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#1511886
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Star Wars Rebels Recut - A Fanedit TV Series
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g00b said:

I now have a format I’m very happy with. I don’t think I’ll modify it further from here! I’ve got an intro I’m much happier with as well as a credits I’m much happier with! Thank you all for your input it’s been amazing! 😄 I’ll be starting to implement my V3 edits across the board! One episode at a time! 😄

Nice. Did you upload the new intro?

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#1511618
Topic
Book reviews
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JadedSkywalker said:

Thanks to your review i bought the book. Luke is my all time favorite Star Wars character. I haven’t read anything with him in it since the novels of Last Jedi and Rise of Skywalker. They don’t do post Return of the Jedi stories in print media. Like they used to with Star Wars Legends. Now just waiting until they actually start doing post Rise of Skywalker stories.

You’ll likely be waiting an eternity. 🤔

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#1511473
Topic
Star Wars Rebels Recut - A Fanedit TV Series
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Nice work so far, but I’d say you need a bit more text in the opening. I’ll think about something and respond again later.
I think that it should then directly open to the Rebels logo should come directly after that, without the annoying music that accompanies it.
Also your text is too large for both credits.
I also think the ending music should be changed to something more rebels specific like with Eddie did with his series.

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#1511472
Topic
Andor Season 1 - Supercuts (3/4 Episodes Released)
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WitchDR said:

I do agree that it feels dropped, though we don’t really know what Cassian was up to on Niamos before getting taken to the prison. It could have tied into something related to his search for his sister, we just don’t know yet. I’ll wait for the final 2 episodes to make a call on that.

What if I cut the flashback in two? Have the first half from Cassian’s perspective than have the other half later in the episode from Marva’s perspective?

Both scenes could play out as such:

Reinstate the scene of B2EMO showing up to Cassian’s ship when he’s a sleep and he begins to dream about the flashback -> flashback scene plays out up to when Cassian is looking to enter the crashed ship

Reinstate the scene of Marva looking at Cassian’s bedroom and she begins to think about the past when she’s holding Cassian’s spear -> play out the rest of the flashback when Marva enters the crashed ship and takes Cassian

If I did it this way, I could start the show the way it did originally with Cassian on Morlana One. It also breaks up the flashback so it doesn’t overstay it’s welcome.

Breaking it up is probably good if it’s a flashback since it detracts a lot from the main story at this point.

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#1511352
Topic
Andor Season 1 - Supercuts (3/4 Episodes Released)
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Maybe it will, but it really seems like the whole plot line there was dropped and he’s not mentioned his sister in any way whatsoever.
But if it does then I still don’t think it’s necessary, especially if there’s no more flashbacks.
Do you think there’s a better place to put it if you want to keep it? I just don’t think it works well as an opening scene since it feels unimportant.
As to a date, I’m not sure.

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#1511337
Topic
Andor Season 1 - Supercuts (3/4 Episodes Released)
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3gb or less please 😄
Having seen your first episode, I think if you add an opening like Rogue One has would be great, especially since I think you can cut out the flashbacks entirely and just put it in text. It is just much better that the opening scene takes place in the rain as it does originally. But if you choose to keep it as is, add a planet card at the start or a pan down to keep it consistant, especially as the following scene says 4BY.