You can find some corrections I made to your NFO below Harmy (two humanities degrees, it’s almost second nature to me now!), it’s up to you whether or not you use them:
HARMY PROUDLY PRESENTS
RETURN OF THE JEDI - DESPECIALIZED EDITION REMASTERED (v2.5)
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This is a reconstruction of the 1983 theatrical version of ‘Return of the Jedi’. The original shots were painstakingly restored using the sources listed below and the film received an extensive shot by shot colour correction based on a fade free 1983 LPP Print. ROTJ v2.5 is almost completely despecialized, except for a couple of wipes; for all intents and purposes it is the original version.
The remastered version (v2.5) represents a significant improvement in picture quality over the earlier 1.0 version due to the use of better encoding settings and higher quality sources. Many of the despecialized shots from v1.0 were replaced in v2.5 with shots from these superior sources.
Version v2.0 only came out as a limited release workprint.
A gallery showing all the changes can be found here:
https://photos.google.com/u/1/album/AF1QipOUewV3aQ2QnhCC2WsLwE6sihIE9zvVIkiF8GB6
The MKV version contains a large number of audio tracks, including the latest versions of the preservations
of the original audio mixes in DTS-HD MA, three different commentary tracks, an isolated score and dubbing
tracks in 13 different languages.
More information can be found here:
http://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Harmys-RETURN-OF-THE-JEDI-Despecialized-Edition-HD-AVCHD-DVD9-and-NTSC-DVD5-available-SEE-FIRST-POST/id/12905
VIDEO SOURCES:
Star Wars Episode VI Return of the Jedi Official Blu-Ray (2011)
LPP 35mm print scans (Team Negative 1 and Poita)
Schorman’s HDTV Preservation - Return of the Jedi (2004 DVD version)
RETURN OF THE JEDI 2006 Bonus DVD (sourced from the 1993 Definitive Edition Laser Disc Master - upscaled by Dark Jedi)
RETURN OF THE PUG (1983 16mm print transfer)
Custom mattes