axfelix

just found this and I thought it was a terrific job -- RotJ was always a distant third to New Hope and Empire for me as well, and this goes a long way toward narrowing that gap.

The only thing I'd change is editing out Luke's explanation to Leia that she is his sister. There isn't a single other mention of it in the movie at this point (except for Yoda's "there is another," which is nice and ambiguous), and it's just so darn awkward that I'd love to see it gone. I know that you're officially messing with the continuity at that point (not to mention that it might be tough to leave in the other parts of that conversation), but I think it'd be an improvement.