macmilln

Love this idea! Bringing more ‘character’ to these, well, characters…

Hope y’all don’t mind me popping in from FE to check some things out over here…I’m in the same boat as Dom, really think less is more for this.

1. Pasaana - Knights See Chewie:
My favourite is the “Solo’s Wookie / I get his teeth.” one, but I think just “I get his teeth” would be better, more menacing even.

2. Kijimi - Knights Searching:
I think a combination of what’s here would be best. Just “She’s close. Find her.” would work best. Short and sweet. While I do like the idea/premise of calling her “the girl”, I think it drags on too long including it - and “The girl’s close” sounds too… casual.

3. Exegol - Knights Surrounding Ben:
I like “Still chasing the girl, Ben.”, especially because it perfectly ‘transitions’ with Palpatine’s line, “She will draw her weapon.” The “…join your father.” line is okay, but I think “I hope you’re ready!” sounds a bit cheesy. Maybe “You will suffer the same fate as your father.” (or “You will suffer your father’s fate.”) would be cool, or just nothing else at all?

4. Exegol - Knights Pause:
“You’re a disgrace.” I think is the winner here, though I do also like “It’s over, Ben.” Just not “What a disappointment.”…

5. Exegol - Ben Gets a Saber:
This was a great moment of visual comedy, and I think it’s best to be left ‘speechless’.

Can’t wait for these to be ‘finalized’, looking forward to 'em!