I’m not sure I missed it, but are you considering removing the lightsaber moving toward Snoke before Kylo ignites it?
Also, ClarkZuckerberg has posted a pretty solid edit of The Last Jedi, with a few deleted scenes and removed humor. It’s very smooth and pretty impressive for just a few days after the home release.
Link removed by moderator. ChainsawAsh is offering some good advice in his posts below.
Please give the ‘Fan Edit/Preservation Forum Rules and FAQ’ a read, mate.
The name of the Fan Edit is ‘The Fallen Knight’, and more info can be found up on https://www.reddit.com/r/fanedits/
There is also an OT•com thread on it, here:-
http://originaltrilogy.com/topic/The-Last-Jedi-edit-The-Fallen-Knight/id/59746
It does look an intriguing Edit 😃