mbtoole

To everyone above, DM me if you need this, I don’t really check the thread

Gotchu, if anybody else needs this feel free to PM me, it’s rough around the edges but super imaginative and deserves to be seen by a lot more people, bummed that the OP has been inactive for so long

Hey, new to the forum.

Just watched the workprint and feel like without the connection to her parents (“I’ve seen that ship before”), Rey doesn’t have that good a reason to be distracted by Ochi’s ship and miss the last trooper.

What if you mixed in Sith voices or ambiance at that moment to make it seem more like Rey is put in a momentary trance, either from residual dark side vibes coming off the ship or some medium-range communication from the dagger calling to her underneath the sand?

It’s by no means a glaring flaw but is something I thought might be worth bringing up.