–Cut some of Han’s “good guy” personality, it’s fine for him to start out somewhat innocent but he’s been running scams off the street since he was 10. He is not a good guy.
–Cut from Correlia straight to the train. This would make it seem like Beckett and Han have been working together for quite some time, I don’t get how Beckett starts acting like he loves Han when he considered him annoying for the first half. The twist would pack a bigger punch. The war planet scenes are boring anyways.
–Rotoscope Crimson’s ship to outer space, would make it look fancier.
–Cut droid sex joke and Lando flirting with Han… very out of place
–I didn’t like Nest being a kid, but idk how to fix this. That old wise looking lady who pretended to be Nest during the battle would of worked. Or she never takes off the mask.
–Move Maul to post credit scene. Cut final Han/Nest where they tell him he is a good guy and should join the rebels.
–End the film with Han showing Lando the reward and saying, “I want in” followed by a more upbeat end credits song (I’m Han Solo?). This movie doesn’t need to follow the episodic rules, and the current ending overstays it’s welcome + the celebration music doesn’t fit this story.
And a second edit idea
Guardians of the Galaxy + Solo mashup! 70’s music everywhere! In all seriousness, this might make the otherwise dull movie fun.