WtarSars

Great Edit, here are some quick things I would recommend:

Armorer states beskar is made for armor not weapons, Din states the dark saber is made of a beskar? I would omit the line of what it is made of, especially if later on you still plan to include moff crushing it.

Armorer asks Din about helmet there seems to be 2 different types of color grading happening with the back and forth.

Din asks what happen to the droid port even though he helped make the thing from scratch, seems odd.

There seems to be a fair bit of back and forth with different color grading, very saturated vs not so saturated.

But overall a great time

When it comes to the shuttle they use to get to endor. THE BAD BATCH season 3 trailer shows a lambda shuttle with a cargo box underneath which might work better than the rogue one cargo shuttle which reminds me of kylos shuttle.

https://ibb.co/8gc2QHR

I would also like to view the current cut

Anyone know how I can alter this link into an image on the actual post?

(ARTWORK) https://drive.google.com/file/d/1AQ3_hVBTd-hIQUDinQVQzxJT6j91AV1p/view?usp=sharing

This project is a combination of ideas and feedback from the community, changes from other fan editors, and some of my own tweaks for continuity, pacing, and preference. All of which come together to create what i feel to be a series that feels a bit more like star wars and has the added benefit of having 1 hour episodes for those who wish to have more of a casual viewing experience or are trying to get friends introduced to the following shows.

THE MANDALORIAN, THE BOOK OF BOBA FETT, & AHSOKA

I made a trailer a few months back that went by a different title, it was named “The Beskar Edition” but now that the live action shows are building what seems to be an avengers crossover universe. I had to revisit the edits I had made and have come up with a new title for the series.
Here is a link to the old trailer for those who are interested: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kQUiHTCTSi0

I have completed the rough cuts for all 15 episodes and put together some artwork for DVD covers but I will need some time finishing the polish, writing the change logs, and uploading the files somewhere accessible to everyone. I would appreciate any insight or experience regarding file converting/zipping to more manageable sizes.

Keep in mind this fan-edit series is a culmination of various ideas and changes that I personally felt needed to be included in what I consider to be canon. I do not take personal credit for some of these changes and will give credit where it is due once change logs are made.

Would love to see an Ahsoka series version!

i would also like a link please!

Love what you’ve done so far. I do have a few ideas that may elevate it.

1.Sabines Stabbing: theres a clip someone made of a slice rather than a stab this is a bit more believe-able and would not add another reason why qui-gon should’ve lived. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0jobwstylkI

2.The Forgotten Droid: When the droids are raiding sabines place. She destroys one of them in the process. Instead of ahsoka going back there and catching a droid who stayed behind for some reason we do this:

• sabine says that she got one of them to ahsoka
• ahsoka tells her to get some sleep transition to morgan and assassins activating the map
• once that scene ends cut back to a wide shot of lothal and cut to sabine examining the droid head as ahsoka asks her if shes up for it and let the scene continue as you have structured.

3.Ahsoka Space Combat: I would recommend cutting the space combat sequence entirely and have morgan fire on them when she asks if they are destroyed the droid replys “they are off our scopes”. Her face says it all. We cut to them just entering atmosphere skimming the surface of the planet and cut a segment of hu yang coming back online saying “what did i miss” (cropping the frame to exclude the other two who have changed seats) and cut to the ship landing. No exposition required. He already scanned the ring and we can assume he gave them the run down.

Could you PM a link to the rough cut? I may have some ideas

kypo said:

WtarSars said:

I’ve not finished your book 2 as yet so can’t compare but one thing in the BoBF that bothered me was that Boba left Fennec to sort out the person involved with killing his tusken family at the end of the show, then she anticlimactically just leaves through the door. I addressed that with an alternate ending idea which might interest you.

I Have my own edit that frames Cad Bane as the one who was hired to kill the tuskins, which is why he takes so much pride in taunting boba about it. I altered the convo so go as follows:

Boba: “I will only negotiate with the head of the Pyke Synidcate.”

Cad: NEW AI LINE “You mean the one who hired me to murder your tuskin family”.

This way Boba gets his vengeance and ties Cad into the main story.

I love this. Way better. Can you PM me a link?

Its still a work in progress lol the ai voice generator i used wasn’t the best but If anyone wants to use this idea go right ahead i would love for it to be realized in a better executed way than i have it.

I’ve not finished your book 2 as yet so can’t compare but one thing in the BoBF that bothered me was that Boba left Fennec to sort out the person involved with killing his tusken family at the end of the show, then she anticlimactically just leaves through the door. I addressed that with an alternate ending idea which might interest you.

I Have my own edit that frames Cad Bane as the one who was hired to kill the tuskins, which is why he takes so much pride in taunting boba about it. I altered the convo so go as follows:

Boba: “I will only negotiate with the head of the Pyke Synidcate.”

Cad: NEW AI LINE “You mean the one who hired me to murder your tuskin family”.

This way Boba gets his vengeance and ties Cad into the main story.

Please cut the stab wound somehow. Tired of Qui-Gon death having less and less impact.

Check out this mandalorian fan edit trailer! https://youtu.be/kQUiHTCTSi0

Check out this mandalorian fan edit trailer! https://youtu.be/kQUiHTCTSi0

Check out this mandalorian fan edit trailer! https://youtu.be/kQUiHTCTSi0

Check out this edit trailer for the mandalorian! https://youtu.be/kQUiHTCTSi0

smudger9 said:

And here is the opening… crawl text is always tricky, so opinions and suggestions would be appreciated.

The Razorcrest rotoscoping still needs tidying.

https://vimeo.com/549787287

I’d leave out the reveal of Gideon Surviving until later. Maybe mention Mando getting info about a Mandalorian in Moss Pelgo so the convo with Peli flows from the intro.

In this edit, how is Dr. Pershing found? You fixed the issue of finding the ship without the extra episode. But is there an explanation as to how the crew is able to track down the doctor?

Stay safe out there my friend. All in good time!

On the topic of Beskar, when the mando squad are taking the gizanti cruzer why is it that mando is the only one who can run toward the troopers and deflect their fire and the others are “pinned down”.

fair enough thanks guys, here’s another one. So Boba’s armor is now canonically beskar yes? if so how does his jetpack malfunction from a staff on jabbas barge but Din’s can take a lightsaber hit?

I might be wrong here but in the finale, Cara Dune says her "gun is jammed. Is it just me or have they never referred to blasters as guns. later in the episode Moff Gideon even says “drop the blaster”. I personally found it distracting. Maybe you could trim some of these hallway blaster scenes?

Snoke in a bottle. Here we go, it’s starting to make connections to the disjointed mess that is the sequel trilogy. Personally, I would alter the music to play Palpatine’s theme instead of Snoke’s and do some slight VFX alterations (maybe even alter the tube from blue to red or something). Trim the mentioning of midiclorians (m count). Other than that it was a pretty good episode.

Here is a link to an edit I did of Din and Peli meeting again on Tatooine. Reducing the familiarity with the child and putting more of the focus on their history. Din clearly has a history with Tatooine (knowing Tuskin speak and has “spent much time there”. So I figured let’s just roll with it. I’m not usually a fan of off-screen history (Ch.6 the prisoner) but in this case, it is the only way I can see keeping most of the dialogue without cutting it completely or having to watch a side adventure episode (Ch.5 the gunslinger). I also trimmed a bit of the dialogue that seemed a bit bloated and unneeded.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1hLIAY3DZzfeo-Uj73pvTqOCsWNZyXQ8M/view?usp=sharing