Okay, I have finished season 1. Here follows my feedback with the versions I watched.
s01e05 - The 501st Legion (v2.3)
I think that the story of the domino squad is cut short. How do they move up from a failed team to real troopers? It feels like there is this unanswered matter.
s01e07 - The Death Watch (v2.1)
I think Ahsoka’s punishment should be removed from the start and perhaps moved to the end of the previous episode, because it’s not really relevant to the episode, but it is relevant to the previous one. And episode 9 later on.
s01e08 - Children of Night (v2.1)
Maybe this has been brought up earlier, but this should come later. It’s visible that Anakin and Obi-Wan are dressed differently and thus it’s a posterior event.
s01e10 - The Future of the Force (v2.1)
The final scene is out of context and completely unnecessary. It feels like the lightsaber comment from Ahsoka should have some previous node, which is not the case, and Ahsoka’s motivation are not clear here, except to show the children, which seems… uh… maybe the word is… gratuitous? I don’t know, it just doesn’t fit, in my opinion.
The rest I’ve found to be an enjoyable experience, and much of the fat is indeed gone. Good work!
I’ll be back for the review of season 2.