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The Lost Jedi (TFA+TLJ edit) (* Part-Finished Project *) — Page 2

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I’m just not the best at the soundtrack part. Since Star Wars movies never have a clear center channel

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Maybe just add a shot like this with a slow zoom/ken burns effect? It may work… saber.jpg

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New clip coming soon, still working on the TLJ portion haven’t touched TFA besides the ending. Current running time is 3hrs and 44 minuets. I’m pretty sure I can get this to just about 3 hours! I hope to have a very rough draft soon for a few people to test.

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I know some people here that are in the 501st/ rebel legion. I know for a fact one of them has a old man luke costume. I’ll see what I can do

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I’ve thought of cutting the Luke and r2d2 scene. Any thoughts on that?

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TheLostJedi said:

I’ve thought of cutting the Luke and r2d2 scene. Any thoughts on that?

No way, that was by far the best scene in the entire movie.

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Alright I have a rough cut of the last jedi portion of the edit if anyone wants to test view it. I will be posting the cutlist for it soon. Almost every scene has some short changes like dialogue or shots cut out. Let me know if you would be willing to provide feedback.

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Full running time for the last jedi portion is 1hr and 31 minutes. Cutting out a total of 1hr of footage. Currently typing up the full change list

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CUT LIST FOR TLJ PORTION

Cut Poe joking with Hux at the beginning
Cut Finn/Rose side arc altogether including Maz

  • Cut Luke tossing lightsaber over shoulder.
  • Added Finn and Poe deleted scene
  • Cut Poe/Holdo “fuel” This leaves Finn/Rose with the resistance.
  • Cutting Finn/Rose arc thus of course also cutting DJ/Phasma.
  • Cut all the porgs
  • Added “Luke mourning Han” deleted scene
  • Cut Ach-To nuns
  • Cut Luke/Rey joke about “reaching out”
  • Cut Finn joking about how the first order “hates that ship” in the Crait battle
  • Cut Holdo/Leia joking about “may the force be with you” and just let Holdo say it.
  • Cut Snoke laying on the floor
  • Trimmed Kylo/rey vs guards
  • Cut Finn trying to crash into the battering ram and Rose saving him. They are presumed to turn back with the other ships when Poe tells them to.
  • Removed broom boy ending
  • Removed Finn/Rose at the end to ensure continuity Thus had to remove Poe/Rey meeting
  • Trimmed dialogue throughout the film
  • Cut rey from nowhere joke
  • Lots of small trims and shot removals.
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Starting work on the TFA portion. Would anyone like to give feedback on my TLJ portion of the edit? It runs at 1hr and 30 minuets

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TheLostJedi said:

Starting work on the TFA portion. Would anyone like to give feedback on my TLJ portion of the edit? It runs at 1hr and 30 minuets

I’d love to! Your cutlist looks great. Happy to see someone else didn’t like the “reach out” goof. Stupidest thing I’ve seen in a Star Wars film, and totally out of line for either Luke or Rey.

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Hal 9000 said:

TheLostJedi said:

Starting work on the TFA portion. Would anyone like to give feedback on my TLJ portion of the edit? It runs at 1hr and 30 minuets

I’d love a sneak peek, and would provide feedback as best I can.

Message sent.

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TheLostJedi said:

Starting work on the TFA portion. Would anyone like to give feedback on my TLJ portion of the edit? It runs at 1hr and 30 minuets

Absolutely.