Kill Bill is an incredible two part epic from mastermind writer and director, Quentin Tarantino. However, there is something about it that didn’t quite sit right with me, and the was the narrative structure.
Volume 1 has a lot of action, whereas Volume 2 has very little action, but much more story and character development. While Tarantino is known for non-chronological storytelling, I don’t think he did as good of a job here as he did with Pulp Fiction.
My intention here is not to replace Volumes 1 and 2 the way they were made, but rather present an alternate version of Kill Bill, condensed into one feature length film, with its narrative re-structured in a more traditional way.
My re-structure is based off of James Rolfe’s pitch, which you can view here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rjuvjhUv1VQ
Below is the order of scenes the film now plays at.
Wedding Rehersal
Bride in Hospital During Credits
Wedding Shootout Aftermath
Bill and the Bride by the Fire
Bill Drops Off the Bride
Bride Meets Pei Mei
Bill Aborts Elle Driver’s Assassination Mission
Pei Mei Trains the Bride
The Bride and Pei Mei Eat
Bride in Hospital
Wedding Shootout Grieving
Bride Wakes Up
Bride Steals Pussy Wagon
Deadly Viper Assassination Squad Introduction
O-Ren Ishii Anime Backstory
Bride Flies to Okinawa
Bride Meets Hattori Hanzo
Bride Checks Out Swords
Hattori Hanzo Presents Sword
Bill Informs Budd
Vernita Green’s Battle
O-Ren Ishii at Board Room
Budd Shoots the Bride
Budd Buries the Bride
Elle Driver Kills Budd
The Bride Escapes the Casket
Elle Driver Battle
O-Ren Ishii Arrives at Palace
The Bride Sneaks In
The Battle Begins
Battle with the Crazy 88
O-Ren Ishii Battle
Bride Drives to Bill
Daughter Reveal
Family Confrontation
Confrontation with Bill
Fight with Bill
The Bride Leaves with BB
The Bride Mourns Bill’s Death