bigmac076

darthrush said:

bigmac076 said:

remove ugly title card, insert crawl (info from Catalyst etc.)

Insert crawl where title card was? I don’t know where to put the crawl. Because if you put it before the flashback then you can’t give any exposition about what happens after the flashback.

Since the Lah’mu scene happens first in the film, its technically not a flashback. The only flashback is when Jyn recalls a memory from their place in Coruscant. So after explaining the main points of Catalyst in the crawl, then pan down to show Director Krennic arriving at Lah’mu.

remove ugly title card, insert crawl (info from Catalyst etc.)

I’d love an invite if its not too late