Love the new dialogue.
But one suggestion might be to define Ray (and the other clones) as offspring clones. This way the audience will have an sort of explanation, why they are kids and why the gender might swap.
I don’t know if it would fit in the dialogue, but just a thought.
The best part about the change is we would only have to modify Kylo’s masked lines to Rey and one Palpatine line he says when his mouth isn’t visible: “It is your birthright to rule… here.” It would be changed to “You were engineered to rule… here.”
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Yes! Yes! Yes! This makes soo much sense.
Makes the idea of Rey being associated with Palpatine more palatable - really hate the original.
Absolutely amazing news! As so many others in here the feeling of excitement for Star Wars is back!
Will love to share this version with my kids. It has been a treat to follow this thread from the sidelines, it has surely had its ups and downs, but every time a new idea was fleshed out and realized, seeing the community come together for this, has truly been wonderful.
Thank you to everyone. Cannot wait 😊
There we go, I’ve figured out the Captain Hux conundrum.
That’s just… Awesome! 😂🤣😄
It’s definitely better. I think what’s throwing me off is that he’s inflecting downward on both words. It gives it that trademark sentence mixing feel rather than sounding like a natural line delivery.
But wouldn’t one do exactly that if you were to put emphasis one the demotion.?
To my ears it sounds great. But I know I am not the most audiophile 😂
Absolutely perfect Sherlock! Amazing
Have to agree, changing the line really seems like a small thing, but it really gives a lot to the overall feel of the scene and it just seems to fit Leia’s character more.
So I got real busy with my personal life today, unfortunately. Tomorrow, I promise I will send Speaking of AI the lines. Here is the video I will be sending him just in case anyone here had anything to say about it.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1P52nZKa4kmdAy6srNg9wyKYvHR2FtGdM/view
No worries mate😊
Looking forward to the results, so we can see how or if they work.
Didn’t we use to have an ignore button on the forum at one point? I sure could use one…
Anyway, love the new ideas for the crawl changes, and also the new subtle hints at Rebellion on Kijimi
The newest shot looks amazing! Really think the un-reversed shot of the kids works best.
Concerning the color of the light saber. I am color blind and the blue light saber will surely stand out more than a green (or even red for that matter) a green will sort of fade into the background.
I also like to think that these aliens have not seen a light saber before, they have only heard about it, and in their view a light saber simply is blue.
Anyway, just have to say, you guys are awesome!
Would love a link to these amazing edits😉
PM sent
Hi poppasketti this edit sounds amazing. If I could get a link, it would be much appreciated.
This video is absolutely hilarious:
They all sound like idiots.
Only sound like?..
Any chance of getting a versions of the covers with AVCHD logos instead of the blu-ray ones?
So, out of all the starship models in existence, she learned to fly exactly the one she would eventually pilot? 😄
Yep.
Yes, just like Luke learned to fly an X-wing by flying a Skyhopper through Begger’s Canyon:-p
hydrospanner said:
And where was it established that he is the First Order equivalent of the Green Beret?Kylo was on the most important mission the FO could have possibly had. Did he take elite stormtroopers with him or some newbs that might happen to defect? Seems like another poorly thought out part of the story.
Let’s put it this way: do you think Vader had “elite” troopers with him in ANH, when he is boarding the Tantive iv? They sure don’t look like it… And that could be considered as an equally important mission.