Thank you, lads and gals. Once you seal the entrance I think it is easier to seal the exit (as far as believability goes), but if you seal both - then we’re definitely at a good place.
Here’s the updated Entrance and Exit, with alterations suggested by you community members:
The idea here is to remove the underwater communication (as a few of you didn’t like), and to improve the character and motivation of Haja. So their dialogue continues as we transition to Obi-Wan following Haja’s instructions, down and into the sewers/underwater.
Here’s the updated Escape, with a new door and a few tweaks (door needs to be adjusted and probably a little slower):
#Jedit: I’ll respond to posts up above soon. Need a break.
Is the idea to have Haja giving voice over or talking over comms? If over comms, could add some static effects and reduce range. Haja over the comms while Obi is on land, then silence once he hits the water might really work.
How good are you at after effects? Was wondering if you could take a red rain jacket and have it like Leia is following Obi out? That could make a more convincing exit with Leia. Did you add the door? Looks good, but may need a slight shadow from Obi walking out masked just in the door for a second.