- Post
- #1512179
- Topic
- The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1512179/action/topic#1512179
- Time
My thoughts and suggestions on S01E02: Malevolence.
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The fade to black when Grievous groans after being told they have to navigate around the nebula is a bit off and sudden.
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Since the Malevolence conflict is presented as happening straight after Christophsis and Ahsoka becoming Anakin’s Padawan, Yoda’s line of ‘twice the trouble they have become’ doesn’t hold up much here I feel.
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For the shortcut, I think it would be beneficial to see Shadow Squadron go through the nebula and see why the Separatists didn’t go through it themselves, a straight hyperspace jump seems unrealistic that the Separatists wouldn’t know about it and make the jump themselves.
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For all the talk about how the Malevolence is such a super and secret weapon, we really should see it get fired and used successfully at least once, maybe at the beginning against Plo Koon’s fleet. I don’t feel it’s enough for us to just get told it’s a powerful ion cannon. I don’t think the VFX for it is goofy.
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Reordering of scenes and removal of Padme’s inclusion and antics aboard the Malevolence is a great plus, great job!