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EddieDean said:

Thanks very much for the feedback!

I’m calling the show ‘The Third Age’, of which the first episode will be ‘The Hobbit’ (as opposed to the other way round).

When you say the credits took longer, do you mean the opening credits or the end credits?

I’ll take the note on the music cuts, thank you! What did you think of those minutes 8-12? Did they work overall?

sorry the closing credits fade felt too long on black. 8-12 mintues was very well done I noticed the blend of hobbit and lotr scenes but seemed seemless.

Only issue with the 8-12 min bit as previously mentioned was the 8:54 mark I felt maybe a little pause might help between the is where I come in and the next line for me it began, didn’t flow naturally

was well put together overall, intro was pretty well done although there was a couple music cuts that seemed a bit abrupt. Could do with a pause when bilbo says and that my dear frodo is where I come in and the next line, that could of done with a little bit of a pause and the credits took a little longer to come in than you would expect from a show.

Maybe work on the title screen, maybe have it as The Hobbit Chapter 1: the third age etc?

can’t wait for more episodes