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The Prequels: Missed Opportunity #7102636892 by George Lucas
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JoeyJoeJoeJr. said:

 

Obi-Wan: You Sith bastard! Has your new dark master warped your mind so badly that you would kill the woman you love whom is carrying your child?

Anakin: My child?! I saw what happened between you two when we were on Planet X!

Obi-Wan: Unlike you, Anakin, I have not so willfully abandoned my Jedi Knighthood. I'll admit to being tempted, but I never gave in to my desires. I don't think you can say the same.

Anakin: Liar! You two have been conspiring against me all this time! Trying to keep me from reaching my full potential! Well my new master has nurtured me and now I am even more powerful than you... or any of the Jedi for that matter!

Obi-Wan: Your arrogance has gotten you into trouble before, my young Padawan. Don't fool yourself thinking this time will be any different.

Anakin: *Evil laugh* Padawan?! You insult me for the last time, [sic] Master. After I am finished with you, I will erase any memory of the Jedi from the galaxy. My master and I will let no one stand in our way!

 

Then as Obi-Wan delivers what he figures to be a killing blow, lopping off both of Anakin's arms and a blow to the back rendering his legs useless. It could also be an excuse for his trouble breathing and why he eventually gets his signature breathing apparatus as Vader.

 

Obi-Wan: Forgive me, Anakin. I never wanted it to end like this. (Holding his lightsaber at Anakins throat)

Anakin: Nonsense! (coughing) It's what you wanted all along! To steal Padme away from me! Well I stole her away from you just now, didn't I? (choking and coughing up blood a little)

Obi-Wan: My duty is to kill any Sith I encounter without any hesitation. (Retracts his lightsaber). Instead I will let you die slowly, not because I am cruel, like you. No, I will allow you to live just a little while longer because I once loved you like a son. You will never know that feeling, because of your contempt for innocent life. First you slaughtered our younglings and then you killed Padme along with your unborn child. I want to give you a chance before you draw your final breath to reflect on why she came to you. She still saw some good in you, Anakin. She thought she could save you. (Kneels closely to Anakin and whispers). The only thing you stole from me was my faith in you... that you were the chosen one.

Then Obi-Wan returns to the ship, realizes Padme is barely clinging to life, they get to the

Jesus Christ you have better writting than a film writer!!! That shows how wooden Georges writing is. that was really good!