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darthpreston
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- #162508
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Count Dooku/Tyranus as the dark cloaked figure in Episode 1:
I think you guys (InfoDroid, CC, MTHaslett) should think about this just for minute. For some reason this sounds like it has amazing potential in fleshing out the character of Count Dooku in a way no one could believe. You have plenty of evil dialoug to choose from in the LOTR movies, and several others with christopher lee. Considering you are changing the voice of the nemoidians this could open up an ENTIRELY written scene between the dark lord and the aliens. YOu could have whatever conversation you could concoct(sp?) together. All you would need to do is blacken over the face of the cloak and have him be entirely mysterious, but with the voice of christopher lee. If you tuned his voice down lower, with gargled transmission sound this could be pulled off easily.
Some would say, well that ruins the mystery of who count dooku is in ep.2............well no more than hearing ANY moment with darth sidious and realizing that he sounds like senator palpatine. But like Trooperman said, this would make Dooku far more interesting/important in his role with the sith, it makes Palpatines involvment at the end of Ep.2 as the emperor-like darth sidious more intruiging. I just wanted to see you guys comment on this issue........I think its an extrordinary idea. Just take a gander......
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I had a crazy idea a while ago that could work. If you wanted to keep the "sypho dyas" mystery in Ep.2 , then you could just have "grevious" become a mysterious jedi trained evil general that will later in the movie (utapau) be revealed as Master Sypho Dyas........a jedi who did the sidious' bidding and ordered the clones creation to help with the phony war. The more I think about it, this could be possible , for establishing a real character out of the general for the 3rd movie. You could even have him give obi wan some hint of how "everything is going to end for the jedi" right before the general takes the blaster shots to the chest. This kind of mirrors Count Dooku's character, of course, but I don't see whats wrong in showing how seductive the darkside is and how evil it makes even ex-jedi with the amount of corruption. Ok, it's just an idea, and I think you guys were going to throw out the "sypho dias" reference. But last I heard it was just going to be replaced with sidious or something. Well, if anybody read this, what do you think? Not a good idea? I just wanted to throw out another option to reestablish the character. The maul=grevious thing is cool , I just don't think it will work at all....not like I don't trust you guys though. Prove me wrong! I love this board...
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About this whole Darth Maul IS General Greivous combo:
I have not been sold on this at all yet. I still don't know why we can't have a darth maul in Ep.1 and another villian named General Grevious in III. I just don't see how you could make general grevious SEEM like he is suppose to be darth maul at all. I mean sure, you can mess with names, but how far does that really go? We could change anybodys names around, but the characters don't even move or act like each other. I always thought if you redubbed Grevious with a scarier taunts and a mean voice it would make his character have more intimidation. Someone else mentioned that if we "assumed" that maul survived being chopped in half, then it kind of comes off as cheesy, why did he not die? Are we to assume that if anybody is taken out in battle that they could still be alive? Did mace windue survive palpatines lighting? It just raises some inconsistancies IMO. Plus Grevious has obvious alien eyes and eyeline features. He runs away, he's hunched over and he seems less important to be walking around with droid armies. And if Maul is Grevious in Ep.1, then what did he do when he was found, alive, put together in a droid body.....and then just take up work as the general for the trade federations clone war? I just don't see the characters connecting at all. Maybe it could be pulled off, I just wanted to know how this could be done.
Don't get me wrong, I think it would have been cool if maul survived TPM and showed up again in ROTS to revenge his fight. And it is true, Grevious did not serve much puprose in the movie, but you could make his character seem more of a threat. He is kind of like Jabba in ROTJ, did we really need to go to his palace and watch nothing but him and his cronies for 30 minutes only to watch him dye and fade away? I think General Grevious is a cool character and was nicely expanded upon in the cartoon series, but I don't see why or how you can turn him into darth maul. Just a thought.
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I have not been sold on this at all yet. I still don't know why we can't have a darth maul in Ep.1 and another villian named General Grevious in III. I just don't see how you could make general grevious SEEM like he is suppose to be darth maul at all. I mean sure, you can mess with names, but how far does that really go? We could change anybodys names around, but the characters don't even move or act like each other. I always thought if you redubbed Grevious with a scarier taunts and a mean voice it would make his character have more intimidation. Someone else mentioned that if we "assumed" that maul survived being chopped in half, then it kind of comes off as cheesy, why did he not die? Are we to assume that if anybody is taken out in battle that they could still be alive? Did mace windue survive palpatines lighting? It just raises some inconsistancies IMO. Plus Grevious has obvious alien eyes and eyeline features. He runs away, he's hunched over and he seems less important to be walking around with droid armies. And if Maul is Grevious in Ep.1, then what did he do when he was found, alive, put together in a droid body.....and then just take up work as the general for the trade federations clone war? I just don't see the characters connecting at all. Maybe it could be pulled off, I just wanted to know how this could be done.
Don't get me wrong, I think it would have been cool if maul survived TPM and showed up again in ROTS to revenge his fight. And it is true, Grevious did not serve much puprose in the movie, but you could make his character seem more of a threat. He is kind of like Jabba in ROTJ, did we really need to go to his palace and watch nothing but him and his cronies for 30 minutes only to watch him dye and fade away? I think General Grevious is a cool character and was nicely expanded upon in the cartoon series, but I don't see why or how you can turn him into darth maul. Just a thought.
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- The legendary "Starkiller Ranch" Thread
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http://www.starwarz.com/starkiller/scripts/revenge_revised_rough_draft.htm
This is the original script for Revenge of the Jedi and it has a more serious tone and alternate plot points going on throughout the movie. It is a very intersting read of what "could" have been for ROTJ. I thought you guys could get some good ideas. And the radio dramas as well, didn't Billy Dee williams do the voice for lando? I know we have mark hamill and anthony daniels reprising their voice roles, so there is ALOT of new material to work with there.
