000 said:

That’s some very nice work. However, I think the only way I would actually want to use it as if it is so subtle that it’s almost hard to notice on the first viewing.

??? jedi ghosts v4…with anakin
https://vimeo.com/409718237
password:jedi

Jonh,
This is some great stuff, I think if you made them seem more in the distance (maybe add some blur for distance) and only appear with the lightning strikes and then disappear in the shadows, it would sell the effect better

Jedi ghosts advanced
https://vimeo.com/409718237
password:jedi

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!!! I’m speachless.
Could you do two versions, one that’s subtle like this and another that’s stronger, more apparent?

Peace is a lie
There is only passion…

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idir_hh said:

!!! I’m speachless.
Could you do two versions, one that subtle like this and another that’s stronger, more apparent?

of course!!!in all the shots?
and one thing, could someone send me the clip in prores? of the blue ray?

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jonh said:

idir_hh said:

!!! I’m speachless.
Could you do two versions, one that subtle like this and another that’s stronger, more apparent?

of course!!!in all the shots?
and one thing, could someone send me the clip in prores? of the blue ray?

This is phenomenal. THIS is what I was expecting from the final act of the movie.
Could I use this in my edit? Needless to say, I’d credit you…

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
Episode IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. Episode VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI RENEWED. DYAD IN THE FORCE (3-into-1 sequels).
PM me for links if interested.

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IlFanEditore said:

jonh said:

idir_hh said:

!!! I’m speachless.
Could you do two versions, one that subtle like this and another that’s stronger, more apparent?

of course!!!in all the shots?
and one thing, could someone send me the clip in prores? of the blue ray?

This is phenomenal. THIS is what I was expecting from the final act of the movie.
Could I use this in my edit? Needless to say, I’d credit you…

of course!!! I expected it too jajaj

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Thank you! I’ll wait for the “stronger” version and then I’ll choose 😉

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
Episode IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. Episode VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI RENEWED. DYAD IN THE FORCE (3-into-1 sequels).
PM me for links if interested.

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my idea is to do something similar to this … that the force ghosts help Rey against palpatine, creating a force shield, but only with obi wan, anakin, luke and yoda
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8RBGydnTzE
but I need the clip in very good quality, I downloaded mine from youtube …