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- #1576531
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Chosen One Edition (WIP)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1576531/action/topic#1576531
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Hey JJB!
I’m loving this edit, lots of good stuff.
I was wondering two things, first about the Ach-to scene where Luke says “the force made us… to end him” sounds too on the nose and jonky. Maybe the same info could be passed a little more subtle? If its the idea of the force balancing itself, it could be said something like “the force made you/us… to bring balance”. I would go even further and say this is the perfect place to Luke say “We are luminous beings, Rey, not this crude matter”.
Second thought is about Kylo vs Vader, what about incorporating the style of Luke vs Vader in the cave? The slow-mo frame rate gives eerie vibes and could create a somewhat more “consistent” visual being a bit more separated from the JJ style. Also, why would Kylo obeys force-Vader’s orders about the knights? Maybe Vader says something different here? And i know that’s a stretch, but i thing would be pretty cool if somehow Vader mask cracks at the end, the symbolism is self-explanatory here.