Also , I posted a couple of pages back on the idea of changing the scene with Vader and the holo emperor in ESB to reveal something more intesting then: Luke skywalker is the son of Anakin.....no shit. I didn't see any comments on it, so I thought I would just remind everybody that that scene needs some "flavor" to it as well, considering it is the first time you see vader and the emperor together AT ALL. I think that the "saga" version is not having the Vader Born scene in Ep. III , so this will be the first time you ever see the two of them talking or in cahoots (I was looking for a chance to say that word). Any ideas? This discussion we are having is completely addictive. I love where the ROTJ edit is going, alot. Keep posting guys!
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-I think the first thing to do would be to re-establish han solo as the character he is in 4 and 5 which is, a badass. This may be a little tough, ole harrison ford supplied us with a lot of goofy faces and silly deliveries. But I think that the proper editting could sharpen him into the han that doesn't talk his head off.
-Perhaps some of jabbas palace could be clipped (although it is a real favorite star wars adventure of mine).
-I think one element that could use an overhaul would be the ewoks. How would we make them more serious? Perhaps if we took away the little chirps and woots and added some growls or creepy sounds would be a nice replacement. Although I love the music of the old trilogy, I could be up for giving the ewoks a different theme. THe original , like the ewoks themselves, is just kind of playful sounding and circus-y. Give them a warrior theme like Connan the barbarian or perhaps a cool track off of the Shadows of the Empire soundtrack. I mentioned in another thread that if you had the effects to add blinking eyelids to them it would flesh out those costumes a little more. But there is potential to make the ewoks redeemable in my book with some "changes" here and there. Another neat idea would be to add some clips from the ewok movies and throw some widescreen bars on them to add more action scenes with the ewoks. I think it was the Battle for endor movie that showed ewoks fighting with blasters, Thats what we need!
So anyway, thought we could have some discussion on how to fix ROTJ, i've actually been thinking of this before the prequels came out. Oh and of course there's the idea that Magnolia fan had about adding the "birth of vader" scene from episode 3 as a flashback while vader and luke are talking on the walkway on endor. Superb idea. Any thoughts, suggestions?
I know this thread is suppose to be about a different ANH version, but since we're trying to catalouge ideas for a "saga" I thought this would be appropriate.
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Whew, this thread is just exciting now. Hey TM, I know that your probably busy, but I was just curious as to when you would think of putting together a trailer for SOTDS? I couldn't think of anything more to wet my appetite and was just curious. Everybody has got some amazing ideas flowing around here, keep em coming!
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- If the O-OT ever came out, the future of SW is with the PT fans.
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Also, I look forward to your review of the other edits!
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Wow, I can honestly say that would give me chills! And a real neat line to end the movie out on. Good suggestion.
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- Episode 3: Fan Editing Ideas Discussion
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First, the scene where anakin is talking with watto in mos espa. At the end of the conversation, as you know, anakin intimidates watto into cutting the crap by puffing his face and say "i'd like to know". I thought what would be cooler is if you had anakin look at watto and then say something along the lines of " if you don't tell me , i'll tear both of those wings right off", THEN have the shot of padme looking from watto to anakin and then cut to watto's reaction of "sure , ah sure, lets go look at my records". If you get my meaning it should be something kind of funny......but in a "don't piss anakin off" sort of comedy. Just a thought.
Second, the scene where anakin is fighting dooku and gets his arm cutt off.......I remember watching in the theaters and thinking it was an awkward cut because anakin hardly made a groan. Since your doing the adr, maybe you could throw in a nice painful yell (similar to luke in ESB) to give the scene more of a shock effect. Maybe have the music effect the action as well with something creepy. Doing this would easily give the viewer the surprise of going " holy crap ani just got his army cut off".
I actually have a ton of ideas for further editting Episode One and three, but I'll have to save those for another day, namely whenever you decide to take those projects on. And finally, those shots of the outlander club with the creepier residents is a very nice step forward for that scene as well. Good luck trooper!
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- Star Wars TV Update
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I know that the subject has already been discussed but I must clarify that I can't wait to see these movies with more enticing sound and music. I think to successfully make these movies stand up to par with the classic trilory, then the entire scores should be redone. I know that trooperman is doing this with his edit, but even taking what good music was there and turning it up a bit so that it is not soo buried in the audio tracks would have more of a star wars flow to it. It will also help with all the cutting of clips and swapping them around to have the music retracked and flowing smoothly through the newly editted scenes. This I think is going to help all the editting flow into a seamless "new" Episode II. There's actually alot of good acting moments in the prequel trilogy that could be especially punctuated if the music had been more emotional or even up to a decent feeling in the mix. I would also do away with alot of the "spliced" sound mixes that are all over episodes I and II. The jango fight and the arena battle tracks are all soo bouncy that it made everything seem kinda "dopey dopey" and not nearly as dynamic (just my opinion). But anyway, I just wanted to drop myself in and send my support to you guys on these projects.
Also, just to boot up the conversation a bit:
Many of you guys have been "working" with trooperman and have proved that an amazing star wars movie lies beneath Episode II:attack of the clones with a change of music, editting, ADR and some character flow. Now, i think that the same could/ and should be done for episodes I and III. And by that I mean a total overhaul similar to the work being done to Shroud of the Dark Side. I was wondering if anybody had any good ideas on how to change the character development, pacing, music, or even ADR of The Phantom Menace? And although Revenge of the Sith was a very good star wars prequel, I wouldn't show it any mercy either. I have a few ideas popping around my head but was wondering how others on this forum would re-construct Episodes I and III. Thanks for your time fellas and I look forward to taking part in the conversation now.