Just watched your edit, good work. I like the concept. Do you plan any alterations for the second version? If so, here are three thoughts that crossed my mind. Maybe start with Windu and the jedi confronting Palpatine, so it doesn’t feel rushed. Possibly include Order 66, to explain why Kenobi said his clones turned on him and why the clones attacked the jedi temple. Adding the deleted scene of Yoda landing on Dagobah to show where all three went into hiding at.
This sounds interesting. Did you ever considered adding the scenes from episodes 19 and 20 in season 2 of Agents of Shield that setup the movie? There is the raid on the Hydra base, where Coulson learns of Strucker`s base and contacts Maria Hill and maybe Theta Protocol?