commandercluck

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thebluefrog said:

Your vids appear to have been removed from Dailymotion.

Yeah,im working on that

Alright, so I know what you are thinking: it’s another one of these CW-ROTS supercuts.

What sets this one apart?

It has:

-New crawl and custom opening shot

• All finished deleted scenes reinserted.

• Clone Wars 2003 Coruscant invasion inserted with Clone and Grievous lines replaced (edited to match canon).

• Fallen Order added to Order 66 montage

• New Ending montage.

• Most importantly of all, decent audio transitions?

Not convinced? Here some notable clips:

Ending:
https://vimeo.com/443378390
Order 66:
https://vimeo.com/443484434

Now, this edit is not for everyone as its a bit overkill with basically EVERYTHING added in. However, I tried my best to make all it as smooth as possible without disrupting canon.

Special thanks to lordrogersmith for some grievous and clone lines and Hal 9000 for the deleted scene upscales.

PM me for the link.

I don’t hate the malevolence arc or anything, but it’s mostly an inconsequential arc. Domino squad sets up key characters later in the show and has 99’s story, which is considered by the majority of the fanbase to be some of CW’s finest work. Personally, I would also include the Slavers arc and the Obi-Wan undercover arc because of the excellent character work, but those are more optional.

Any reason why the malevolence arc is included over domino squad?

Another concept:

https://vimeo.com/415264609

There are some image quality issues that neeeds to be ironed out, but it’s relatively smooth otherwise.

What if the Fallen Order - Order 66 scene took place on Ahsoka’s ship?

https://vimeo.com/414839084

password: fanedit

I think it has some potential with some more fine tuning.

I’m working on something similar right now where I’m essentially making the longest possible canon cut of ROTS. The plan is to have lines from Battlefront 2 replacing the clone and grievous voices in the 2003 CW and every deleted scene incorporated as well.

This is supposed to be Palpatine’s broadcast:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4u0ejXC7kFs

Someone has to add Ben and Anakin to the Force Ghosts at the end

Now he’s discouraging his followers from ever visiting this forum. Some of the comments claim that we’re “the evil sith” now.

It seems that he’s only interested in receiving feedback from his Patreon followers.

Is this him?

https://www.imdb.com/name/nm4498251/

Canto Bight and Finn’s sacrifice looks pretty good, but I don’t think there’s any way to do voice acting without it being too distracting.

Here’s the description pulled straight out of the pirate bay:

Basically The Last Jedi minus Girlz Powah and other silly stuff.

It would probably be easier to make a list of things that were kept instead of things that were changed. Hardly any scene got away without cuts.

The resulting movie is (wait for it …) 46 minutes long.

Yeah I know, it’s not ideal. It’s made from a CAM source (the most recent HDTC one with the Asian hard subs, which is pretty watchable). It has issues. But it had to be done.

You will probably enjoy it most when you view it less as a blockbuster movie and more as some kind of episode from some non-existent mediocre Star Wars series.

Here’s a short rundown of changes (spoilers! full list in description.txt):

• No whiny/reluctant/murderous psycho Luke.
• NO HALDO! She simply doesn’t exist. Her whole subplot doesn’t exist. The Kamikaze is carried out by Poe. ( = Poe dies.)
• Leia never scolds, questions nor demotes Poe.
• Lea dies. Kylo kills her.
• Kylo is more badass and much less conflicted and volatile.
• Kylo takes on more of Snoke’s guards, Rey struggles with a single one.
• No bomber heroism by china girl in the beginning.
• No Canto Bight.
• No superpowered Rey.
• Luke is not a semi-force-ghost and is smashed by the first laser cannon shot. (sorry, I just had to!)
• Phasma is finished after the first blow by Finn. (Women are naturally weaker than men, she isn’t force-sensitive, and we know nothing about any exo-skeleton in her suit)
• Asian chick speaks less, doesn’t bully Finn, Finn doesn’t try to escape, she is never formally introduced. She is just there and occasionally smiles at Finn or screams “Finn!”. She has no sister. Serves her right for all the heinous stuff she did.
• Lots of little cuts reducing the number of female facial shots. Too many to count. (Pun intended.)
• Quite a few scenes rearranged so that the flow of the shortened movie is still somewhat coherent.

Obviously it’s far from perfect. The source is not even on DVD-level. Some of the technical edits were slacked because why not, it’s a CAM source (e.g. some masks and Snoke disappearing). Sometimes there’s an extreme zoom despite the mediocre quality. There are plotholes and continuity errors and some cuts are not as smooth as they should be, especially audio transition-wise. But for what it’s worth, it can now at least be viewed without feeling nauseaus about most of the terrible big and small decisions they made in this film. Also, at least the intro sequence is now very watchable and actually much cooler without all of Leia’s nitpicking. Now it’s all one united Resistance fighting without inner conflict and that’s much more satisfying to watch. Due to the extreme shortening, the whole movie is much more fast-paced now, at times unfortuantely also rushed due to a lack of usable filler footage

I would suggest cutting the Fathier chase entirely and go through Canto Bight as soon as possible to improve the pacing. We could cut straight from the other plots to DJ picking up Finn/rose. I’m debating whether or not the scene where Rose explaining her past should be kept though, but one thing is for certain, remove the kiss.

As for the Leia scene, I liked the concept, But I think it would be far better if she traveled a shorter distance. Would require some audio work, but remove most of the shots of her flying. Just the shots of her moving her hand and opening her eyes, and then almost immediately to her reaching the bridge.

Also remove the “reach out” joke, BB-8 slot machine, and “Hold the line.”