nammox

I was able to find a streaming version on line of your episode 1, still looking for the whole trilogy.

I really enjoyed your fanedit (my first fanedit and I am very excited to have found this section of the internet).

I thought the pacing was better and I'll give a few examples-

The lunch on tatooine where they are discussing the podrace is a much more intriguing and back and forth set of dialogue. Without Jar Jar's antics everything is much smoother and you can follow the character's motivations and ideas.

When they are leaving tatooine I liked the interaction with anakin and padme. Instead of it being a creepy little kid crush, I felt like it was setting up a sort of i miss my mom but this girl is being nice to me situation. And I could then see anakin finding a replacement for his mom in padme and not just a crush sort of thing, which I think is a little more emotional and then when he grows up and sees her again for the first time it becomes more of a romantic situation. It definitely is a more believable Greek Odepidus complex/tragedy instead of a forced romance from the start.

I had so many ideas about how to make the whole prequels better because of these fanedits and it is a whole new genre. Just wanted to thank you.

Unfortunately my ideas would require a lot of original scenes which are impossible, while keeping the framework of the stories intact. I wont get to far into my ideas, this isnt the place. :)

I would really love to see the rest but cannot find the seeds or a streaming version. If I could get an invite to myspleen I would be very much appreciative.