The opening sequence looks good to me. I’m glad it’s coming together. Though I did just wake up, so my critical brain isn’t thinking just yet, I’m sure I’ll respond back if I find something out of place.
I appreciate the rework on the scene EddieDean, I love the pacing of it and adds some suspense to the conflict at hand. If others would like to take a dab at the changed scene, by all means tackle it! Unless EddieDean deems it complete.
Love the nitpicks that sade1212 gave and like I said it may just be me. The way TCW was edited and cut (jump cuts) haha, puts my mind out of whack. I enjoy the show, don’t get me wrong. I’m more of a pacing and flow kind of guy. I get that way when I see any movie/episode with the editing and pacing quickened.
EddieDean you can reorder the sequence as mentioned above if you like.
Thanks for reading ✌
EddieDean, great work so far! I am sure I won’t have quite a list of nitpicks as sade1212, but I do have some.
My opinion and nitpicks are my own thoughts on it. You may have other views on the matter, but these are mine. I loved the work that EddieDean put into this so far. Keep it up!
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Fixes for Mandalore episode 02
Other than that great work! My favorite segment of the episode is 28:14, “Go save your girlfriend…” still gets to me haha.
Thanks for reading this and hope to see further progress on this! Happy New Years to everyone!
There’s a full version of my Mandalore episode - but with crushed blacks and some frame sync issues - available by request if anyone would like it to review the story flow and cuts.
Yes, I would like the episode please.
Take 2! 😃
War is beginning to spread across the galaxy.
New battlefields are rapidly emerging as the armies of the Republic and Separatists fight for control.
Taking a direct role in this conflict, Senator BAIL ORGANA has began providing relief and supplies to numerous clone squadrons on the front lines.
Anakin Skywalker has achieved the rank of JEDI KNIGHT. In honor of this achievement, Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi has put in a request to teach his skills to a new padawan learner.
Meanwhile, the pair have tracked Count Dooku’s vicious assassin, ASAJJ VENTRESS, to the planet of Christophsis.
But Ventress is far more cunning than she appears…
I enjoy this. Much work is needed to make this good. I’m no enthusiast on opening crawls, however this looks fine to me. Are you going to incorporate the second season of the Mandalorian as well?
I’ve enjoyed the new adaptions of the evil clown 🤡 I truly did wish there was a supercut, but I doubt we will ever see that.
I still love the original TV series of IT with Tim Curry, he did a fantastic job!
Very interesting! Looking forward to this project and will help anyway I can. Keep it up!
Hello,
My screen name is Kerperlo (duh…), but you can call me Dylan if you want or Kerp for short. My father introduced me to Star Wars and I’ve been stuck to it like glue ever since.
Friends of mine showed me Star Trek, though I do prefer Star Wars better. Something about “A long time ago in a galaxy far, far, away…” something really DID happen a long time ago…in a galaxy far, far, away.